So I had everything for this chapter planned in my head then I read a review this morning and had to change it, so I changed who the person I was having appear in the hole in the wall, which in return changed the storyline completely. I loved typing this one chapter and lol well I was typing the last part I saw the Strawhats and Vivi all as mercenaries in my head it was so funny.
I hope you all enjoy this chapter, I know it shorter than most, but I was tired and I thought it was a good cliff hanger spot so I ended it where I did for that reason; and Thanks Callie982 for the great idea for who appeared.
Also from now the review responses will be posted at the end of the chapter except if I make an exception because of what someone says. It's just easier and then my head will already be in the zone so the reviews will make more sense.
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Ch.6 – You Brat.
The big man stood in the door way, he was looking like he was ready to kill whoever he saw first and when they all saw the large man everyone except for Zoro and Luffy went to run. Luffy tried to stand his ground but knew that he would lose this battle if he tried to fight who he saw standing there so he decided to play innocent which he was anyways. So he looked at the man an asked a simple question "Um..Hi gramps; what are you doing here."
The old man stepped inside and looked down at the teenager "I thought you were at school what the hell are you doing at the lake house brat."
He yawned as he looked up tiredly at Garp "Club trip."
Garp looked at the wall "Call Ace and get him to fix it."
Zoro decided to step in "But shouldn't you fix, you did break it."
Garp looked at him and sighed "Stupid brat….. God damn it, fine."
Garp pulled his phone from his pocket as he dialed the number of the nearby house repair place, and since their buildings tend to get broken a lot it's programmed in to his phone so it was a very easy phone call. Then he pulled some money out of his pocket and counted it throwing it at the orange haired high school student sitting at the table again "You look responsible so pay him when he gets here."
Luffy looked at Nami and being the idiot he is said "Yeah and tell him to fix the walls on my floor too, so we can sleep there instead of in Ace's room."
Garp jumped over hitting him "WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?"
Luffy looked at him confused, rubbing his head "What you didn't know I thought that was why you showed up here suddenly."
Garp looked at him "I don't know what you talking about; I'm here because the house at the lake next door heard horrible screams and howls from here all night, so I thinking you were at school, had thought someone had broken in."
Luffy looked at him and hit his hand with his fist, in a I understand motion "I get it. So Ace didn't tell you about what happened last night yet."
Garp looked at him and Nami hit him "You idiot don't get yourself in to more trouble."
Garp laughed a deep coarse laugh "So you probably transformed in to your other form right."
Luffy sighed "Yeah and I had one hell of a time controlling myself."
They talked well Garp listened to what had happen but ended up falling asleep after a few minutes of story. They all looked at him when suddenly a bullet flew through the large hole in the wall and hit the old man in the arm; he awoke with a yelp and a loud howl "WHAT THE HELL?"
He turned to see someone shooting and jumped up flying at the person clothed in black. With one bullet the perpetrator had ended the invincible Garp's life. Luffy's hands flew up to his mouth in shock he had never thought someone could take out his grandpa so easily. The group quickly made a decision and got in an elevator heading to a different floor, Zoro literally had top drag Luffy to get him to follow, Luffy was just that shocked.
Luffy was crying tears of anger even thought his grandpa was mean and sometimes boarder line abusive he still loved the old man, he had always been there and he and taken care o0f him and Ace for all their lives basically, before and after they were in that testing laboratory. Luffy knew that the old man loved them in his own way, it wasn't the nicest way but he still knew he loved him, and Luffy cared for him back. Zoro looked at Luffy and put his arms around him and whispered something in his ear which calmed him down enough that he could think. He looked at everyone "Were not just going to give up and die, no were going to fight back and live through this, all together."
Robin looked at him and then smiled but just slightly, deciding now was a good time to tell everyone her plan "Okay then take us to the paintball room it should still all be set up, everybody get as many weapons as you can handle and then gather so Luffy can show us how to switch them for use with real bullets."
They did as Robin had told them to and then when they got back out to the meeting spot in the room Luffy walked to a square in the floor and pried it open, then they all piled in and he closed it back up. He walked for a few seconds and then turned on all of the lights, as they followed him through the small pathways with their weapons in hand they came up to a door without a lock on the outside. Luffy just pushed it open as they all walked in and behind them he locked it from the inside and put a bar across it to hold it closed. He turned and when Nami went to say something he put his finger over her lip, and then he pointed up. He quietly whispered "They'll hear us if we talk to loud, it's not sound proof."
Nami nodded and quietly asked "Where are we? This room is so small."
Luffy sat on a chair in the corner, clearly not enjoying being in such a small room "Were in the weapons room, this is where Ace keeps all the ammo and other dangerous things that he says I'm not suppose to play with."
Everyone was looking around the small room; well Zoro had grabbed 3 swords from the wall and grabbed Ammo for Luffy's guns, well he sat looking sick sitting in the corner because the room was way too small for his liking. Then Luffy gave a quick demo showing them how to make it so they could shoot the normal Ammo. Usopp with a smile plastered on his face, was sitting in the room playing with his sniper rifle and preparing for the fight which was soon to come.
Once everyone was ready Robin and Nami began to explain the plan to the others and when they were done Luffy stood up from his spot grabbed a pole from the corner of the room and used it hitting all the tiles in the ceiling trying to find the lose one they could use to get out faster. He popped it out and Zoro boosted him up so he could check if it was clear. He got up gave a quick look around and then said clear as he climbed out, and they all quickly crawled out behind him. They slowly made their way around the building as they prepared for battle.
The plan wasn't a very hard one it was just because they weren't sure how many people there were, so they had to be very careful. Their plan was basically eliminating them one by one by traveling in a group together and once they had taken out them all they would load the Van with everything they need and head back to town to find Ace to get help. Suddenly the first bullet was fired, Usopp had snipped the person at the end of the hallway around the next corner. They waited for a few minutes then carefully proceeded down the hallway.
It took almost 2 hours to remove all the attackers from the house, and yes they killed the attackers because they knew that if they weren't the ones to kill, than in return they would easily be killed themselves. They had no problem killing the attackers, because they were all like a family and they had already killed someone who was precious to a member of their family so in return they need to die themselves.
They were talking about what they all needed to get, when suddenly Luffy noticed something move in the pile of thought to be dead bodies; He saw the barrel of a gun and instantly just thought to move, he jumped in front of Nami as the gun fired.
So the end of this chapter is here as you can see it wasn't the best chapter but I thought it would be nice to throw a short funny part in at the beginning, then after that I would throw all of you in to a world of sorrow and anger again, lol I hope everyone's prepared for what's to come because it will blow of all your minds, It will be totally unexpected.
Thanks for reading and pls review.
Review responses:
Yoaifan124 – I am so glad that you loved it because I am always very insecure about my chapters so It made my day, I hope you liked who broke the wall and I hope you enjoyed the new chapter thanks for reading.
Callie982 – I loved your idea so I borrowed it and I have given you credit in the beginning of the chapter so thanks so much that made me change the beginning of the story which made me change my whole idea for this chapter which I think made the story better so I thank you, also thanks for reading and here's the next chapter for you, I hope you enjoy.
Deathbyepic100- I know I am always like this in all of my stories because I noticed that cliff hangers tend to make the readers come back to read the next chapter and I have ended with another one in this so srry about that. Here's the update and I hope you enjoyed it.
Guest 4/15/13- That was a great guess but that wasn't close to either of my ideas but it was a good guess. Yes, there will be tragedy in some of the chapters, but I will try to throw in funny moments to cheer you up. Thanks for reading and here's the new chapter for you.
