I do not own MLP except the oc characters in this. hope you enjoy XD

I look around the forest for any signs of graves of the dead solider. i find a stone of the old leader of the discord army. i dig up the grave and try to break it open. crypt is currently trying to break open another grave. i look up and see the crescent moon. my eyes go wolf i bite hard and tear off. it nearly hits crypt who had already ripped the lid of the coffin he was investigating.. a"hey man you could have hit me!" he was annoyed but didn't care much after saying that. he went back to studying the coffin.

I look around the grave i was investigating it was of a dust and armor. i found an old book. i find a book with gold embroiled on the red hard cover.

i check the pages. i read it from front to back it seems like a diary. " crypt i think i found a diary of the chaos general?" zelco says in a curious tone

crypt walks over seeing this. he looks around the grave and gives zelco a small scroll."it seems like these guys where just victims of discord and what they "call the darkness" crypt said in a confused tone. he seemed to be in deep thought when he says this.

"so this darkness you think it could have been the dark cloud you fought?" zelco asks with a curious and just as in deep thought as crypt kind of look.

I don't know but where going to find a way to undo this mess or well. he opens a locket around his neck. it has a pic of him and his little sister next him. we will all die. and I will have to kill like any pony will a death wish would." his voice is frosty.

He looks at zelco with a cold look of It made zelco think of his two old friends rainbow and pinkie lu.( zelcos one of the few people who wont flinch at crypts icy looks when he's dead serious)

They check the other graves and find documents.

they check for anything of any real use. they find some old chest. (they were easy enough to break open) There was some gold and gems and one of them had a key with a discord and darkness on it). [chaos and evil what a combo.]

They get the gold ,gems and documents they found and leave to shatter rock city then off to ponyville for a while if they can get the vacation time. after the long journey from the willow grave woods to the shatter rock city on foot( in there more animatistic forms)

They change back to normal on the last mile and get their with little difficulty ( a few easily dispatched bandits with hoofs prints on their faces and half conscious from the painful butt-kicking they just got)

zelco and crypt are findly home. they get to their home on 56 geo gem street. The house was made from steel and rock it holds up nicely during earthquake session.

They check up on the metal case they had filled with dust of the one of the statues they knocked over and turned t dust.

zelco goes to the shower and crypt makes a meal for the both of them whiles he's in there.

zelco carry the metal case with him. he turns on the shower. The whole bathroom is marble( zelco got from his days of collecting marble when he was younger) except the tub which is porcelain

He gets in the cool water on his back he lets the warm water loosen his muscles. the dirt washing off his body.

he thinks to himself "times like this i get to think .I still remember the event of the statues breaking,discord flesh ripping under my teeth. the whole situation was weird. i cant believe it wasnt a dream...but then the times when the wolf got to me and i went wolf like when a guy had beat me up when i was defending a small filly.

the filly ran and i was home later in bed soaked in blood it was a full moon i believe that night. I cant remember what happened after I turned wolf. i think I eat him or slaughtered him and a few others because the next day I saw on the pony daily a huge massacre of a local gang which were found not to fare from where I had my incident with the somewhat rough gentlecoat who didn't seem to like fillies.

He thought about it more. deeply. if discord was deadly as he legends say then he's in deep end of the world trouble and the darkness that helped discord in the past if that black cloud was darkness then all will lose their souls to darkness. he thought the statue had the word darkness on it, the one that the black cloud came from but he wasnt sure. he tried to remember but couldnt' so he stopped thinking about it after a few minutes of trying to remember if the statue had it or not but couldn't remember.

He then turned the shower off with his wet slippery hoof and opened sliding door. He was face to face with a red maned and orange furred pony who looked angry and had a sadistic smile on her face. she had old rugged torn up bandit cloths. he instantly recognised her. then gulped then looked at him seductively and nuzzled his snout with hers. He was surprised and blushing. ( his brains is complete confused by all this). tackled him back into the show and kissed him. He thought "what the hell just happened?" (he's still heavy confused) she stops and smiles. her lips were red now like they just tasted blood.

zelco felt weak and tired. He tried to scream for help but couldn't he fainted eyes rolling back into his head. he coughs blood. she kiss him again. He continues to get skinner and looks gets more and more unhealthy looking by the minute. she giggles under her bloody lips and seems to be getting a healthier glow to her fur and mane.

crypt is wondering whats taking zelco so long in the shower" that dam mare is going to rake up our water bill sky-high if he keeps doing this.( if zelco was heard that he would of those two would be fighting now)

He walks into the bath room the metal case is empty not a speck of dust. he opens the sliding door with his right hoof. the thing is clean like zelco wasnt there."thats odd there should be dirt or something at least. He must have not taken a show then? weird?" crypt thinks to himself puzzled by this and why zelco cleaned the metal case. it wasnt of zelco to do something odd like that the two where going to give it to the museum they worked for.

it would have been a good-sized bonus for what they found. (he remembers zelco digging up the grave of a king in a deadly forest so he could get the big bonus on his next boss offered who ever found the king of ra,s body would get the huge bonus.)He looks around more and finds a piece of cloth similier to ancient bandit cloths but it smells familiar like the dust from the metal case.

(this intreegs crypt) (crypts ears twitch.) he hears something. (his eyes go dragon.)

He goes to the living room. he sees nothing out of the ordinary.

He notices a strong smell in the air. then (drip) a small drop of liquid hits crypts nose. He rubs it off. (its blood.)

crypt looks up to see something he wished he didn't see.

zelco was pinned to the roof by a majestic mare draining the blood out of him. it flowed out of two bite marks on his neck like streams of red snakes into the mares mouth. The mares coat was orange and stained with blood. her mane was as red as zelcos blood.

(zelco looked like he was seconds away from death.)

She looked down at crypt and smiled. crypt eyes were calm and he was ready for the fight ready to assume in his home.

she grabbed ahold of zelco with one arm and push-off the roof into crypt who dodged.

she hit the ground hard she shot one hoof straight into crypts face at blinding speeds.

crypt was sent flying into the wall with a bleeding forehead from the force of her kick.

she ran climbed up the wall like a spider with zelcos neck in her teeth while crypt was sliding down the wall and hit the ground.

crypt got up as fast as he could. his body felt like rubber and he was dazed by his confusion

He ran after her at full speed.(hearing the weak dry voice of zelco crying out for help.)

He saw her climbing along the roof into zelcos room. crypt shot 3 quick fire balls at the mare. she jump down onto the ground and spin kicks one of the fireballs at crypt who countered with a quick fireball. both collided and made crypt lose sight of her.

He galloped through it slightly burnt and went into the room. He saw zelcos large bed with a silver quilt blanket. He looked to his right to see the open window. He runs to check it out. Theres blood on the window seal.

crypt face starts to get wet with tears. His face is scrunched up. He trys to stay strong but couldn't. tears run down crypts face."zelco nooo. i couldnt save you...i was so close sooo close...but i just..couldnt..."crypts voice was filled with pain. the iron willed pony felt broken. (He knows it will be impossible to find his friend in such a huge khows he may never see his best friend again. zelco looked like he was almost dead and now crypt can't help him.)(A howl is unnoticed in the distance.)

wow nice chapter i fixed a little bit but might need to twick it in the future. til next time. :) pooor crypt and zelco :(