Alright, chapter one. Looking back on old writing is more painful then I thought it would be, anyway revised version is after the second line break again. Green Lantern doesn't have an ice villain, or at least not one I could find so you're all stuck with another O.C sorry.

I Don't own Green Lantern or Young Justice

Coast City July, 4, 12:00

Constellation beach, sunny, trees and the ocean surround the area. The ocean is now frozen.

Jessica's p.o.v

July 4… ugh. Don't get me wrong, this is a holiday I quite like but today the last bit of my life that the ring didn't ruin is about to be over. Well at least I've got a frozen punching bag to put into hospital first. Oh looks like my mentor has a plan.

"Ahem. Okay the girl down there is known as Lolita Ice so listen up, if we fly thru the trees and up behind her, we can knock her out without being spotted!" And that everyone is the stupidest plan I have ever heard, plus the GL's near insane grin and giggles aren't helping. "Any questions?"

I raised my hand hoping that since I'm wearing a full face mask, that my posture is enough to convey that I'm bored and want this over with. "Um…yes?" he said looking surprised that I put my hand up first. I typed quickly. "okay so your idea is to go and hide in a dark area so she won't notice us?" he nodded. "If you haven't noticed we glow in the dark she might notice a red and green flashlight behind her."

"Alright." He sighed looking annoyed. "What's your plan?"

"If you go and distract her I can sneak up behind her and knock her out."

"Why don't you-"

"I can't talk and that seems to be the only thing you can do."

He stared at me with his mouth hanging open in a mix of shock and anger (oh the irony) before going to distract the doll wannabe. Here's what she looked like: dark skin, small but slight figure, storm-cloud grey eyes and snow-white hair with ice blue highlights in high curly twin tails, held by black ribbons. Her makeup was white eye shadow, blush and blue lipstick. Her outfit was a short white dress with a semi-full ice blue skirt and black under-skirts with snowflakes (black) on the shoulders and in the middle of the neck line. The sleeves were two ribbons (black and ice blue) spiralling down the arms held with a snowflake (white) clip at the wrists. Her legs were adorned with white stockings and dark blue Mary Jane's with snowflakes for buckles.

Yep. Typical ice villain. I decided to watch some sparks fly before beating her up.

She spotted the GL and smiled (yuck!) way too sweetly, batted her eye lashes and spoke the worst line in history (all things considered that is really saying something.). "*giggle* Do you want to play? How about we build a snowman!" suddenly she shot ice beams at the GL, he flew out of reach causing the beams to freeze some nearby rocks… and half a dog. "No thanks, I'm just here to break the ice." Jordan fired blasts from his ring.

Okay enough fun. I flew round the back of the fight, dodging a few stray blows and waited for the Lolita to get clear of civilians and I charged-well err technically I just beat her to a pulp but you get the idea. "Rose." Uh oh. "Our job is to stop and arrest criminals not put them in hospital." He said exasperatedly. (this is a very common argument. What can I say? I like violence.) "If it helps I was aiming to put her in the morgue" I typed trying to look innocent with my mask on. Hell he looks angry. "No. that does not help" He growled. I smirked behind my mask. Got him.

"Considering how often this happens maybe I should stay away from teams and such after all I wouldn't want to hurt the good guys as well."

"STOP trying to get out of the team. It's too late anyway." He said going from angry to smiling in an 'I've won' way. "after all todays the day."

This is the new version of chapter one. I think its an improvement. Aside from the puns.

Location: Coast City - Dropaway Beach. Time: July 4th - 12:00

Jessica's P.O.V

July 4th... Oh joy. Don't misunderstand, I enjoy this holiday as much as the next person but today the last bit of my life the ring didn't ruin is about to be over. It's hard to celebrate freedom when I'm about to lose what little I had left.

Warning: incoming cryokinetic blast.

Woah! I dodge the ice blast at the last second. "Don't you know it's rude to interrupt a melancholy monologue?" The brat just keeps firing (icering?) at me. "Oh so you banter with Jordan but not me? What are you, corpsest?!"

The target is unable to read your words at this distance.

