Love's test

by munkedupjoe213

They have a family now - Ally, Alienelle, Alvin, and Bryon. But what's really something is how everything happened in less than a year into their relationship. But who cares? They're all extremely happy, and Alvin and Brittany are proud of themselves. But in every relationship, Love has a test, and theirs has yet to come. Sequel to Spring Break. Part 4 of "Love? What Is It" Series.

34. I don't mean to disappoint but-

Dear, ME (whoever you are, guest reviewer.)

Tell me something I don't know. Yes, I have noticed these imperfections. This story was messed up when it started, starting from the very first. But I already started this anyway, and it would be a shame if it comes out unfinished. That's why I want to end this as soon as possible, then maybe redeem myself with my new story.

But you did submit your criticism properly, so I'll bare no grudge.

Let me answer your complaints

1. This story will get worse than it is if Jean's babies die = My story, my plot.

2. This story will just get more boring than it is if Britt is the only one with children = This is mostly Alvittany. I just wrote the Simonette/Theonor because I ran out of ideas.

3. If you knew Britt and Alvin's relationship is a love/hate one = Yes, I do know that. But like I said, this story was messed up when it started. My next story is going to have more of that.

4. Your Alvin and Britt describes Simonette better = Wow, I thought it described a Theonor.

5. How come Britt's babies survive but Jean's die isn't that unfair you satisfied Alvittany fans but you heartbreak simonette fans What type of writer are you = What type of writer am I? let's see: I favor Drama, Family, Romance, Tragedy, and Hurt/comfort plots because they're easy too write, and they give the readers a burst of emotions. So I broke the heart of Simonette fans? Heartbreak was exactly what I was going for, so what's the problem?

Before you continue, please know that I know what the chipmunks' personalities are like. Life is a challenge, yes I agree. But this story must be the easiest one I've ever written - Well, except for the action parts. I suck at action.

I hope this reply doesn't offend you. If you read my next story, I promise to redeem myself.