A Wild Mary Sue Appeared!

Chapter 2: Gary Stu used un-originality!

Lucas's feet crunched in the snow of route 216. At least he got a change of scene from pushing giant boulders around in the middle of Mt. Coronet. And unfortunately, he had to push them himself.

That was what he got for not bothering to teach any of his pokemon Strength. He actually had a Rampardos that could use Superpower. But for some reason, Superpower was not strong enough to push boulders around, even if it was pretty much the same thing as the move Strength.

He sighed to himself, "My arms hurt."

His female travelling partner, and current romance partner, Dawn, laughed at him playfully, "Lucas, I hope you remember that I was the one pushing the boulders. You stopped after 2 minutes."

He looked down and tried to look tough, but he couldn't help but let out a minor chuckle, "Yeah, my bad. I guess I should start working out more." He looked at her and smiled as warmly as he could in the freezing weather, "How did you get that strong anyways? You put my Rampardos to shame."

Dawn flexed her arm, "Momma was a Black Belt."

Lucas nodded, still smiling, "Well, that explains it. Hey, mind teaching some of that stuff to me?"

She raised an eyebrow, "Why?"

He shrugged, "I dunno, I guess... if someone threatens to beat me up like back in preschool, I'd finally have a way to fight back without using Defense Curl or U-Turn."

"Awww... Is little Lucas still being bullied?" Dawn teased as she took his hand and rested her head on his shoulder.

"Not anymore, but you never know when someone's gonna get too pissed after you beat them in a battle and I just wanna be prepared." He had put up a somewhat logical point.

She gave him a quick peck on his cold cheek, "You'll be fine, Lucas. And tell you what, if someone threatens to beat you up, just..." She leaned her head close to his ear and whispered some instructions to him.

Lucas seemed very surprised that these words were coming from the Twinleaf girl, "What? With a fork?"

Dawn nodded, "Yes, or with what ever you'd like. As long as there's a proper handle on it."

"..." He took a pause. "Darling, not to be rude, but I doubt that eating utensils are defense weapons used in martial art techniques."

"Hey, it's your choice whether to use them or not," Dawn pointed out.

Lucas nodded, "All right, I'll keep it in mind. By the way, where's that lodge you mentioned before?"

"Let me check." Dawn reached towards the map in her pocket and scanned it with her eyes, "It should be another 20 minutes and we'll be there. As long as we walk in that direction." She pointed forwards.

Lucas then broke into a run, "Then lets go find salvation!" It wasn't much of a run though, the deep snow made him move like a Snorlax with a full stomach.

"HEY! Wait up!" Dawn yelled to him, trying to keep up with his Snorlax pace with more of a Budew-On-Sweet-Scent pace.

And it was at this point where Lucas ran into someone. "OOF!" The Sandgem Town boy fell backwards onto the snow, "Ow!" His newscap on his head fell off onto the snow. (It was totally a baret though, but Lucas would always insist that it was a newscap.)

The person who he had run into was a tall and spikey-haired looking boy. He was a few years older than Lucas and Dawn's age, except he seemed to have more natural muscles protruding from his jet-black leather biking jacket and skinny jeans than Lucas had.

Dawn continued her Budew-On-Sweet-Scent pace towards her fallen travelling partner, "Lucas! Are you okay?" She helped him off the snow.

"I'm fine... I hope," was his answer. He looked up at the guy he ran into, "Sorry about that, I couldn't see that much."

Lucas expected some human decency from this boy, which he did get... sort of.

"Whatever, man. Hey, wanna battle?"

Lucas was surprised by the direct approach, and as he picked up his totally-a-newscap and placed on his head, he considered it, "Well, I guess so. But you wanna battle in this weather?"

The boy shrugged, "I don't care, I just wanna battle. The name's Alastor, Alastor Robin Edward Masonry Nicholas Fitzpatrick."

Lucas lifted his hand to wave at the trainer with a ridiculously long name, "I'm Lucas."

Dawn looked at the trainer and smiled a friendly smile, "I'm Dawn."

Alastor, noticing that Dawn was what many people would call 'pretty,' so of course, out of habit, he gave her his usual charming smirk.

Dawn's response consisted of a confused raise of her eyebrow and some mutterings about how fast it would take for her to rummage through her bag and find a fork.

Alastor turned back to Lucas, "So, Lukey, how about a two on two battle?"

Lucas sighed at the mispronunciation of his name, "Sure." He took one of his pokeballs off his belt. It would probably take awhile, considering that this boy had probably been training for a while with his older age.

Dawn stepped back and gave the two trainers some room, "I'll referee then."

Alastor's smirk then returned, it was more annoying than cocky looking. "All right then! Riolu, I choose you!"

The small dog pokemon then appeared on the snowy terrain. It shivered a bit, but soon got into what one would call a fighting stance. "RI! RI!"

It was then Lucas's turn to choose his pokemon, "Lets go, Magmortar!"

