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"Lightpaw," Redstar meowed peeking in. "It's time for training!" Lightpaw sat up and blinked slowly. Then she shot up realizing the she was an apprentice and Redstar himself was her mentor.
"Okay," she mewed, still a little groggy from the abrupt awakening. Lightpaw padded out of her den and saw Redstar standing by the camp entrance.
"Good, you're up," he meowed, not unkindly. "Obviously we're going to go around the territory then we'll practice hunting because the day is still young." he meowed answering the question the tip of that was on the tip of Lightpaw's tongue. They bounded out of camp and into the forest.
"They came up to a strange smelling tree. Lightpaw thought for a minute before saying. "This is the owl tree isn't it. Well I'm not falling for the old owl pellets trick, Rainpaw already told me about it."
"Oh did she?" He purred, "I might just have to put her on elders duty then, that's my favorite part about training apprentices and she just ruined it."
"Okay let's go to the thunderpath that serves as the border between Shadowclan and us." They bound through the forest until they smell an acrid scent. "Take a deep breath that's the stench of a thunderpath." Redstar meowed with distaste.
"Okay let's go," she said, "This place is scary."
"I agree." Redstar mewed bounding away. They saw the entire territory and by the time they got back Lightpaw was ready for a huge mouse.
"Okay, even though I said we'd have enough time for hunting that's not going to work out, you're just going to go with Cloudnose and do what he's doing with Darkpaw." Lightpaw nodded and then bounded off to eat some well earned freshkill."
Yes I'm done for the day, did I leave you wanting more? Well too bad! I want at least 1 review before I post the next chapter.