a/n: In "The Man with the Twisted Lip", Doctor Watson takes a late journey to Upper Swandam Lane, to retrieve a friend and patient. I was struck by ACD's description of the opium den.

A roundel.

Holmes and companions do not belong to me.

POV of Watson (Holmes puts in a brief appearance.)


The Opium Den


A black-shadowed lane; a vile wharfside alley looms wretched at night.

A patient in need; an opium spell took his senses again.

Steep steps in the dark; a cautious approach to a flickering light.

A black-shadowed lane.

~o~

Red circles of fire; the glimmer as poisonous fumes wax and wane.

A vision of Hell; lost souls unaware of their desperate plight.

All dignity gone; no reason, no honour, no passions remain.

~o~

My patient is found; a haggard, bewildered and pitiful sight.

A wreck of a man; a slave to a drug many battle in vain.

A three-legged stool; an old man transfixed by the flames burning bright.

A black-shadowed lane.

~o~


a/n 2: a roundel has a short repeated phrase in line 1, line 4 and line 11. Lines 2, 5, 7 and 9 rhyme with this, the other lines all rhyme with each other. All lines have the same number of syllables. This form was invented by Swinburne.