A/N: hope you liked the last chapter:) here's the follow up and the very last chapter:o:( x

Disclaimer: I don't own peter pan I only own my OC!

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*Chapter 11-deceived part 2(finalle)*

Louise's POV:

I didn't know what to do either run or face the consequences...

"Stop it please!" I begged.

Hook grinned at me in a way that made my skin crawl.

"I'm so sorry no can do, and thank you my lady I couldn't have done it with out you." Hook said.

My heart stopped when he said that he knew this was going to happen he planed it all! I felt my blood boil I was ready to hit him when suddenly a voice pulled me out of my thoughts.

"Louise?..." Peter asked looking at me in shock. It's like he didn't believe it...but it's true.

"I never meant-" I was cut off as hook laughed.

"Oh my, have we let the kitty out of the bag?!.." He exclaimed with glee.

He was enjoying every moment of this and I couldn't bear it.

"WAIT! You said no one would get hurt!" I screamed at him.

He looked taken aback for a second but then he returned to normal.

"..and captain hook is a man of his word I said I wouldn't harm a single hair on his head..." He paused for a second as he went over to peter.

"OW!" Peter exclaimed and hook ripped a strand of hair from his head.

"AND THIS IS THE ONE I WON'T HARM!" Hook bellowed as he dropped it in my direction.

"Here you keep it. THE REST OF HIM IS MINE!" He yelled as they started to pick up all the boys and put them into long boats.

I'd been tricked I looked to peter. The way he looked at me shook me to the bone;pure hatred and that hurt me.

"I didn't do it peter! I never agreed to this!" I cried after them as they started to drag peter away from me.

" Your a traitor louise, you lied to me!" He growled.

I was taken aback at the tone of his voice.

"And because you don't believe in fairies tink's lights goin out!" He yelled.

I gasped when he said her light was going out does he mean...die?

"Tinker bell?..." I whispered.

Peter was in the boats now I won't stand for this. I got up and ran after the boats and into the shallows. They were to far away for me to keep up.

"Peter! I- I'll save you peter I will!" I vowed.

"My dear, no one can save him now!" Hook said and began to cackle.

Peter's POV:

Hook cackles as we draw nearer to his ship the jolly rodger. I looked back at louise she looked like she was about to cry. I can't help but feel the need to run back to her and hug her, to tell he that it's okay. But it won't change anything.

I turned away but not for long as I looked back at louise again her hair was billowing out besides her in different colours. She looked beautiful. I closed my eyes to try and keep that picture in my mind. But when I opened them she was gone..

I guess she doesn't care after all.

Louise's POV:

He looked back at me and closed his eyes. I remembered what hook said.

"Not if I can help it." I said to myself as I ran for dead man's tree the boys hide out.

***Scene break***

Louise's POV:

I saw the tree I ran even faster then before.

"Tinker bell!" I screamed as I ran down the stairs.

Tinker bell! Tink! Tink!" I exclaimed.

I pulled away her leaf and I swear my heart nearly broke. Tink was lying in her home her light completely out. Even worse knowing that I caused all this...

"Oh no, it's true..." I whispered through my tears.

I picked her up and carried her over to peter's pillow. When I put her down I looked her over and cried harder.

"I'm so sorry..." I cried as I put my head in my hands.

It couldn't have been more than 30 seconds later I felt something tugging at my hair. I looked up slowly to see a bright yellow light. My heart raced a million miles an hour.. Could it be?.

"Tinker bell?" I asked breathlessly.

She spun around and sprinkled her pixie dust Everywhere. It's true! She's alive!.

"Oh, this is wonderful! Wait until peter-" I paused remembering peter and the boys on hooks ship we have to save them...

"Oh my gosh, peter!" I exclaimed.

Peter's POV:

I was tied to hooks anchor on rope with all of hooks me under me pointing their weapons at me yelling rude things that the boys shouldn't hear. As I was there I kept thinking about louise. Is she okay? Is she coming to save the boys? She won't save me... Not after the way I treated her... If I could just see her face...just hold her one last time...

"Cut him down!" I was cut from my train of thoughts at hooks words.

