Hawaii 5.0

For those unfamiliar with the series;

Steve McGarrett, a Marine, is the commander of an Elite 5.0 police unit. They have the immunity to do what they want, without necessarily respecting the usual. Daniel Williams "Danny or Danno" is his lieutenant, he is also his best friend. Although divorced, he is still in love with the mother of his daughter Grace. She will give him a son Charlie after a brief reconciliation. Steve acts as an honorary uncle for Grace, Charlie is not seen much on the show. Kono and Chin are cousins and complete the team. Steve and Danny are hilarious, they act like a couple, they bicker a lot, and Danny admires Steve who he thinks is as strong as Superman. They would die for each other. I discovered and watched the series while reading AvaWaverly's Fanfiction and fell in love with it. I recommend them to you as my fiction is based on the episode "Po'ino" season 5 episode 12.

I hope you have as much fun reading it as I had writing it.

A Bad For A Good

"Lengthen your stride and don't forget to breathe well, okay? A little more there, now speed up, we speed up, lengthen your stride Grace! Go, go go! Go ahead you can do it!"

"It's good!" Steve looks at the stopwatch on his watch.

"That's called running ten miles an hour! Congratulations, honey!" He checked her hand. As Grace doubled over to recover.

"The President's Contest Medal is already around your neck, trust me."

"I trust you because last year the race didn't go well."

"Forget last year. This year will be different."

"Thanks for your help, Uncle Steve. Danno says what he hates even more than swimming is running."

"Don't worry about your father. I'm afraid to imagine what he'll be like when he's a grandfather!"

"That's why!" Grace laughed. Grace's eyes were drawn by a noise on the road.

"Uncle Steve? Looks like the same car as yours." Steve turned his head as well.

"Oh god, that's my car! Listen to me, don't move from here. Don't talk to anyone, okay? Don't move from here!"

"Promise"

Steve started running after his car.

"Hi Grace"

"Hi Alani"

"What are you doing?"

"I run with my uncle."

"Where is he?"

"He's chasing his car."

"I'm going to the park, down the street, are you coming?"

"No, my uncle told me to stay here."

"It's only five hundred yards, and you always do what your uncle tells you?"

"No, but…. "

"Come on, Kimo will be there, you like him..." And Alani pulled Grace by the hand. "Your uncle will come to find you."

Meanwhile, Steve abandons his race.

"Hello? This is Commander Steve McGarrett, I would like to report my car stolen, I want all units to be on the lookout for it…."

Steve went back to get Grace. She wasn't there anymore. His heart jumped in his chest.

"Grace!" cried the man.

Steve tried to calm down and be rational. No tire marks on the ground, he hadn't seen a car zoom past except his own.
He saw a group of children going down the street with rollerblades, he decided to follow them.
The second he got to the park, he spotted Grace. Relief washed over him, immediately replaced by immense anger.

"Grace!" He growled. "Come here!" He was boiling with anger.

"Uncle Steve!" Grace flinched when she saw his furious face.

"What didn't you understand about 'Don't move from here?" growled Steve.

"I was going to stay, but Alani came by, I thought five hundred yards would be fine" she tried.

"Well, I'm going to make it clear to you that it was wrong!" Said the man. He was struggling to control his anger. He felt like putting her on his knee right there.

"Let's go! Now if you want some privacy." He started to leave. Grace followed.

"Uncle Steve, I'm sorry!"

"Sorry isn't enough! Do you know how scared I was finding you missing?!"

A little further, Steve saw a tree stump, hidden behind some bushes. Instead of sitting down, he put his left foot on it. Thus, with his body, he would hide Grace if someone happened to walk by.

"Look at me, Grace." She looked up, her eyes already wet with tears.

"Please Uncle Steve, don't spank me," she pleaded.

Steve had to harden his heart to go through with it.

"Grace, your father and I have a dangerous job, what if I saw a bad guy and told you not to move? We need immediate obedience, you know that, and today, you deliberately disobeyed me and I couldn't stand it if you were hurt because of it. Do you understand?"

"You can't punish me for something that didn't happen! There was no bad guy!"

"Fortunately!" Steve replied. "That's answering me back, my decision is made and I'm not changing my mind, it will be one more blow and you just lost your shorts. Come here."

He picks Grace up and puts her over his knee. He pulls her shorts down to her knees, leaving her panties in place, giving her a little leniency since they weren't in her room. He raises his hand and forcefully lowers it five times. on the little behind in front of him.

"Ouch!" Grace immediately began to cry. Steve had a tough hand and he knew it.

"When I tell you to stay put, you stay put! Even if a tsunami is approaching! Do you understand me?"

"Yes, sir! Excuse me, I will obey!" she cried.

