Now I know we already finished Loud n Secret but Marvelomac1010 wanted to make an updated version of the original story
Like add a few scenes change up a couple of scenes as well as change up some of the characters and add more lore and drama and even a song number as well
Now this doesn't mean we're deleting the original Loud n Secret story it's still gonna be up we're just gonna make a better version of it hope you enjoy this rewrite updated version of Loud n Secret
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In a small town in Michigan, there's a place called Royal Woods. It was a Friday morning and at the Elementary School, we see kids walking out of the building. We then see three kids walking out of the school. They are Lincoln Loud, Clyde McBride, and Jordan Rosato.
Lincoln Loud was an 11-year-old boy that has 10 sisters and two parents. He had gone through so many adventures with them, and it may be a little bit chaotic, but he wouldn't trade it for the world.
Clyde McBride was the best friend of Lincoln. Anything Lincoln does, he does as well. They had been best friends since they met on Halloween and since that day, the duo was called Clincoln McLoud, though they dropped the nickname because it sounds like a shipping name. They were still best friends though. He along with his Dads, Howard and Harold McBride, are good friends with the Loud family.
Jordan Rosato, who was formally known as Girl Jordan but when Boy Jordan moved away, she got the Jordan name back. She's feared in Dodge Ball. She and her parents, Rick and Jesse Rosato, are quite rich. Her father owns the largest shipping company in the world, the Rosato Shipping Company.
Lincoln and Jordan are also boyfriend and girlfriend. They got together during summer after Lincoln's friend, Ronnie Anne moved away. After a few dates, they became a couple, and both of their families supported them.
The three kids were walking to the Loud House. They had just received an assignment by Mrs. Johnson, to share their own birth story. It was due next Friday and even though they had time, they wanted to get an early head start.
"Thanks for coming along to help me find my baby books, it might have taken longer for me to find it on my own," Lincoln said to his friends.
"No problem Lincoln," Clyde told his best friend, "We're best friends and I'm not letting you search for your baby books alone."
"Exactly!" Jordan nodded in agreement, "And there was no way you gonna do this alone. You're my boyfriend and I want to help out as best as I can!"
Lincoln let out a little chuckle, "Just like how you managed to help me with my Dodge Ball skills and now we both rule the gym?" Lincoln asked.
"Well, sort of like that," Jordan said with a chuckle, "By the way Lincoln do you even know how you were born? My parents told me how I was born, and you'll find out how next week."
"Uh, not really no," Lincoln said shaking his head, "My parents didn't tell me about it, but they always seemed nervous, which was weird and confusing."
"We're about to find out, because we're here," Clyde said as they head towards the Loud House.
When they went inside, they see Luna Loud, Lincoln's third older sister, Legal Guardian, the Rockstar and loudest of the family. With her was her girlfriend Sam Sharp, they were just playing on their acoustic guitars.
"Oh, hey little bro," Luna said as she saw her brother and his friends coming in the house.
"What up little dudes?" Sam greeted as well.
"Hey Luna, hey Sam," Lincoln greeted his sister and her girlfriend and then he looked around the house. "Uh sis, where the heck are the others?"
"Oh, they all had plans when school was finished," Luna answered "So I'm just chilling here with my babe."
"So how was School for you guys? Any assignments?" Sam asked.
"Actually, we do," Jordan spoke up "We have to give an assignment about how we were all born."
"Yeah," Clyde nodded in agreement "So we're here to help Lincoln look for his baby books."
Luna and Sam's eye's widened in shock when they said that. They both have a look of nervous, concerned and worried. Lincoln Clyde and Jordan could see it within them.
"Uh sis, are you okay?" Lincoln asked.
"Huh? What? Oh, sorry it's nothing. Don't worry about it," Luna reassured her little brother "Just... good luck on your search."
"Um, okay then," Lincoln said as he and Jordan shared a glance, "Well, we're going to the attic now."
Lincoln, Jordan and Clyde headed upstairs but Lincoln could tell that something was up with Luna and Sam. Like they were hiding something, but he decided not to push it.
Luna watched as the kids went upstairs and looked down in sadness. Sam could see that her girlfriend was feeling upset and couldn't really blame her.
"Lunes, are you okay?" Sam asked.
"No, I'm not Sammy!" Luna said shaking her head, "Lincoln has to look for his baby books for that assignment!" she sighed and then looked down in sadness, "Which means he's about to find out the truth."
Sam then hugged her girlfriend and said, "I know how you feel, but you and I knew that he would find out eventually."