That would also explain it. Poor eyesight could almost excuse her outfit too. Blue- white dress with a semi filled skirt and a sweet heart neckline buttoned by black/ white snowflakes covers her petite form. The sky coloured ribbons crisscrossing around her arms aren't a bad replacement for sleeves but the black frosted tights (stockings?) just seem overly detailed when added to the navy shoes and really there is no need to turn Mary Janes into platforms by putting a three inch layer of ice under them.

This is important to defeating her, how?

It isn't, but if it weren't for the excess of white makeup covering her dark skin she would almost be cute.

...blast incoming.

Ah! I'm hit by a bolt of...green? "What the hell Jordan!" I am this close to caps locking his ass off!

"You weren't responding." he sounds pissed. Rage detected. "'You hurt?" But his mask does nothing to hide a face twisted with worry. "What's got you distracted?"

"Nothing, just waiting to hear your strategy."

"…" An incredulous look and a raised eyebrow are all I get. Yeah we both know I'm bullshooting him, taking orders (from Jordan of all people) is not my forte. "Since when do you listen to me?" he asks.

"Since I just want this over with." If I could sigh through my mask I would.

"Alright then, the girl down there is Ice Lolly-ta."

"Is that a pun?"

"Unfortunately. Anyway if we fly into the trees and around, behind her we can catch her off guard and make our arrest." He's chuckling… what the? Compassion detected. Oh.

"Are you being ridiculous to cheer me up or do you need to switch to decaf?"

"Is it working?" The man's going to give himself jaw ache if he keeps smiling like that.

"Rubbing your hands evilly was a nice touch, the maniacal laughing not so much." Thanks Jordan.

The Lantern sighs "I'll take that as a maybe then. The real plan is- Duck!" A beam of ice intrudes on our conversation followed by a high pitched voice. "Don't you two know it's rude to give a lady the cold shoulder!" Time to get serious.

I type quickly: "You clear the civilians, I'll get the snowflake?"

"Deal." Jordan nods and we split up, he goes to defrost the half frozen people, leaving me to face the lollie. I zoom in close and fire a warning blast to her left, grabbing her attention so I can give her a warning. "Surrender now Ice Lolly-ta."

She looks at me, confused. "Since when do you popsicles come in different flavours?" she asks.

"Long story short, Green equals good cop." Why do I have to keep explaining this?

"And you?" Fear detected. Maybe her hair dye hasn't killed off as many brain cells after al- Oh she's charging a blast behind her back. Stupidity detected. Sigh.

"Ever seen Judge Dread?" I type. Please get the implication and give up already.

"You have got to be icei-kidding me." The blast she's hiding falters, despite the pun.

"No. But I will icei-kill you if don't put your hands up and your puns down."

"DON'T STEAL MY LINES!"

The lady's face twists in so much anger I think I see her make up cracking before her ice bolt hits me, well my shield. (Thankyou Killowog's insane training.) I give her a second to think she's won, before melting the ice encasing me. Ring, how much trouble will we be in if I let loose? You gave the target ample warning and put up with what even Lantern Gardner wouldn't define as comedy. Violence justified. Perfect.

The look on Lolly-ta's face goes from joy to fear to… well I can't see her expression with my fist in her face, one punch, two punch, three punch, four *crunch*. I can however feel her nose breaking. She's sent flying and I start to realize that I maybe shouldn't have done that as she skids to a halt in front of a tired looking GL. "Rose." Rage detected. Yep, definitely shouldn't have done that. Jordan creates a construct stretcher and lifts the villain towards an ambulance. "We're meant to stop and arrest criminals not put them in hospital." He sighs and looks on as the medical personnel drive off with three citizens and a broken doll.

"Would it help if I said I was aiming for the morgue?" Please take the bait. Please take the bait.

"NO!" YES!

"Well, perhaps I should stay away from others, don't want to hurt the good guys after all."

The Lantern pinches the bridge of his nose before shaking his head. "I know you have better control then that, besides it's too late to get out of it now." The bastards practically beaming now. "Today's the day!"

Damn it!

That's all folks! Criticism is welcome.

P.S: I'm going to mostly use the comics version of the Red Lanterns, with some things from GLTAS. If there's something you don't understand anything in the story, just say so in a review.

Okay bye.