kryuu27: I purposely made Mew like that because she just looks so mature so I just kind of wanted to make her personality the opposite of her looks… I love making Miku nervous, she just looks like the type to be nervous and all. I just didn't want to be part of the, "Luka is a fantastic cook!" group. Miku's just one of those people who isn't very self conscious I guess. Hmmm… A romantic moment from Clannad, eh? Okay, I'll do that but it may be a while before that happens.
Ae123monkey: Whoa… Long review… Okay. I didn't mean anything bad when I typed, "Oh my freaking god." I just didn't want to say anything in case I accidentally revealed something. I love Toki wo Kizamu Uta! I can sing it! Which isn't something to be proud of I guess but whatever. I never had the thought that they were going to get together, it just never occurred to me. Besides, I prefer Tomoyo x Tomoya more. Umm… I ended chapter 10 with Lily saying, "Idiot." which took place at nighttime. So I meant for chapter 11 to take place the following day. Does that make any sense? Yes… I do too. I often have moments similar to those, except less… Perverted. So I had the idea to add something like that in.
thefuriuswolf: Psh… I'm more perverted than Luka… I'm just not open about it… I'll try to make more but it may take awhile.
So this is a continuation of… Chapter 11? Yeah. Sorry for the HUGE delay for such a short chapter… *sniff* Well, here you go… I also changed the thoughts to italics.
I stared at Lily who was sitting across from me, her hands underneath her chin. She stared right back at me, her lips stretching to form a devilish smile.
"Give up, Pinky. There's no way I'm losing this battle."
"Oh yeah? Well, I'm not losing either." I flashed a smile towards her, "First one to cry loses."
"Tch, no way. That's boring."
"Really? I thought it'd be interesting, we can't exactly stop ourselves from crying in a staring contest and I honestly don't want to be doing this all throughout dinner."
"Then blink damn it!" Her smile disappeared and her eyebrows were furrowed in frustration.
"What're you getting mad for? Are the tears on their way already? We've barely been at this for two minutes.
"Sh-shut up! They're not…" Lily started growling and scrunching up her face.
"Looking pretty funny there, struggling not to close your eyes or something?"
"Shut up, Pinky!"
"My… That's no way to treat a host."
"Excuse me but who's the one who needed a cook?" Lily retorted, glaring fiercely from across the table.
"That would be Haku, not you. Hmm… I wonder where all that confidence ran off too?" I flashed her another sweet smile. "Don't tell me you're the type who likes to bluff?"
"Dinner's ready!" I heard Haku approach from the kitchen and saw her hand enter my vision and place a bowl in front of me. She placed another bowl to my right in front of Miku. After placing Mew's bowl she walked around to the other side and place a bowl in front of Lily. She placed her own bowl down and walked behind Lily.
"Now, now Lily, dinner's ready, time to give up the game." Lily growled in response. Haku lifted an eyebrow in irritation for a second before she started smiling. She slowly leaned forward and rested her boobs against the back of Lily's head and covered Lily's eyes.
"There, you lose!" Haku uncovered her eyes and sat down next to a red faced Lily. "My, you're awfully red today. Did my boobs feel that good?" She smiled and rested her cheek against her hand.
"N-no! N-not at all! I-I'm not like that, no way!" Her blush grew even deeper and she started shaking her hands in front of her and shaking her head.
"Haku started laughing, "Relax! I'm only teasing."
"A frown appeared on Lily's face, "What the hell? You're mean today."
"I just felt like teasing you, that's all."
Lily opened her mouth to reply but Miku quickly interrupted her, "So! Is everyone excited about the school trip?"
Lily shrugged her shoulders, "Not really. All we're doing is heading to some place to spend the night at for a few days."
"You never look forward to anything do you?"
"Nope! I just don't care for anything anymore." Haku lifted her spoonful of soup halfway and stopped.
Miku chuckled slightly, "Jeez, way to make life interesting."
"Well, why should I care about going to places that I probably won't even have fun at? Besides, it's somewhere in the mountains up north and I don't want to freeze anymore than I have too."
I took a sip of soup before commenting, "But we can ski, go sledding and skate. Doesn't that sound fun?"
"Uh. No. I'm not looking forward to falling on my ass and having my butt freeze because of some damn snow."
"Oh, lighten up." Haku lightly elbowed Lily in the arm while taking a spoonful of soup. "I'm pretty sure you don't have to do all of those activities."
"Then I'll be bored while the rest of you have 'fun'…"
Mew finally spoke up, "Then you can hang out with me."
