Well...I'm not sure how to say this, but, it's pretty clear from the hiatus this story has been on its pretty much through.
I have both lost the plot that this story was following, and, due to my improved writing, find that when I was attempting to write this my level of skill was, to put it lightly, poor.
I'm not sure if I will try my hand at writing again, as I don't normally get ideas for plots, and as i'v said before in some of my reviews..I'm a reader, not a writer. I can notice the grammar mistakes of others...but putting together an intricate tale, one that changes the canon plot of something while also keeping to the general ideas a character had?
Not in my writing ability.
If you would like to attempt to fix this story, feel free to notify me, and i'll tell you the plot it was going to follow, as I'v love to see how it would turn out in the hands of a competent writer.
Aside from that, not much else to say.
Goodnight/day.