Strawberry manic chapter2!

So here we are with the second chapter right?.Sounds like I hope the first chapter was enough of a introduction about why Shizuma thinks cars should only go beep,and also the new *guy* in Strawberry panic,although yes this is a girl anime and we have never seen a guy in it and I am breaking a few rules here.

But hey if your reading this and you dont like guys in a girl anime then stop reading,if you want to complain,complain it isnt going to make a difference.

The final note and I mentioned it before in chapter 1,but this takes place around the time when Nagisa comes,and since this is a guy coming in then hes gonna screw up the plot somewhere and maybe everything will be different.

Will explosive pigs with turbans fly?,I dont think so but Im not ruling anything out.

Any part/pov that doesnt have a name on it or is not a girls name is the moderators name(since I havent figured out a word yet).Text like this for the pov is the characters thoughts,and for the guy its his thought.


I stood outside the gate for about 10minutes and nothing happened,so I decided to take a walk to a nearby bunch of smell was quite pleasant and maiden like,I picked up a flower and decided to take a look at it.Hmm theses flowers are pretty rare,sounds like this place does have a rare quality to it.

Sitting down and taking a good look at the majestic lake which was before me,I slowly began to realise that I wasnt was this reddish haired girl on the opposite side of the tree and she had noticed me.Do I need to do the gentlemenly thing and help her on her way?.

"Hey are you lost?"I summoned up the courage to ask the girl,it took her a moment to register and she seemed confused for a few seconds.

"No Im just strolling around really!"She seemed quite hyped.At least someones enjoying themselves."That makes two of us then!"I laughed along with her.

"So why are you here then?"She asked a direct question and I wasnt sure how to respond.

The girl touched her hair and blushed slightly before responding."Im a new student but as you see,I dont have my uniform,you?"She giggled before sliding back her fringe.If this is a joke then I dont get it.

"Im a student moderator,here to assess the school"She seemed slightly shocked at this and was about to open her mouth before a another woman,this time a well developed one with silver hair,came stomping into the scene.Is something wrong here,oh right I was supposed to be at the gate...damm.


SHIUMZA POV.

After waiting at the opened gates for a few minutes and looking like a fool,Shizuma decided to go on her daily walk/stalk other her duties as Etoile are always sometimes in the way.

They came in the way when she found her next VICTIM/"new student to rape",unfortunatly the new girl,wasnt the only one sitting next to a tree.

"WHAT THE HELL IS A MAN DOING HERE"!The well developed girl shouted at the boy who didnt notice her arrival.Has this world gone mad?.She walked up to the guy and was about to hit him when something made her stop.He is kinda hot though,maybe I can just let this slide and...

"Excuse me but are you the Etoile?"The guy to Shizumas suprise he knew what the Etoile was.

"Yes and Ive come to rape girls...I mean look for the moderator".Etoile replied.

The guys expression stiffened and he chuckled.

"Is there something wrong with being a guy?and I am the moderator".

"But...this is a all girls school and men arnt allowed".Shizuma whispered.

"Oh right but since you say men then it replies to over 18s and Im not a adult so I think Im fine".The guy replied before standing up and strapping his backpack on.

"Ill have to clear this with the school council".The silver haired teen replied,slightly confused.

"Fine but this comes from way high so I wouldnt bother."The moderator said,walking onwards towards the gate.

"Oh and can you show that red haired girl around..thanks"He replied before somehow disappearing into the distance.

Its rape time.Shizuma thought before preparing to pounce on her next victim,but as always the duties of Etoile are there to stop people from having fun.

"Hey Etoile,council meeting!".A female voice shouted,and the girl rapiest/Shizuma walked off with a slightly confused Nagisa in tow.


I walked towards the open gate,and held out my education department pass (and the fact that I wasnt a adult),before continuing.Man that "Etoile"girl is really pretty,but what was she going to do to that other girl?.


Yep so we managed to screw up the first epiosode of Strawberry panic already!.I feel proud.

Dont forget to rate and review!.

Also someone do my a favour and before the 24th of decemeber,give me a name that I put the guys name on becuase I have no clue.

See you next chapter!