Hope you guys like the chapter and Labratsrock132 seriously not trying to be mean but this is starting to frustrate me all of your chapters have a lot of really simple mistakes and its starting to bug me trying to fix all of them...oh well on with the story...
Christina pov
I woke up to the sound of knocking on my door I walked over and opened the door to see Chase "Hey." I say "Hey I was wondering do you want to walk to school with me?" he asks YES! I said on the inside "Ya shur." I say "be back in 40 minuets." he says I nod he walks away and I close the door I take a 5 minuet shower take 5 more minuets drying off 5 more drying and curling my hair 6 to get dressed 15 minuets on make up and the rest of the time packing up I soon hear a knock on the door I opened it expecting Chase but instead I get slapped really hard I turn back to see joy "that's for trying stealing my guy." she says "He's not you guy your just using him." I say she then stomps away I walk to my mirror and see a bruze start to form Chase walks up to the door then runs to me "Oh my gods what happened?' he asks "Joy." I said he put's his hand in a fist "She'll pay." he says he runs out I'm guessing to find Joy I call Mis. Blanchard class "Hello?" I hear her soft voice say from the other side of the line "Hello um I'm gonna be out today." I say "Why Christina?" she asks "Umm I got outta the shower and hit the wall real hard so I'm gonna go to the doctors." I say "Ok." she says we both hung up I grabbed my bag and went to the front desk "Hey Ruby do you have any ice packs?' I ask she nods and gets me one "Here you go." she says I put it to my bruze "Thank you Ruby." I say "No problem." she says
Mean while Chase broke up with Joy
In the story(Note for Rocker: Can you do the part with the break up?)
Jazmine pov
I walked to the teris of the huge
palace I
live in I was never let outside except for right here "Hello Dearie." I hear some one say I turn to my left to see a man sitting on the rail "Who are you!" I Yell "Why I didn't introduce my self." he said he took a bow and said "Rumpelstiltskin" "What do you want?" I ask "No it's what you want and I can give it to you for a price." he says "I can give you your freedom." he says "for what?" I ask "Gold silver treasure?" I ask "No no no." he says "Keep your money I want you to do something for me I want you to destroy someone." he says "Who?" I ask he hands me a drawing "Lillyian Lavier is a monster and you need to find her and kill her." I look at the picture again "Deal." I say shaking his hand he than disappears and I'm in an ally "He makes no since." I say I look down to see a sword.
sorry for the mistakes this isn't one of the chapters I wrote...I did my best to fix the mistakes but i couldnt fix all of them... ;{/