This isn't a chapter but more a 'behind the scenes' sorta section. . .
I came up with the idea for this story. . .Now that I'm writing this, I really don't remember. Great. What am I gonna write here now?
I know that the story was kind of odd, I mean, why on Reach would Noble Team be worrying about ONE CIVILIAN that was in ONE GLASSING like ANY OTHER glassing? It's far-fetched. Spartan IIIs are supposed to be sent on suicide missions, not babysitting missions.
The part where she was sick was boring, I know, but if you read my stuff on fictionpress you will realize I like to write about PAIN.
The ending was weak as well. She just walks away. And what happens to her sister? Maybe that will be a sequel, and then the third story will be they find each other?! OO Awesome beak, man.
Sorry if this was a waste of your time, but I need to get more out there to all of you.
This was my first fan fiction EVER. Obviously, I edited it, but most of the story is the same. Also, I started writing it on notepad which is THE WORST POSSIBLE writing program you can use. DON'T GET ME STARTED.
Someone told me the story was good 'cos it wasn't 'just another shooter', and that's what I value about it. We we've seen the Spartans play superhero, we've seen ODSTs jump into hell, we've read about Cortana's rampany Jorge KNOWS how many times. I wanted something different. I couldn't find it. So I gave it to myself.
I offer more, um, experiences in my other story 'a collection of recollections', and I kinda laugh at myself about that one. . .
If you enjoyed this story, I hope you continue to read my fan fics and give me feed back. Just don't be mean, cos "trust me. . .payback''s a bitch."