so my brain turned off and my fingers took over for this chapter, i hope you like because i had to read it twice before i could understand where i was going with it :D
"Yumi?" coughed Ulrich, "poison."
(Ulrich)
the pain was indescribable. It penetrated my entire body, there was no way i could have known anything even close to this pin now. I heard someone's worried voice above me i didn't know or care who it was. Unless someone could stop my body's horrible throbbing. The voice continued to repeat the same thing over and over, was it my name. I didn't know. Lips brushed my cheek and for a moment shock over powered pain. Who-who would...? Yumi's beautiful face was above me she was the one who had kissed me, wait she kissed me?! Her face darkened around the edges, but i didn't want it to i wanted to stare at her face forever, to forget the pain. But now all i could see was her mouth that kept saying my name. i couldn't se, but whether it was from bright light or total darkness i couldn't say. the light/dark seemed to be tinted with gold. Why gold? XANA controlled with blood red and darkest black, and i knew this was from XANA no one else could case such agony. Yumi's mouth disappeared and pain swallowed me again
"We have to get him back to the tower" said Aelita looking down at Ulrich who was still clutched in Yumi's arms. Just a moment before she had kissed him on the cheek and Ulrich would never know.
"I agree" said Odd "hey Einstein could you send us some transport" and Odd was something else Aelita couldn't understand. He was taking this so calmly, but when he turned to her she could feel the fear and anxiety radiating from him.
She wanted to tell both the warriors that Ulrich would be ok that at any moment he would jump up laughing at a joke. But she couldn't, not even Jerimie could figure out what was wrong with Ulrich.
Just to confirm her sorrows Jerimie said "you found Ulrich, how is he?"
"Unconscious" said Odd
"I cannot figure out what's wrong with him, and a according to some readings he has no life points yet, but he's not de-virtualizing"
Aelita barely noticed the ride back the tower she was so lost in thought. Ulrich had been draped over the back of the hover wing and Aelita was riding the over bike. the hand grips were to big which only reinforced her feeling that Ulrich was too big, too strong for something like this to happen to.
(Ulrich)
When i opened my eyes again the pain was as fresh as ever but my vision had come back. i seemed to be inside a tower but how i had gotten there i didn't know. Above me Yumi's face was worried, and had tears at the corner, but we could cry on lyoko. Odd was a little way off with the same worry in his eyes. And a little farther Aelita was talking to Jerimie through a small screen that held the blonde boyish face.
"Ulrich how do you feel?" asked Yumi gently at seeing my eyes open.
"I've felt better" i admitted, my voice was awful sounding like someone had dunked sand in my throat.
Then Yumi backed away from me her eyes wide with fear.
"What is it?" Ulrich asked
"Y-your e-eyes" she said.
I stared to ask further when pain, worse than anything I had ever felt filled my head and again the word poison filled my head in an eerie echoing chorus.
i feel like this story is getting repetitive but i can help it. the story will egt better and some new stuff is coming thank you SO much for my epic 20 review's your all awesome :D