Me and jack ran over to falafel Phil's and got a table
"So Kim what was wrong at lunch why did you leave?" he asked in a concerned voice
"Oh no reason why" I said back to him
"Was it because you said I was amazing?" he said
"Of course you should have known that in the first place" I said
"I should go" I said
"Wait Kim I just want to say something first" jack said
"What that you think I'm stupid for saying that" I said
"No I just wanted to say I think you're amazing too" jack said
"Thanks jack" I said smiling
"I should probably go work on homework" he said
"Me too" I said
"Goodbye kimmy" jack said
"Don't call me that" I said
"I am going to call you that kimmy bye" jack said
"Bye Jacky I said then I went home.
I went home and got on my computer and logged in to my IM account. Lucky for me karate dude133 was on. I HAD TO TELL HIM ABOUT MY LUCK
karatedude133: hey
candygirl178: oh my gosh guess what my crush jack brewer said I was amazing! :} so happy!
karatedude133: so u have a crush on jack brewer and he thinks you're amazing so that therefore you must be Kim
candygirl178: who are you then mysterious wise one
karatedude133: i have to ask you something.
candygirl178: what
karatedude133: if jack asked you out would you say yes
candygirl178: yeah I would
karatedude133: well then Kim...Will you go out with me
candygirl178 has changed her name to Kim
karatedude133 has changed his name to jack
Kim: yes!
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