Steve lowered his hand three more times hard, Grace's buttocks were reddened.

He applied eight, Grace's age. That was Danno's limit, no matter what the child had done.

"Alright little girl, we would be finished if you hadn't answered back, but you have one more to come."

The man lowered his hand one last time, with determined force causing the child to scream on his knee.
He rocked her in his arms and gave her a moment to calm down against him.

"Oh, Grace! I was so scared!" Grace clung to him with all her might for comfort.

"I know. I'm asking your forgiveness. I'm sorry Uncle Steve, I won't disobey you again, even if they offer me a million dollars!"

"Good!, I hope you've learned your lesson. Shall we go home?"

"Are you going to tell Danno? Is he going to spank me too?"

"You know I'm going to tell him. It's up to him if he wants to spank you."

"Grace, when we arrive, I want you to go up to your room immediately to wait for your father."

"Yes, Uncle Steve."

"So my champion? You broke the world record?" Danny asked.

The man then saw Steve's eyes, his daughter's wet cheeks, and stiff gait. Steve had obviously spanked her. Steve rarely spanked.

"Go to your room Grace" Steve ordered. Grace immediately obeyed.

"What happened? Did you spank her?"

"Yeah," Steve told his best friend what happened.

"You shouldn't have left her alone in the first place!" Danny raised his voice slightly.

"Daniel, we need immediate obedience! We can't tolerate disobedience when we tell her not to move. She's not four years old. It could be a matter of life and death! I'm not at fault here, Grace is."

"You're right. Excuse me. Do you want me to add more?"

"She's your daughter, you decide if you want to add more, but know that I've been pretty stern. I want you to talk to her and repeat your expectations of immediate obedience."

Danny went up to Grace's room and placed her in front of him between his knees.

"Are you going to spank me too daddy?"

"Do you understand why Uncle Steve was so harsh on you?"

"Yes, I will obey what you order, I swear! Even if there is a tsunami, I won't move!" Grace said repeating Steve's lesson.

"Okay. I'm going to reinforce your Uncle Steve's lesson anyway because I'm your father and I need to make sure you obey immediately in the future."

Danny pulled down his little girl's shorts and panties. Her buttocks were already reddened by Steve. He laid her face down over his knees. He reached up and slapped the bare little ass in front of him.

"Oh! I'm sorry Daddy! I'll obey!"

Danny hoped that the feeling of stripping her down to add a spanking would be enough to reinforce the lesson.

"I'm very sorry Dad."

"I forgive you, but Grace? Look at me." He waited for his daughter to look up.

"If this lesson has to be repeated, I'll take my belt off your bare ass, I don't care if Uncle Steve already spanked you. Do you understand me?"

"Yes, Dad."

"Well, come give me a big hug! Do you know I love you?"

"I know. I love you too Danno." And she hugged him.

After arresting and charging a child killer named Walter Russel, Steve thought he'd breathe a little, he'd had a tough day. Punishing Grace had been difficult, he rarely did it. He usually left that part to Danny, but he had to react immediately.

The day was not over, his phone rang.

"Commander? We found your car and its thief, we caught him at the homeless camp on the beach, according to the prints, it's him."

"Very well, I happen to have him waiting for you in my office."

Steve was going to punch that criminal!

He walked into his office pissed off, ready to strike, but he changed his mind immediately when he saw a teenager sitting in front of his desk. He had his head down, he was crying, and he was dirty and visibly hungry. The heart inside Steve tightened.

"Look at me." He said softly. He waited for the child to obey, which he did immediately.

"What's your name?"

"Nahele"

"How old are you?"

"I just turned fifteen."

"I need to phone your parents."

"My mother is dead and my father is in prison." This reinforced Steve's feeling that this young boy was alone.

"When was the last time you ate?"

"I don't know," the child replied honestly.

Steve pulls some money from his wallet.

"Officer?" Please go buy him some clothes and something to eat."

"Yes, Commander."

Steve sighed. What was he going to do with this child?

"I'm sorry, I swear, I've never stolen anything before, it's just that; I was so hungry!"

"How long have you been on the street?"

"Three months, they wanted to put me in a home when my mother died, but I couldn't bear it, so I ran away."

"Okay, for now, I want you to obey this officer, you will eat, wash and dress properly. Then I'll come back and we'll talk."

"Yes Sir, thank you."

Steve went to investigate with Kono and Chin, his teammates. He also had to think about what he was going to do with the child. He couldn't leave him on the street. This boy seemed really good and honest, life had not given him a present. He was so young. Fortunately, he had a strict father to keep him in line. Why was he thinking of himself as a father? Could he keep the child?

"Kono? Call social services and the judge please, I want to know my rights with the child, upload a guardianship document."