"No thanks." Ouch, total rejection. Mew shrugged and returned to her soup.
A comfortable silence had filled the room and everyone continued eating their dinner. Then Miku placed her spoon in her bowl and got up to put it away. When she came back she sat down and scooted closer to me. When our chairs were about five inches apart, she stopped and leaned closer to me. She covered the right side of her mouth and whispered, "You're flustered side is very sexy, maybe I should walk around in a towel from now on." She leaned back, smiling and rested her cheek in her hand.
A blush appeared on my cheeks that slowly darkened, "U-um… I-I don't know what you're talking about…" Lily, Haku and Mew all looked up at me.
Haku spoke, concern in her voice, "Luka? What are you talking about? Are you okay? You look a bit flushed."
"Um, yeah. Sorry, I was just daydreaming and well… Yeah…"
"Seriously? Never heard of daydreaming making people blurt out stuff. Doesn't explain why you're blushing though." Lily smiled and I blushed even more.
"U-um, it's nothing! Just something about a tuna fountain."
Her smile fell and she just gaped at me, "Seriously?"
"Yeah, nothing interesting for you to hear."
"No kidding, what a bummer." She sighed and everyone went back to their food. Except for Miku.
"Nice save." I shivered as I felt her breath against my ear.
"Oh yeah," Lily looked up, "I brought some saki, hope no one minds."
"Lily! I told you not too!" Haku looked at Lily disapprovingly.
"Relax cupcake, dad'll never notice."
"But still… What about them?"
Miku shrugged, "No worries, my parents are overseas at a job." She took a glance at the clock on the wall in front of her, "It's getting late, you should probably head home now. You know it gets dangerous for two pretty girls to be walking alone in the dark."
They nodded and smiled," Thanks for inviting us over, it was a nice change of pace."
"And if you need anything, call." Haku added in. We walked them to the door and waved as they left.
I closed the door and sighed, "Well… That was fun." Miku nodded and Mew stood there rubbing her eye.
I think it's time for bed, Mew's a bit tired and after that delicious meal I think I'm ready for bed too."
"I call bathroom first!" Miku shouted out before running into the kitchen.
"Well that was unexpected." I turned towards Mew who was fast asleep in her chair. I sighed and half carried, half dragged her to the couch. When I was done I grabbed a blanket and placed it on top of her. I stood up straight and smiled, lightly petting Mew's head before walking down the hall to the second bathroom.
After washing up I headed to my room and undressed. I picked up my pajama top when the sound of a door creaking open appeared. I turned around to see Miku walking towards me. After dropping my shirt I quickly covered up my chest with my arms, lightly blushing, "Yes?"
She stopped in front of me and gently placed her hand on my cheek, "M-Miku?" I stared at her, blushing almost madly now. She pushed me onto the bed and crawled on top of me, smiling seductively.
She looked down at me and whispered in a seductive tone, "I want you." I started blushing furiously as I watched her slowly lean towards me and place her lips onto mine. I closed my eyes and kissed her back, only to open them in disappointment when she pulled away.
"Again…" I whispered, barely audible.
She smiled devilishly at me, "What did you say?"
"I-I want more…" I stared at her shyly.
She smiled and leaned down to kiss me again. I wrapped my arms around her back and she caressed my arms. She slowly slid her tongue along my lip seductively. I gasped and she took that as an invitation. Her tongue joined mine and explored my mouth as she slowly caressed my inner thigh. I gripped her shirt lightly, releasing a moan. She slowly moved her hand down and stopping so frustratingly close before moving across my stomach. After lingering there she held my hand and broke the kiss.
I opened my eyes to find her lying on top of me, sound asleep. I stared at her in disbelief, "Wh-what the heck?" I chuckled and smiled, moving her off of me. I sighed and looked at her, "What am I going to do with you?" I gently took her hand in mine and fell asleep.
Finally! I manage to come out with an update. But I broke my promise to not take a long time to update… *sniff* could you ever forgive me?
On another note, I'm in the mood to rewrite this fic. Why? I'm not satisfied with it. It still feels like I rushed way too much and I've skipped so much important detail. Like background stories, more cutesy scenes, holidays, etc… I probably won't delete what I have now but I just want to restart. Could you guys maybe give me some ideas and advice on what to add on? I'd really appreciate your help.
I tried to follow the holiday and have them celebrate Christmas but me being slow and Writers Block hitting me just as soon as I started writing made me miss it soooo, no Christmas… Although it's late, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!