Gundam SEED: Cosmic Try Fighter

by HunterQwon

Fumina receives a very generous gift for her birthday. A Virtual Reality gaming pod with two seats. She and her mother decide to try it out together, but something happens, and the mother and daughter find themselves flung into the brutal world of the Cosmic Era. The ship and the crew they had selected are more than just numbers and codes. Every decision matters. Kira Y.XFumina H.

1. Author's Note

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What's up everyone! As you can probably tell, this is not a chapter of the story to come. What I do want from you is some suggestions. Now, in the last few stories of this type, you've seen that I like to mix and match different technologies from different fanbasings. First time, I used the Yamato from Star Blazers.

Then I kind'a got myself stuck because I watched Gundam 00 and fell in love with the series itself, so I wanted to incorporate the Gundams from that Era. Still do. But I also added a starship from Macross.

This time...?

Star Wars.

Si, si, I know that's a little out there...in a galaxy far far away. But I still wanna do this SEED/Try Fighters story, and I wanna do it right so that I can enjoy writing it, and I can enjoy all of you who read it enjoying it.

So I've been doing my research, but most of the starships in SW seem a little...GRANDE! Survey says that an ISD can hold/carry up to 186 mobile suits, whether those are Gundams or lesser mobiles suits like the Daggers or the Jinxes makes no difference, plus the crew that is needed is over several hundred if not over a thousand hands. (I have a way to work around that, I think.)

So basically, I need a Star Wars starship that small enough that it doesn't need a truly massive crew to make it work, but big enough that it will carry at least several mobile suits, and star fighters.

Another thing that happened in the second version of my SEED/Try Fighters story was the fact that I introduced Fumina as a difference race of humanoid alien. I used the Vagan name from AGE, but I thought about all the human-like extraterrestrials from Macross, and this is where the Star Wars ideas hit me. I wanna keep the Vagan name, however I thought about giving them a language all of their own. (Yes/No/Maybe?)

Now there are some alien races in the Gundam series. One in particular. The ELs. Now in both versions of the story, Fumina, and anyone that was brought into the Cosmic Era from another universe has blue blood, and a sort of nanomachine technology that will heal them if they're injured, and also has the added effect of, well, infecting another with those machines and turning the infected's blood blue as well.

Doing some research on the ELs was a little difficult, because, though the Trail Blazer movie was great, they had little info on the ELs as a race save for the fact that they assimilated other organisms to understand them, and gave humans that bonded with an extensively longer life, just like becoming an Innovator did.

So that will still be in play. I know a lot of people liked it, and just as many didn't. To those that did like it, gracias, to those that didn't, perdon.

Anyway, that's where I wanna take my characters, basically.

So lets talk about the machines. I still wanna use Anno Domini Gundams and machines. But that's where I wanna ask: Should the machines of Anno Domini replace those of the Cosmic Era? Should their technology be incorporated into the Cosmic Era machines (Basically, GN powered SEED verse ships, and mobile suits)?

This is where I really need the input.

Now onward. Villains. We all know that Rau was a real piece of work for good reason. Clone/Coordinator, and basically having his life shortened as an experiment. And then Patrik Zala's revenge fueled war against Naturals because of the death of his wife. But we never got far enough into either one of my stories to see just who the real bad guy was. What I mean is who the hell yanked Fumina and the fam into the Cosmic Era?

Well, this came to me while watching another Build Fighter's anime. Stop me if you've heard this one before: An angry A.I. program that comes up with the idea of turning itself into a real threat because it wasn't supposed to exist and was set for deletion. However it can't do much while trapped inside a game, so it comes up with the idea of taking control of a human. Enter our main protagonist, Fumina Hoshino. Young, strong, knowledgeable, slightly influential among her peers. The goal? Revenga against those that created it, and possibly world domination?

Si, the name of the main desperado in this fic is none other than the mad A.I. Alus.

He'll have his own forces just like in the second version like Hashmal, Legillis, and other powerful mobile weapons. They'll basically be mobile dolls.

All in all, I'd like to hear your opinions, ideas, all of it that could help me make this story work, cause I wanna make this story work. Until then, as always. Adios Amigos!