"Do you want to keep him?" Kono guessed.

"It's an option, nobody gave him a chance in life, I don't know, he has something that forces me to want to give him that chance".

"Does he want you to help him?" asked Kono.

"I don't know, but I'll give him the option."

"Chin? Call Kamekona and see if he can hire a boy to help him, and give him a small salary."

"Yes, boss. Steve?"

"Yes?"

"You are truly an exceptional man."

"Thank you, Chin, it remains to be seen if Nahele accepts. If he does, I must also give him consequences for his actions."

"Ouch," Chin replied.

At the end of the day, Steve went back to see the boy. If he accepted, their lives would change for both of them.

When Steve walked in, a washed, cleanly dressed, and fed boy was waiting anxiously outside his desk.

"Thank you very much," Steve said to the officer. He left the room leaving Steve alone with the child.

Steve put a document in front of the boy.

"Do you know what this is?"

"No sir."

"It's a theft and damage claim form, that's what you fill out for car theft."

"I understand sir, and when I get out of jail, I promise you I'll pay you back and..."

"I haven't finished Nahele, listen."

Steve put the document away.

"The only thing missing on there is my signature."

The child looked at him with wide eyes.

"I'm going to make you the proposal of your life. Okay?" He sat with his hands crossed on his desk.

"Here's what's gonna happen. We're gonna go around the body shops you and me and we're gonna get all the parts you sold. Then we're gonna put my car back together exactly like it was before you stole it from me. And As long as you stay on the right track, this complaint will remain in my drawer, without a signature. Do you understand?"

"Yes, thank you, sir."

"No, it's too early to thank me. I'll make you a second proposal. Do you know what this form is?" He put another form in front of the boy.

"No sir,"

"It's a form of guardianship. You don't want to go to foster care, and I can't put you back on the street. So I'm suggesting that I become your guardian until your father gets out of prison, I offer you a room and a little job on the beach."

"Why are you doing all this?"

"I don't know, I feel deep inside that I have to help you."

"Thank you, sir, but I don't want to live with my father, ever."

"We'll cross that bridge when he comes out. I have to tell you something else. The punishment I gave you for fixing my car is as commander of this unit. If I'm your guardian, I'll add a spanking to the equation. As your guardian, I cannot let you go without consequences. I am a fair man, but strict and rigorous. I want you to respect me and the rules that I will impose on you. The consequences of your misbehavior will not always be getting spanked. You can be punished in a different way, such as doing extra chores, going to bed early, or any other punishment I decide. Spanking is for serious transgressions. Stealing is at the top of the list along with lying, putting yourself or others in danger, and outright disobedience. I also offer you love, security, and comfort."

Nahele swallowed. "How are you going to do this? The spanking I mean,"

"Have you ever been spanked?"

"Yes, my father was kicking me in the stomach."

"That wasn't a spanking, it was abuse, something I'll never do, I promise. I agree you'll never go back to that man, I'll find a way, I promise. The spanking is only given on your buttocks or your thighs, naked or not, with my hand or my belt With a few exceptions, the slaps will never exceed your age. For this time, you lay over my knee, it will be ten slaps with my hand and five with my belt. Your shorts go down, but you can keep your underwear on. Those are your options, otherwise, it's going to live at the children's home.

"Can I live with you? I can have my own room? A real bed? Really?"

"Yes, you will also have your own bathroom and an always stocked fridge, a small part-time job, and the possibility of going back to school."

Nahele couldn't stop his tears from flowing.

"I take that as a yes," Steve said hugging the boy.

The child melted into the embrace, he had never been held by anyone, not even his mother. She was too busy drinking and doing drugs.

"My spankings are, with few exceptions (he thought of the spanking he'd given Grace that morning), administered in private. We're going home, I'll spank you after dinner, so don't get scared, I don't take you on my knees as soon as you walk through the door.

"Yes sir."

"The first step is buying more clothes, shoes, and toiletries."

Steve then showed his house to Nahele. The alarm code, the garage, the living room, the kitchen, the full fridge, the three bedrooms, and the two bathrooms. He had given Nahele his room.

"For now, your chores will be setting and clearing the table, I also want your bedroom and bathroom to be always tidy and spotless. Whatever you do, cooking or anything else, you clean up after yourself wherever you go. Disobey me and you will be punished.

"Yes sir."

Nahele felt safe, no one was going to try to rape him, beat him, or steal his shoes, clothes, or anything else while he slept. He could sleep soundly without fear. Steve was strict, but he was kind and fair to him. He took him off the street.

After dinner, Nahele's stomach was bouncing, a strange feeling of fear and apprehension.

Steve was muscular, it was going to hurt.

"Don't be afraid, It will be fine, I promise you," Steve said.