"Yeah, I know," Luna nodded as she wiped away her tears, "I just didn't think that it would be this soon."
(Attic)
"Alright guys," Lincoln said as he Jordan and Clyde arrived in the attic, "Let's go through all of these boxes and see if we can find the baby books."
Clyde and Jordan nodded and then the three kids started to go through all of the boxes for Lincoln's baby books.
"Hey Lincoln, question: did you notice that something seemed off about Luna and Sam?" Jordan asked, "Because they seemed nervous and concerned when we mentioned about our assignment."
"Yeah, I did," Lincoln nodded in agreement, "I don't know what that was all about."
"You think their hiding something?" Jordan asked.
"I don't know," Lincoln shrugged, "But we'll handle that later. Right now, we need to find my baby books."
Jordan nodded in agreement, and they continued searching. Though Lincoln was wondering what was going on with his sister. The way she acted when they told them what they were doing. Almost like there was something that she didn't want them to know.
"Hey Lincoln, I found the baby books," Clyde called out which snapped Lincoln out of his trance.
"Great, now let's find my baby book," Lincoln said.
Lincoln, Clyde, and Jordan went through a bunch of baby books of his sisters, Lori's, Leni's, Luna's, Luan's, Lynn's, and Lucy's and how they were born. Jordan and Clyde found them cute as babies.
"Your sisters were really cute babies, Lincoln," Jordan said.
"Yeah, and even though my crush on Lori has faded, she does look cute as a baby," Clyde admitted, "Though why does she have a pointy head and webbed feet?"
"I don't know, Clyde. Mom and Dad never told me," Lincoln said with a shrug, he then he noticed something at the bottom, he picked it up and he smiled, "Clyde! Jordan! I found my baby book!"
Clyde and Jordan went to Lincoln. They saw a picture in the center of the book, on it was Lincoln as a baby in a onesie and a white hat. He was also holding Bun Bun in his hands.
"Oh my God! Lincoln, you are so adorable as a baby!" Jordan said in awe.
"Heh heh, thanks Jordan," Lincoln said with a blush on his face. He opened the book, but when he got to the page that said Birth Story, the pages were completely blank, "What the heck? Why is my birth story blank? What's going on?"
"Did your parents forget to take pictures of your birth story?" Clyde asked.
"No, they didn't," Lincoln shook his head in denial, "They always take pictures of us, when we were babies, this doesn't make any sense!"
"Well, now what do we do?" Jordan asked she then leaned on one of the boxes which caused it to slide and her to almost fall, but she then noticed something behind one of the boxes, "Hey guys, you might want to check this out."
Lincoln and Clyde got up and they went to Jordan and helped her move some of the boxes. When they did, they saw a box that said "Keep Out" in the middle of it.
"What do you think is in there?" Clyde asked.
"I don't know, but I don't like it," Lincoln said.
"Well only one way to find out," Jordan said as she went to open the box.
When she did, they all saw pictures of Lincoln as a baby in a hospital, but they saw him with two adult women. One was in her late 20s with brown hair in a pixie cut style and was little bit long in the back, reaching her neck. She had crescent shaped earrings, wore black knee torn jeans, purple boots, a purple t shirt with a logo in the middle and a long purple jacket.
The other woman was also in her late 20s but had blonde hair with a blue streak that was tied up in a spiky ponytail, musical note shaped earrings. She was also wearing a light blue jacket and a white polo shirt with the same logo as the other woman, black knee torn jeans and velvet boots.
But what really caught their eyes was that the two women looked like older versions of Luna and Sam. That really shocked and confused them.
"So, now you all know the truth," the kids turned around and saw Luna and Sam standing right behind them, "We're sorry you had to find out this way, Lincoln," Luna told her brother.
"What the hell is all of this?!" Jordan asked.
"This is really freaking me out you guys!" Clyde said anxiously.
Lincoln stood up and went towards the two rocker teens, "Luna, Sam what's going on? Why are all of my baby pictures in this box and not in my baby book? What did you mean by, 'you had to find out this way?'"
Luna looked at Sam who gave her a nod. Luna stepped towards her brother, "Lincoln, I just want to let you know that I love you and you mean the world to me, but everything you know is a lie. Everything Mom and Pops told you is all false."
That just got Lincoln even more confused, "What? I don't understand! What's going on? What are you talking about, sis?!"
Luna took a deep breath and gave Lincoln a serious look, "Lincoln, I'm not your sister... I'm your real mother!"
