A/N: heyy everyone;) so how ya beeeeen and wha dya thinks of the storry?;) heehee bet ya thought I'd forgot yee? And I'll be updating my other story on halloween:D (just thought I'd let ya know;)). So here we go! Next chappy:)

Disclaimer: I don't own peter pan I only own my OC!

Enjoy!

*Chapter 9- the kiss!*

Louise's POV:

I couldn't believe what I was hearing peter pan was telling me that he would do anything for me! My stomach did flips as he looked at me with his boyish smile I was frozen for a second then he moved his hands. I felt cold from the lack of heat from peter's warm hands.

"Anything?..." I eventually asked hesitantly.

Peter looked happy that I spoke and grinned at me.

"Anything at all! You just name it!" He said as he puffed out a bit to show that he had his pride back.

"Well... Maybe we could play a game...maybeeee...treasure hunt?!" I said remembering what hook told me about the treasure and being about hesitant to get wet and dirty.

"Treasure hunt?" Peter asked cocking his head to the side.

My heart was racing I thought he'd caught me out but then he smiled.

"That's a great idea!" He exclaimed.

He flew up and around me for a second as I let go of a breath that I didn't even realise I was holding in.

"But you'll have to think like a lost boy!" He whispered my ear.

My heart beat went up again at how close he was to my ear lobe.

" And have fun like a lost boy" he whispered into my other ear as one arm rested on my hip.

Oh no! He was on my scar! I started to panic a bit what if he noticed! I screamed at my inner self! I calmed down when he let his arm drop and he didn't seem to notice.

"Tell me what to do..." I said shakily.

Peter's POV:

I felt a scar under her night dress and decided to ask her about it later.

"Tell me what to do..." She aid shakily.

I grinned and let her go as I shot into the air crowing for the boys to come I saw her give me a weird look from the corner of my eye.

"Well! To be like us!" One of the twins said as they grabbed her hand making her hunch over a bit because of her size.

"Yes?" She asked smiling.

She looks so beautiful when she smiles... Woah! Wait did I just think that!...no, no, NO! This has to stop I'll ask tink what she thinks later.

"There are some things to know!" The other twin said grabbing her other hand making her bend even more.

" What's that?" She asked grinning at the twins.

We walked her to a log it was night time now and louise and the lads were getting tired but we carried on still doing our normal routine.

"We like to dream all day..." Cubby yawned.

" And then at night we play!" Slightly yelled as we walked across a log louise was struggling with her balance a bit but I don't think she will fall.

"We swing on limbs of trees! Till we wake up the bees!" Cubby yelled as we all ran back as a swarm of bees came after us.

"These are the thins we lost boys do!" We sang as we ran away still."

(Instead of putting the rest of the song in I'll just say what happens in this scene)

We took her to a tree and swung two at a time on vines and dropped into a pit of mud louise was last as she was unsure about it. She eventually swung and her hair went a sort of reddish purple as the sun hit it and it flew behind her. But the vine snapped and she came hurdling down into the mud with us she came back up covered in mud like we all were.

We picked her up and carried her to a sturdy tree branch as all the boys were hanging upside down with their legs latched onto the tree getting the mud off them but cubby was dangling my one hand as I was flying towards louise she was holding onto it with both arms unsure. She gave me a look as if to ask is it safe? I nodded and she let go swinging back and forth laughing.

Her laugh was amazing...OH! STOP! I can't think like this!

We piled on top of two elephants and had a waterfall of fresh water clean us off. tootles and nibbs were on the baby elephant while cubby,slightly, the twins, me and louise were on the moma elephant it went in that order to.

I got butterflies in my stomach when louise's legs went around my neck and when I looked up her chest was bouncing around from the elephant moving. I blushed crimson and payed no attention to it for the rest of the ride.

All fo us split to find different sounds.

Two of the boys sat in the tree and threw coconuts down.

Slightly threw a pumpkin on cubby's face.

While slightly was running from cubby he ran into a yawning lion.

The twins saw the bubbles from a hippo let off gas and gagged.

Slightly, nibs and louise saw a baby bird tweet.

While the boys jumped down the rocks me and louise were on a log skipping rocks.

We went into a cave and I snuck up behind her and wrapped my arms around her waist.

I didn't know what I was doing but all I knew is that it felt right. She gasped and tried to turn her head a but she went red and hid away from me. I leaned into her ear and whispered "turn around" in a deep voice even for me.

She turned and I captured her lips with mine. At first it was quite tender and I could tell that louise was shocked but eventually she got into the kiss and kissed back. Fisrt is was gentle, sweet& hesitant and then it got rougher as I felt like I needed her she must have fwlt the same because her arms were around my neck pulling me closer to her.

On impulse I wrapped my arms around her waste and deepened the kiss. We stayed like this for what seemed like a century but was only a few seconds. We pulled away as we came out of the cave it tipped over a water fall louise jumped off while I flew up with the biggest grin on my face.

A/N: soooo what dya think of the big kiss?;) shit wor it:| I'll try and make it all better I swear but I don't think it will:( no matter let me know what you think in reveiws plzzz:*

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