hey I'm back with more of Lightpaw, she's at herjoint training session with Cloudnose and Darkpaw. Make sure you read Mossfire89's stuff cause she's a really good writer but doesn't have many views.

"Come on, Lightpaw. Attack me!" Cloudnose prompted. Darkpaw was snickering and Sandpaw and Gingerpaw were looking worried. Lightpaw wasn't going to let Darkpaw make her look like a fool so she jumped on top of him. Right before Cloudnose rolled over she hit him on the head and jumped off. She stuck the landing akwardly and stumbled. Cloudnose used this to pin her to the ground.

Lightpaw remembered seeing Bumblepaw go limp, then attack so she stopped struggling and and took shallow breaths. Cloudnose stopped pushing on her shoulders and stooped to sniff her, she jumped up and clamped onto his face with the apprentices looking on in awe.

"Enough!" Cried Cloudnose. "Very good, all of you. Now Darkpaw show us your mouse stalking couch." Darkpaw nodded and stooped into the couch and pulled himself forward. But he didn't notice the twig and cracked it.

"What did Darkpaw do wrong?" Cloudnose asked.

"He didn't focus on all of his surroundings." Gingerpaw answered.

"Yeah," Sandpaw added. "A mouse will hear you before it smells you."

"Correct!" Cloudnose meowed. "Now since you and Lightpaw are new and have never hunted I expect Gingerpaw and Sandpaw to help you." Hazelpounce and Whiskerleaf nodded their approval.

"Gingerpaw," Hazelpounce meowed,"I expect you will treat Darkpaw with courtesy when you hunt together."

"Sandpaw will go with Lightpaw." Whiskerleaf decided.

"Good" Cloudnose meowed. "Now off you go." He meowed flicking his tail. The apprentices didn't look back when they bounded to the forest.

"I know where we could hunt!" Lightpaw meowed excitedly, she was proud that Sandpaw was picked to be her partner.

"Where?" Sandpaw added asked.

"When Redstar and I explored the territory I noticed lots of prey scents aways from the thunderpath." She mewed. Sandpaw nodded and they bounded off to the Shaowclan border.

Lightpaw heard the chirping of a bird and a faint splash. Then she saw it, a starling splashing in a puddle. Lightpaw motioned to Sandpaw and they stalked ever so lightly until Lightpaw scared it right into Sandpaw's waiting claws. They buried it and caught a mouse but missed a thrush. Happy with their prey they grabbed the startling and headed through the trees to camp.

Sandpaw and Lightpaw walked proudly into camp until they saw Gingerpaw and Darkpaw proudly holding three pieces of prey each. Sandpaw and Lightpaw tried to hide their envy as Cloudnose and Hazelpounce praised them. Whiskerleaf nodded his approval and strode away to compliment. Darkpaw and Gingerpaw on their prey.

Lightpaw put her and Sandpaw's pretty on the pile and then started to grab a large rabbit, but Darkpaw shouldered his way past and snatched it she then grabbed a mouse and large vole for Sandpaw, Rainpaw, and her to share. She sat down near the stump with Sandpaw and they waited for Rainpaw to stop talking to Whitefur and join them.

so who is your favorite cat? Rainpaw, Lightpaw, or Sandpaw. Their relationship is gonna be like Firepaw, Graypaw, and Ravenpaw's friendship. Please review I need 3 reviews before I'll post again. And other things you put might need to know. Gingerpaw and Sandpaw are siblings and no LightxSand it's messed up because Lightpaw, Rainpaw, and Sandpaw are besties ok?