The boys watched as I plummeted to the deck of the ship. I heard the boys cringe. I tried to look at them but a black shiny boot was in my face.

"Any last words boy?" Hook asked me as his men lifted me up.

"Let the lost boys go!" I didn't hesitate to answer his question.

If anything happens to the boys I'll never forgive my self.

"Oh, they'll go, right after you...one by one...of the END OF THE PLANK!" Hook bellowed as he got louder and louder. Finally he pointed at the plank and smee smiled at me. Smee was okay he's never really done anything to me and the boys it's just hook and the rest of them.

Again, I was broken from my train of thought as I was thrown to the end of the plank I got up and ran back to the beginning but I was cut off from all the swords, daggers and guns pointed at me. I looked over them all to look at the boys. They were close to tears.

"Be brave lads, don't let them see you cry!" I exclaimed turning my head up to show my pride in them.

they looked at each other and wriggled around the post they were tied to and started to cry.

"Say your prayers peter pan!" Hook spat as he was about to get them all to jump on the plank and make me fall into the water.

"Not so fast you old codfish! Or you'll have to answer to me!" I heard a girls voice yell.

Everyone turned their heads in the direction of the voice and saw louise with her hair whipping about her face and body. My heart swelled with happiness. She came back! They boys were cheering but I still couldn't believe it.

"Louise?" I asked happily she looked at me and winked.

"Oh good heavens, run! Run for your lives it's!...a little girl." Hook mocked as he and his crew started to laugh.

Tink flew to he shoulder! She's alive! Louise does believe!

"Tinker bell! Your alive!" I exclaimed.

Smee heard me mention tink and knocked the captain.

"Oh look, captain a fairy to!" He said as he laughed along with the crew.

Louise was looking at something and whispered to tink. Curious as I am I watched what tink did. She flew up to hooks face and pulled faces at him. He started to swing his sword at her but a clear miss every time.

Meanwhile, louise stole one of the crews daggers swinging on one of the ropes towards the boys. Her hair simmered under the moonlight...STOP IT PETER! Not is NOT the time to daydream about her!...she went over to the boys and cut them lose cubby, as silly as he is, thought that she was trying to gut him.

"Don't just stand there ya fools! Get the girl!" Hook squealed as tink went down his sleeve and inside his red coat.

They crew went after louise and the boys. But soon lost all of them from the boys tricks. When they did catch up they were trapped by the treasure with sling shots. Tootles shot a diamond flew into the ocean and everyone watched as a pirate jumped over Bto get it.

"Gommie! Mine!, mine! Big shiny mineeee!" He yelled as he went over board.

Everything stopped for a moment the crew looked at louise and the lost boys blankly as they all smiled and shot some treasure into the ocean. Just as they thought all the pirates went flying out the ship to get them.

Hook and smee were still fighting with tink.

"Het her off me! Smee!-" Hook cowered but was cut off by smee hitting him in the face with an oar from the long boats. He caught tink in his hat after like 4 times but she pulled him over board into a long boat.

louise cautiously stepped over to hook and gently took hold of the key around his neck. But as she did hooks eyes snapped open as he went soe her wrist she snatched her hand back and fell near the rigging me, the boys and tink gasped as she had a close encounter with hooks sword. She climbed the rigging up to were I had my fight with hook.

"Louise! look out!" Slightly called out to her a she turned hook was in her face with his sword.

She fell backwards again with a scream. My heart was in my throat. I had to help her but I can't get out of these chains!

"Give up girl!" Hook told her as she whipped the hair out of her face. She looked at tink who was mimicking something to her. Louise smiled and stood up to hook.

"NEVER!" She cried.

She looked at the tip of hooks sword, she rolled her eyes and knocked it away with he hand.

"Don't you see hook? You'll never win." She said as she stepped back.

"Not as long as there is faith.." She took another step back she was getting close to the edge now.

"Trust..." Is she going to jump?!

"And.." Tink flew around her I hope this works I don't want to lose her!

"Pixie dust!" She laughed as she plummeted for the water.

