Thank you for those who have read my story this far. Thank you for the reviews (bay, Nightwing 509, Boo, Izzi12) and thank you for pointing out mistakes i have made and your reviews (IsaBabisa andChronoCrescentFlames). I was unsure of how to do the rest of characters. So i am doing each one alone till they meet up with another one. Like Angela and Maura in the last Chapter. I am really trying to make each chapter over a thousand words not including my notes. I want to offer any of the people reading this a chance to help i am having a hard on what Jane would see while visiting Frost and Korsak. Any ideas i get from anyone I promise i will give credit to the person who gave it to me. I need a beta reader i can trust. let me know if you would like the job. It would be a great help someone else probably pick up my mistakes better then i could. I may also ask your opinion on more stories in the future.

December 23, 9:15 am - Frankie

Jane found herself standing in Frankie's apartment watching her bother sleep on the couch. She turned to Michael. " What am I suppose to see here, My little brother snoring?" Jane asked an annoyed, Michael can here the angry in her voice

"Just watch Jane, you mean a lot to each person I am showing you today." Michael before sitting on a kitchen stool. Jane stood next to her little brother. When suddenly an alarm started blaring. Frankie slowly sat up and shut the alarm off then headed toward the shower. Stopping briefly to turn on the coffee maker.

"I am not going in there with him!" Jane exclaimed at the smiling Angel in the kitchen.

"I wouldn't even suggest that Jane. Just watch and learn." Michael said softly, Jane looked around Frankie's apartment noticing a small pile or wrapped gifts sitting next to the door Jane walked over being her normal nosey self. If anyone asked she would just say she was being a good cop.

They waited for around twenty minutes when Frankie came half dressed in his uniform. Jane smiled at her little brother knowing he loved being a cop. Frankie always wanted to be like his big sister and followed her everywhere. Making himself a cup of coffee he shut the machine off knowing he would drink later that night cold the way he liked it really. He moved over toward a mirror his ma insisted he hang on the wall to make sure he looked okay before leaving the house.

Fixing his tie he spotted the photo taken the day Jane received her medal for going above and beyond the call of duty, and taking out a bad cop. Jane was watching him through the mirror smiling at her younger brother. Even if he could not see her Jane always smiled when it came to Frankie.

"Well Jane, today's the day. I am going to take my detectives exam, and make you proud of me." Frankie said looking at the photograph of his mentor, his hero, not that he would ever tell anyone that his older sister was his hero. Jane knew he wasn't talking directly to her, but it sure felt like it.

Frankie finished off his coffee and headed out the door. Jane turned toward Michael and asked, "He doesn't think I am proud of him?"

"Have you ever told him that you are proud of him?" Michael answered with a question.

Standing up he walked to the door and gestured for Jane to follow. Jane walked a little slower realizing she never told Frankie how proud of him she really was, come to think of it she never told Tommy either. Walking out the front door Jane found herself standing in the exam room she once sat in to take her detectives exam. Smiling when she spotted Frankie sitting toward the back taking his exam his leg shaking from nerves.

Jane went and stood behind him laying her hand on his shoulder she leaned down and whispered, Knowing that Frankie couldn't feel or hear her. "You can do this little brother I believe in you."

Though he couldn't hear or see his sister standing right behind Frankie visibly relaxed. Jane smiled as Frankie finished his exam and handed in to the instructor. He was told that, because it was slow close to Christmas he would give Frankie his results today if he was willing to wait awhile. So Frankie waited, Jane paced and Michael just watched them.

So twenty minutes later test results in a sealed envelope Frankie told the man thank you and headed to the Dirty Robber to grab something to eat before he headed out for his shift. Frankie decided to wait to open his tests results till he was with Jane, because Frankie knew in his heart that pass or fail Jane would still be proud of him for even stepping up and finally finding the courage to take the test. Jane and Michael were sitting at the booth with Frankie while he ate his lunch.

After a few minutes of watching her brother eat like a slob. Jane leaned over to her angel and asked. "How much longer are we going to watch him eat?"

"Till he is finished Jane you haven't seen what you needed to yet." Michael replied glancing at his watch. "Soon we will leave."

December 23, 2:32 - Frankie

Frankie walked out of the Dirty Robber without knowing Jane and Michael were in tow. spotted his sister and Maura walking toward him, probably getting lunch again. Frankie knew that Jane had feelings for Maura, but he also knew Jane probably never admit those feelings.

Frankie seen the whole thing go down from the speeding SUV to Jane covering Maura and taking her to the ground. He stood there for a moment in complete shock before running toward his big sister upon seeing the blood he sent out the code for officer down. The medic's were there in few moments Frankie told Maura it would be best if she went with Jane.

Frankie broke into a dead run back to the station to tell everyone there what had happened. Jane and Michael kept pass, Jane could see the tears and completely terror in her baby brothers eyes. Something she never wants to see again.

Frankie arrived at the cafe first to see Frost and Korsak talking to Angela, "We got to go, Jane was just shot by the Dirty robber!" Frankie his voice loud enough to make every head in the cafe turn toward him.

"Frankie what happened?" Frost asked before anyone else could.

"I was walking out of the Dirty Robber and I seen Maura and Jane walking toward me when out of nowhere this black SUV went speeding by a gunman was hanging out the window shooting. Jane covered Maura, she was hit." Frankie said taking a deep breath "Shes on her way to Boston General now."

Let's go, come on Angela you can ride with us." Korsak said heading for the front doors of the station.

Michael and Jane we left standing in the cafe watching her family and friends leave to go to the hospital. "So now where?" Jane asked turning toward Michael.

"You will see soon enough Jane. Remember you must have patience today." Michael said as he walked toward the.

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