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In Fantasia
Atreyu's ear fuzzes at first and throbs hearing a voice in high frequency. He still walks through the knee high mud and gasps at the pain as it also carried through his head rather than only his ears. He throws his hand on top his forehand where he felt most of the pressure.
"Someone help," Atreyu heard a girl and the scream that sounded just like the girl from his vision. Atreyu went thrusting faster threw the steep and sticky mud with all of his might could carry on. It was getting harder with each step he took.
Going further with the back of his legs aching and suddenly became numb after the many pulling he could feel the sadness take over him. Without Auryn he would for sure drown once the sadness took over him fully.
Atreyu clings onto a tough tree branch and begins to climb onto it out of the mud. He looks up to the foggy gray sky to search for Falcor some more.
In Narnia
Lucy ran as fast as she could to the top of the gorge and once when she came to it her foot gets caught in a narrow opened gap. Lucy slips and falls on the hard rocks. She tries to tug her foot loose, it was stuck for good and Lucy felt taking her foot out of the shoe would set her free so she begins to shake her foot in her shoe loose.
The creature gained on Lucy and stood in a pouncing pose with a growl and jumps towards her ferociously. "Aslan!" Lucy cries very loud covering her face to the ground with an arm over her frightened eyes and nothing happened after a few seconds later only it was very quiet again.
Lucy lifts her head up slowly and looks around her. The creature was no longer in sight or even looked as if it was actually there to begin with. Still Lucy was getting up cautiously and noticed her foot wasn't in a gap. Her horse was still gone with all the supplies she brought along the way. So she began to wonder what was fake and what was reality for a moment. What really happened?
Lucy walks on in the woods where the sun actually began to seep through the trees more. She felt this sudden pull to stand her ground and not walk another step any further, still she did but the feeling was lonely. It wasn't because she didn't have Glaze with her anymore but all this time it felt like she was on a journey with somebody else who was no longer with her. As she suffered the thought she could feel the other was suffering as well.
Lucy sunk down between a tree and its' root feeling the others presence growing strong within her. Closing her eyes she thought of a vision where she'd seen him in her dreams. "Whoever you are we need you please come." She touches the root beside her pretending it was part of him to see if he could feel her presence too.
In Fantasia
Atreyu throws his head up and looks at his arm as if to look for something or someone had touched it. Strange, he thought. No one and nothing was there. He then realized it was her because he could hear and sense her plea. "I would if I could," Atreyu said full of compassion. "But I would die way before reaching the Southern Oracle." His compassion went into despair.
He sinks his head back onto the tree not knowing what to do. Either way they were both doomed in the same situation they were put in.
Suddenly as Atreyu looked at the ground he could see a gold color taking reflection in the swamp below, he looks up again as he heard a ringing noise and he smiles really big. "Falcor!" Atreyu screams. Falcor swoops in out of the golden sky that formed around him down towards Atreyu.
Atreyu takes hold of the dragons soft fur and scales. "What took you so long friend?"
"I'll explain later along the way, first lets get you out of here." Falcor said and once he felt that Atreyu was on his back he takes off into the deep colorful sky.
