Chapter 3
Please review after reading, I really want to know what I can improve or what I could do to the plot line I know a bunch of you people read it ,I can see my views so please just review, it all could just be one word (Just not swear words)!
Sheldon's POV
When we went to Bloody Sales I went straight to the Xbox games. I soon found Halo 3 and went to the counter. The store had a black and red theme so the counter was red, like bright red. It kind of gave me a headache.The sales person was awful pale and had the name tag Mel. She fit the description from Leonard, she did look like Penny! " Do you step foot out in the sun?" I asked politely to the sales woman. For a blond model type like her you would assume she tanned. " Um, yeah" she said eying me. " Did you here about vitamin D though because you might want to go outside it could cause health issues, because you are pale." I suggested I did not mean this offensively , I just am helping. " Thanks..." She stated confused and some what defensed. " Ugh Sheldon leave this..." Leonard stuttered at the end not finishing his sentence. This was the girl from yesterday! " You were at our apartment yesterday!" I practically shouted.
Leave a review guessing what is going to happen I have a couple of ideas , but they aren't as good as some you guys could come up with. I will give the person credit on my next chapter. I need two more review to post two more chapters!
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