I just re read this story for the first time in almost a year. I was appalled with my grammar and how some of the story line goes, I can defiantly say I have grown as a written since then and want to show it .I'm surprised most of you could even follow it to began with! I decided the best way for me to go is to review the chapters and edit them to my new expectations. I still like the main idea of the story just not how I portrayed it I will post another notification when its and what they new story will be called if you would like to continue to follow it. Thank you all those who supported me and expressed your encouraging thoughts.
If you would like to view one of my more recent stories please look up "escaping the inescapable"
Thank you!