"In addition to being muscular like Superman, the man reads minds?" thought Nahele.

"Go to your room, I'll be there soon." Steve ordered firmly, snapping the child out of his thoughts. His tone of voice leaves no room for discussion. Nahele obeys.

The child's eyes and stomach jumped as he saw Steve enter the bedroom and close the door behind him. He unbuckled his belt and slipped it out of his trouser loops.

"Can't you change your mind?" tried the child.

"You will learn that I am a man of my word, I do not change my mind. I think you must have your father's abuse on your mind, a spanking has nothing to do with it, I promise. Trust me. Now come here." Steve ordered, sitting down on the desk, his left foot on the chair and his right on the floor.

Nahele swallowed but obeyed, looking down at his feet.

"My eyes are up here, boy, look at me," Steve ordered.

Nahele looked up.

"Tell me, why am I spanking you?" asked Steve.

"I stole your car and endangered myself and others."

"Yes, my boy, this is unacceptable."

Steve reached out and pulled down the kid's shorts, pulling him forward so he rested his stomach on his raised knee. As promised, he left the underwear on.

He reached up and slapped his hand on the behind in front of him. The child cried at the first slap, in silence.

Steve thought the child's feelings overwhelmed him more than the pain.

Yet after five slaps and a well reddened ass, Nahele made no noise, Steve was sure that his spanking was effective.

"You can cry and scream all you want Nahele, I won't be angry." Steve clarified.

At his words and with the next spank, Nahele cried out, finally.

"I'm sorry sir! Ouch! I will be good!"

Steve continued with the next five big smacks. The kid was yelling and apologizing with every slap.

Nahele heard his guardian grab his belt, folding it in half, the buckle firmly in his sure hand.

"You now have five licks with my belt. I want you to count them. You're not to ever steal!" Steve lifted his belt and lowered it over his boy's ass.

Slap! "Ahh man, one!"

Slap! "Two, sir!" Ouch! Sorry please, I'll be good!"

Slap! Three, sir!

"Tell me again why am I slapping your ass?"

"No flight." Slap! Steve pulled his belt a little harder. "Four, sir!"

"Yeah and?" Steve pushed.

"I shouldn't put myself or others in danger?"

"Are you asking me or are you telling me?"

"I'm telling you!"

"Yes!" Steve snapped the belt one last time, the hardest blow ever.

"OUCH! Five, sir! I'm sorry, thank you for punishing me!" the child cried.

Those last words caught Steve off guard.

"Very well, I forgive you Nahele. You paid for your mistake with me, now it's behind you and you move on."

Steve picked up the boy and hugged him tightly. Wait for him to calm down and stop crying. Nahele clung to him like a lifeline. After a few minutes, the boy stopped crying. Sniffling.

"Look at me boy" Steve waited for the child to obey. "I have eyes and ears all over this island. If I hear of an incident, if you go off the tracks, I'll know about it and that spanking will be like a walk in the park. Do you get me?"

"Yes sir, I understood that you were stern. Please take care of me and give me a hug, no one has ever done that. I will be good! You will see sir, I promise, you will see!".

"Okay. Save 'Sir' for when you get in trouble, otherwise, you can call me by my first name, "Steve". Come on boy, to bed."

"Good night Steve".

"Good night Nahele, sweet dreams. You are safe."

"I know. Thank you, Commander". Nahele liked this name, where Superman?...

He fell asleep immediately and soundly.

The next day, Steve and Danny met over a robbery case.

"I wonder who can climb that elevator cable with their bare hands in less than two minutes," says Steve.

"Besides Macgyver, Rambo, Superman, AND YOU? I do not know." Danno teased.

Steve's lips twitched into a slight smile.

"Yeah. What did you do with Grace at the end?" asked the man.

"I brought her to my knees and added a single smack on her bare ass. It was more to impress her than to punish her. I think she's learned her lesson."

"I think you did well. She expected you to add more. I would have done the same."

"How did it go with the kid?" Danny asked.

"Good. He reacts well to my authority and my rules. I think he needed stability and rigor."

"You're a good man Steve! You save this kid from an uncertain future, get him to help get your car fixed, get him a job, Superman may end up unemployed!"

"You think?"

"Do you know what you are?"

"I expect everything."

"You are a half-baked cookie; hard on the outside but soft on the inside."

Steve laughed.

"That's a good description."

"This kid was supposed to be sentenced and you saved him. That's why I love you! You know how to fix the mistakes in people's lives."

"I love you too Danno" Steve replied.

A little later after school.

"Danno? Uncle Steve? I have the gold medal! I won!" Grace proudly tells them.

"Well done champ!" Danny said hugging her.

"I promised you that you were ready," Steve said hugging her also.