The large fire type was not at all fazed by the snow as the heat from it's body melted most of the snowflakes that fell in it's area. "Mag..." it calmly announced as it looked down at the Riolu in front of it.

Alastor seemed agog and aghast, "Wh-what? What's that thing?"

"My Magmortar, what else?" Lucas answered plainly.

Riolu gulped, "Lu..."

"Can you all hurry up, please?" Dawn then butted in. "It's cold out here and a warm lodge is less than a mile away. Can we get this over with?"

Alastor nodded, "Right, right. Riolu! Quick Attack!"

Riolu obeyed and ran towards the large pokemon with great speed.

"RIO!" it screeched a little too loudly.

"Brick Break," Lucas ordered.

All Magmortar had to do was hold out it's large hand, or rather, canon, in front of Riolu as the smaller pokemon rammed itself directly into it.

"Riolu! Nooooo!" Alastor yelped as his pokemon fell to the ground with fainted eyes.

"Riolu is unable to battle!" Dawn announced, though, it was as if no one was even listening to her, she had a feeling that this battle was going to boring, mainly because assistants of regional Professors had a knack for raising insanely strong pokemon.

Lucas ran up and patted his Magmortar on the back, "Good job, Mag."

Magmortar either smiled happily or laughed at Riolu's weakness.

Lucas returned his pokemon, "Rest up, buddy." He then looked to Alastor, "Wanna continue?"

Alastor had just returned Riolu when he replied, "Of course, you're going down, Lukey! Go, Eevee!"

The small Eevee quickly appeared on the snow, looking all cute and adorable like the average generic Eevee's in the world.

"Lets end this then," said Dawn. "Because I am pretty sure that my toes have frozen off by now."

Lucas nodded, "Right." He grabbed a pokeball from his belt, "Lets go, Empoleon!"

The Emperor pokemon stood on the frozen ground and saluted his trainer, a habit it did often, before focusing its gaze on the battle before him.

Wanting to make quick work of this battle, at his frozen companion's request, Lucas ordered a simple attack, "Drill Peck, Empoleon. And go easy on him."

"Eevee! Use growl!" Alastor commanded.

While Eevee made a growling noise, Empoleon waddled itself towards Eevee, leaned down so its head was right above the fox's face, and gave it one jab on the head.

"EEE!"

Eevee then fainted after that.

"NOOOOOOO!" Alastor screeched. "Eevee!"

Dawn raised a hand towards Lucas's side of the battleground, "Eevee is unable to ba- oh, what's the point now?" She shrugged off her words quickly and approached Lucas's side, "Can we go now?"

Lucas returned Empoleon, "Of course." He then looked to Alastor, who seemed to be grovelling on the ground with the most surprised expression, "Hey, thanks for the battle. Love to stay and chat, but we gotta go!"

Instead of saying goodbye, Alastor said something else: "B-b-but... No one loses their fist battle! It's not possible!"

Dawn raised an eyebrow, "This was your first battle? But didn't you start your journey at 12 like most trainers do?"

Alastor shook his head, "No, I spent 6 years studying pokemon in a trainer school before I started."

Lucas had some trouble comprehending this, "Wait, so you're 18 and you just started your journey? Who gave you your starter?"

"Arceus approached me in the woods on day, he told me that I was destined to save the world and presented me with Riolu and Eevee. He told me that I, out of everyone in the world, was chosen because of my intense knowledge of Pokemon," Alastor explained.

Of course, the two dexholders did not believe a single word of his story.

Dawn scoffed, "Dude, that's really messed up. And the fact that you're 18 and just a beginner is pretty lame, not to be completely rude or anything."

Lucas added in, "Yeah, I'm pretty sure that Maylene's younger than you, and she's already a gym leader."

"But... but..." Alastor stuttered.

Dawn ignored him and turned to Lucas, "I think that the lodge serves hot chocolate."

Lucas seemed more intrigued by this then with Alastor's story, "Oooh! Lets go then." Lucas then took off with another mad dash.

"Hey! Stop running without warning!" Dawn yelled after him as she ran after him.

They left Alastor Robin Edward Masonry Nicholas Fitzpatrick alone in the snow, not giving single damn about the Gary Stu.

Aaaaaaannnnnnnnddddd... It's done!

I'm not as pleased with this chapter as I was with the last one, and I tried my best to add Fortuneshipping moments.

And yes, I made the age 12 for a trainers starting age. It was more of a "Why not?" decision because it seems logical for basic schooling to be finished before going off on a dangerous journey that could possibly lead to death and injury. And when you walk up to certain books in gen 3, the player cannot read it. Of course they can't, they stopped going to school at age 10!

A quick lesson for any fanfiction writers out there who do not want to create Sue/Stu's: For starters, Riolu and Eevee are overused. If you can make an interesting story where someone's starter is a Bidoof or Rattata, I will get Arceus to give up the position of god for you.

A question for my readers out there, what's a good Mary Sue name? Waffle points if you use the letter 'Y' in place of vowels and apostrophes for every single middle name!

Reviews and tips are always appreciated!

K'bye!