Ok, This is a new story, hopefully with a better plot,
Disclaimer: I dont own naruto, nor the various other animes that might have an idea or two edited from it to fit into my story. this is purely fan-made.
Hundreds of years pass, and many things are forgotten, But somethings might be uncovered from the past, while others...will uncover themselfs.
Of these things their are Dark and evil and light and pure, Holding more power then the famous ninja said to have the sages eyes, But only because of their combined power, The story of three lords, seeking to make themselfs one with their god to serve him or her, they foolishly left behind their bodies while their souls departed, the empty husks over time gaining the ability to think, and free-will.
These empty husks would also slowly gain power over the years, until one day all three were killed, their power sealed away, locked deep in a city hidden in a forest, hidden in the leafs, and thats where our story picks up, on the day of a certain seals breaking.
(7 Years later, Kyuubi attack)
All the ninjas of Konoha were at the ready, having little time to prepare for the battle ahead, their fealless leader, the fourth hokage, Standing at the front lines. The full moon lighting the area dimly.
As the nine-tailes beast attacked the village, it was driven back to an area a few miles away from the village to reduce death of citizens, many ninjas casting nin-jutsus of various elements only for their attacks to be batted away like flys, and sent flying by a tail, or ripped in half by a clawed paw.
Finally, The strong leader, standing on a summon of his, Stood before said demon, a stand-off, the demons tails lashing out behind it, tearing the forest apart slowly just from being near it, the Blond man would begin to do a complex set of hand signs, before finally a blinding light would engulf the two momentairly, then the beast would be gone, replaced with the smoking remains of a crator.
Sadly, the man was not well, his skin begin to pale, as his summon dispursed, his summoner no longer having enough chakra to keep him in this plane.
The mans body would be found by his mentor, which would then do as they had planned, taking the sealed scroll to a newborn child,the fourths new-born child, and begin to transfer the monster into the infant.
As the seal faded to black and finally away the new-born finally went to sleep, whisker marks appearing on his cheeks, and all around the town cheers would be heard as the fact they had won finally sunk in...
But what no one knew was, when that flash had gone off, it had releashed a very different kind of chakra, mixed with the demons and the chakra of a death-gods and humans, weaking a certain seal to let three souls out into the night, which were pulled into the new seal, then transfered into the body of a new-born...
OK. What did you think? I think this has a much better plot, should i make this into an actual story, or just stick to reading and reviewing?