Okay, I have to put this story on hiatus because 1. I'm on vacation and 2. I'm really really hurt by what my reviewer jes said. The other reviewer, guest, thank you! You were pretty nice, and understood that this is my FIRST HARRY POTTER FANFICTION. Jes, all I want you to know what you said hurt me deeply. You have no idea about how hard it is even to update at all. I know that it was just one small thing, but it was my first small thing. You could of said that you think my paragraphs need to be smaller, not turn that simple phrase into cyber bullying! So if it is not already clear: NO FLAMES ALLOWED (that's what we use in Percy Jackson and the Olympians fanfics anyway) bye :(