Ok, so the first chapter was a rather young and stupid chapter...but here's where the fun begins.
I woke up in the dark. I heard nothing, saw nothing. Then I realized there was a lamp with an exposed bulb not too far away from me, and it was glowing dimly. Then I realized I wasn't even standing or laying down or anything. I was upside down. You had decided it would be fun to hang me by my feet. I smelled paint. I reached a hand to my face and brought it back. In the dim light there seemed to be blood on my hands. No it was only paint. But then I realized there was a mirror right below me. I saw in the dim light of that exposed bulb your face...only it was my face.
I had paint all over my face. My hair was tangled and green. I don't know why you did it...you just did.
I heard a large door open from somewhere.
"Ah, Jilly Bean! Glad to see you're ah, awake." You walked slowly over to me.
"What happens if I pull this lever?"
You pointed to a large black handle.
"I don't know." I said stupidly. I began to realize how stupid I was, how self righteous and oblivious to the fact that I was now probably going to die.
"Let's find out!" You pulled it and down I came, my arms breaking my fall before I could bust open my head.
You picked my hair up in a fist and yank my face up. I was dazed and crying.
"Awww, did that hurt? Why didn't you think of that before you called your father a smart-ass, huh? You just never thought about it Jilly! So now you get to. Let the punishment fit the crime, as that one guy said, I forget his name..." You fazed out. Then your eyes turned wild and you pulled out a colorful box.
"Gobstopper?" You held a piece of purple candy in your hand.
"No thank you." I said, trying to loosen the fist holding my hair.
"Sure?"
"Yes, I think so." I felt the fist tighten. I wince in pain.
"Fine...I think we'll play a little game. If you can tell me what I'm thinking, I'll let go of your little head of orange hair. If not, we get to stay here...for a very long time."
"How can I guess?"
"Lucky chance..."
"But that's not fair!"
"And getting everything you ever wanted is? You had so many years to have fun, get what you want and be the spoiled self-righteous little brat you were. I'm going to give you every thing you deserve; that is: nothing. You had everything. I'm here to have some fun! You are here to be the puppet and learn your lesson." I realized that I had no upper hand. I had no hand at all.
"For fucks sake, let me go. I don't want this."
"This isn't a negotiable matter. You chose this. I'm here for the fun."
"I don't want to get hurt."
"Then you should have stayed in your seat and eaten your chicken."
"Please."
"Hmm...let's see...nope! I'm going to have to start making a list of things you have to learn not to do, Jilly-Billy. It's gonna get scary...now, back to the game!" You tightened your fist.
"What am I thinking?"
"I don't know!" My head was starting to really hurt.
"I'll give you a hint; it's to do with you."
"You're thinking about how you're going to teach me a lesson."
"No."
"You're thinking about how you're going to kill me."
"Two strikes."
"My hair!" You had yanked it up a bit and so I yelled out.
"Good call, captain obvious, you get to keep your head. Lesson two. Language..." You smiled.
"What do you mean."
"If you fucking use the fucking word fuck every other fucking word it doesn't make anyone give a fucking fuck."
"I'm sorry."
"Not as sorry as you're going to be. Stick out you're tongue, Jilly..."
I did so. You put the gobstopper on my tongue.
"Put your tongue in, close your mouth." I did so.
"Why the hell are you giving me candy? That's just fucking-" but I didn't finish as you slapped me. I almost choked on the candy and I coughed. I spat it out.
"Oh, you shouldn't have done that." You picked it up and wiped I off, and then gave it back to me.
"No way."
"Yes way. You have to finish this candy Jilly-Bean." You took my jaw and forced me to open. You put that stupid candy in my mouth and closed my mouth again.
"You look rather good with this make-up." You smiled to yourself.
"Why are you doing this to me!"
"To teach you a lesson. See I knew you would decide to go with us. I needed you to because you are headed for grim endings. I took you because I knew you'd be fun to teach! See you're one of those schemers; one of those innocents who really aren't so innocent. You're here because I'm here and the reason we're both here is because you can't seem to realize how good you had it. And plus it's fun to listen to you complain when you have all your limbs and look perfectly fine. No scars on your face! No bodily imperfections whatsoever and yet you chose to be stupid and spoiled like you were." I opened my mouth, the candy was finally gone.
"Good." You left me standing there.
Why did I get myself into this mess?
would like to make a shoutout to Swishyfish2003:
thank you for your review it was actually quite helpful. Unfortunately not much really changed in the actual writing of the story, the plot is basically the same. However you will notice the summary has changed.
thank you to all reviewers!