Pokemon: Journey Through The NeoSentroa Region
Eddy's pokemon. Flash fire, intimidate –lvl 5 Bite[dark] roar[normal] male
Pokemon with Professor Han: None
Thanks for the reviews LADY MIZUNE and KOOK ill try to make this chapter better. I will not make Eddy the main protagonist and write it from my point of view maybe that will help with the pronouns and I will remember commas this time and this time I am going to use Microsoft word so I can see spelling errors and check my proper nouns. Oh and one other thing roar is used like mystery dungen It can cause damage by blowing away the opponent and also can still change the pokemon during battle. Anyway back to the story.
Chapter 2: Train Train and First Battle
6 January 2012
"Now use roar" said Eddy. Growlithe barked ferociously sending most of the leaves from a tree[which is being used to train] flying. Eddy walked over to the puppy pokemon and patted his/its head. "Great job Growlithe but we still got a lot of work to do but for now rest" said Eddy while returning his pokemon. Just then Josh walked up to Eddy and said " Me and Teddiursa found tones of apples, pineapples, and grapes. We have to make fruit salad for lunch, dinner, and tomorrows breakfast".
"Awesome lets go set the table, I'm starving and I bet Growlithe is too after all that training" said Eddy. After half an hour of of setting the table and getting the cutlery out of Eddy's bag. Eddy and Josh ate the fruit salad out of their spoons while Growlithe licked up everything and Teddiursa drank everything. Everyone seemed full and took a nap after eating/licking/drinking. Eddy and Growlithe woke up and decided to train.
"Ok Growlithe lets train" said Eddy. "Edward is that you" said a dark voice Eddy new too well. "What do YOU want Don?" asked Eddy. "Well now that you're here a battle, a 2 on 2 battle exactly". Said Don. "I accept your challenge but it has to be a 1 on 1 battle cause I only got 1 pokemon" said Eddy. "One pokemon? Your pathetic how do you expect to even make it to the NeoSentroa League let alone win gym badges with one pokemon"? asked Don.
"Listen Don do you want to talk or battle"? asked Eddy.
A smirk grew on Don's face as he grabbed a pokeball and replied, "battle".
Eddy and Don made space then Don sent out his pokemon "Go Machop"! yelled Don. "Stand by Growlithe". Said Eddy.
Eddy scanned machop on the poke'dex
Machop the superpower pokemon. Though small in structure, it is powerful enough to easily heft and throw a number of Geodude at once.
1 on 1 battle no subs Donovan vs Edward
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Eddy started and commanded "Growlithe use ember"! Growlithe released small beads of fire from its/his mouth/snout.
"Machop dodge it then use low kick" said Don. Machop swayed to the right then kicked Growlithe. Groooooowwlithe! Screamed Growlithe in pain but he shook it off, though his hp dropped.
"What the heck that kick was supposed to do more damage then that! Screamed Don.
Eddy saw his chance and commanded "Growlithe ember then bite". And Growlithe did so he released small fire beads at machop which landed." Machop!" it cried in pain. Then Growlithe ran to Machop and bit Machops foot." MAAACHOOOOOOP!". Screamed Machop.
"No! Machop use leer then focus energy" cried Don. Machop glared at Growlithe and Growlithe couldn't look away this left him open for an attack because his defences were lowered then while using leer machop focused his energy.
"Now finish this with LOW KICK!" yelled Don. Machop once again kicked Growlithe with an extra powerful kick landing a critical hit.
Don started "Well it looks like I …". He couldn't believe it Growlithe got up.
Eddy smirked and commanded "Growlithe use ROAR!"
Growlithe barked and blew Machop against a tree.
Eddy then commanded " Bite" Growlithe bit Machops foot and Machop sceamed in pain. As Growlithe let go of his leg then he slowly got up and prepared for a command.
"Growlithe use BITE/Machop use LOW KICK!" They both screamed.
Machop kicked Growlithe while Growlithe bit Machop. Both pokemon fainted and were returned to their pokeballs and were thanked by their trainers for their efforts.
"And it ends as a draw" said a familiar voice to both boys
…. KOOK And LADY MIZUNE your reviews please I wanna know how I did this time and other readers r&r and I need female oc's
Here are my questions
1. did you like this chap
2. why
Thank you oh and the reason for 2 updates in one day is because in South Africa it's a holiday until the middle of January.
Peace
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