I had uploaded the non-edited version! This is the same, just really edited by icalyn! :)


Well, I read your reviews and I have to upset you - Ana is pregnant. But , unfortunately, not for a long time.

I hope you will still like the story the way I have planned it to be! :)


"What are you doing here, Ana?" Grace asks, and now almost everyone is at the door, looking at Christian.

"We were just ..." Ana starts but then she notices that Elliot is staring at her dress' hem. When she looks at it she realizes what's wrong. She put on the dress on the wrong side.

"Elliot, this is not – " Ana says as soon as Elliot starts walking away from everyone.

"It is not what? Do you think I am stupid?" Elliot raises his voice, looking right at Ana who has followed him. Along with the rest of the Greys, as well.

"And you – you are my brother!" Elliot now yells at Christian. "How could you do this to me!"

"Elliot, this was just sex. One time," Christian says as if it was nothing.

But Ana looks over him and wants to cry – just sex? It was so much more for her.

"Just sex? So this was what you were saving your first time for?" Elliot laughs, and now everyone looks at Anastasia.

This time she is crying. She tries to wipe the tears away but she doesn't succeed because she is crying too hard. She has lost everything now. Why did she have to let her feelings for Christian take over? She told Elliot she wanted to wait, because she had been a virgin before she and Christian... she felt so guilty at the moment, all she wanted was to turn back time and never fall in love with Christian.

"What are you talking about?" Christian asks, giving Anastasia a look.

"Didn't she tell you? Or maybe she lied to me? How was it, Ana? Did my brother just take your virginity?" Elliot laughed with sarcasm. But Ana didn't laugh. And neither did Christian. It all became clear to him – her tightness, her cries, her shock. He wanted to throw up, how could he? He had done something he should never have done. He should have never felt anything for Anastasia. No, he didn't feel anything, he thought. He just wanted her body and that was it.

"I want you both to leave," finally Carrick said something. "Christian, take this woman out of this house and I think we don't want to see her ever again," he said, looking at them.

"I really thought you were much different, Anastasia!" Grace said as Ana took her bid to leave.

"I am very sorry," she said and turned to the door, to leave.

"Drive her home or wherever she needs. I am not sure we want you to stay today," Carrick added to Christian. Christian understood it: he had ruined his father's birthday party. He had ruined everything. How will they face the whole family? He only hoped Elliot would soon forget about Anastasia. Because he will – he doesn't need any more trouble with her.

"I will get a taxi," Ana said as she heard Christian follow her out.

"You won't get anything. I will drive you home," he said and opened his car door for her.

"I want to get a taxi," she said again, but then Christian took her hand and dragged her to his car.

"We need to talk. So you will ride with me," Christian told her. She sighed and got in the car.

When he started the engine Ana started talking. "Please don't, Christian. Let me out and I will get a taxi, really."

"Don't you get it – no taxi! Now tell me why you didn't say you were a virgin," he said, not even bothering to look at her.

"I, I just...look, it just happened and I knew you would stop if I told you."

"I hope you understand this was just one time, and I don't plan to ever see you again after I drop you at your house."

And that was it, Ana thought. The end. The very end of their romance. It was just sex for him. For her, it was thousand times more than just sex. It was her first time; it was an experience she would never forget. And yet it was so painful to remember it and to remember what happened next. She didn't say anything more, and when he asked her where to drop her off, she gave him her dad's address since she couldn't go to Elliot's where she had been living for the past few days.

The car stopped and Ana got out, not even saying goodbye. Deep in her heart she hoped they could still somehow be together... but was it really possible, after what they had done at his parents' house? Of course there was no possible future for them; he had made that clear. And now she didn't have anyone – she had lost Kate because they still weren't talking to each other, she had lost Elliot – the man who really had been kind of serious about her. The man who had talked about their future, the man who had thought about moving in together, the man who had even agreed to wait until she was ready.

And then she gives herself to his brother.

"Annie, have you been crying?" Ray opens the door and immediately wraps his arms around Ana.

"Just let me stay with you, Dad," Ana says, returning his hug.

Of course he allows her to stay, he even loves the fact that she is staying. They spend the evening drinking cacao and playing cards. Something childish that takes her thoughts away from Christian.