I watched my heart rate getting faster and faster the closer she got to the water. Hook was bewildered.

There was a second when you couldn't see her.. I thought the worst but then she came soaring back up into the sky.

All the boys cheered and the crew were even cheering from the boat.

she flew around the skull and cross bones and ripped It off then she looked at me and flew to me.

"Unbelievable" I said as I watched her in compete amazement she's like an angel beautiful and graceful.

"Mere child's play" she said as she unchained me.

She grabbed my hands and we flew into the air together I winked at her and she blushed. The moment didn't last long.

"Got you!" Hook said as he grabbed louise by the waist and slammed her into the mast of the ship he had her by her neck.

"Ha, looks like I've got the upper hook now!" Hook said as he nodded towards louise who was struggling to breathe.

I felt my blood boil at that moment I wanted nothing more than to kill him. How dear he hurt my louise!...wait my louise? I'll figure that out later.

"Games over hook, I win HA!" I growled as I dashed my dagger at the rope that was keeping him up.

He dropped towards the deck of the ship screaming. I grinned as I picked up the anchor.

"Hey, captain you forgot your anchor!" I said as I dropped it he caught it and fell faster.

As the boys got into the boat louise fell too she'd been knocked unconscious from lack of breath. I flew to catch her. She looks beautiful even if she's asleep. We watched as hook got kidnapped my the octopus.

The whole ship sank with the octopus clinging to it with hook in hand. Luckily we all got off safely. Then out of nowhere hook comes back up and drops into his long boat of crew. The octopus started to follow them. I think it will be a long time till we see hook again.

"Hook is a codfish! a codfish! A codfish!" We were cheering as we landed on a rock I lay louise down and crowed for our victory.

"Peter?..." Louise had woken up hoarse called my name.

"Hey, you okay?" I asked as her and the boys crowded around her.

She looked up into my eyes and smiled.

"Yeah, I am now" she grinned and threw her arms around me.

The boys started cheering her. Then tink said something to me that made me stop flying.

"What's wrong peter?" Louise asked confused.

I don't want to remind her that she wanted to go home but I'd feel bad for doing this to wendy.

"Awe, you can fly now...you can go home..." I said hesitantly I watched her every move she smiled brightly.

"I-I can go home..." She laughed but stopped when she looked at the boys.

"But..." They all said and cubby blew his norse on nibb's ear.

Louise giggled as all the boys crowded her and hugged her...they never did this with wendy.

"But we'll miss you!" One of the twins said.

"Yea a lot!" Slightly added.

I realised then that I had fallen in love all this time the need to hold her, to be with her, to be near her was because I love her I don't want her to leave.

"You won't have to." She smile at them as they let her go.

"What why?" They asked.

She looked at me and grinned broadly.

"Because in staying." She said as all the boys cheered and jumped at her.

"Hope you don't mind tink.." Louise asked nervously.

Tink nodded furiously and hugged louise in the fairy way she did.

Then she came to me. She didn't need to say anything. I knew what she was going to say.

"Looks like you won the bet...and my heart ey peter?" She asked giggling shyly.

I draped my arms around her and inhaled her sweet scent.

"I'll never let you go again...I promise." And I mean that I'll never let her go.

"Good I don't want you to." She said into my chest.

As she looked up I held her hostage with a kiss again only this time we had cheers for it aswell.

Nobody's POV:

So, louise did go home that night. Ti find her dad and her sibling in the street with their mother she told them what had happened and promised that she would come and see then when she could. Peter also promised that he'd take jane and Michael to never land one day. As they flew away the words were on all their lips.

"I'll always believe in you peter pan"

~END~

A/N: whew! That took forever oh well at least it's over now:) any suggestions for a new story are welcome I'll start my slightly and nibbs one again in the Christmas holidays:D but for now I'm open to any story line between (the lord of the rings(all 3), the pirates of the caribbean(all 4), the rise of the guardians, brother bear, sonic the hedgehog, harry potter(all 8 movies), narnia (all 3), peter pan(both), alice in wonderland(2010) and others if I know them I'll try them:D).

That's all from me for now tyee!:*:D

Salute for now:)

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