Super Luigi Sunshine! Part 9; Red Coins!
Shine 4/5: Is formed by red coins.

A/N: This has been retyped, only one more retype left until I can actually start making newer chapters... yay I guess...

Part of the old A/N: Very important that I mention this, the crystal creature is a shout-out to Crystal Spear, and the… secret being near the end is a shout-out to bowser-jr-is-awsome! Both very nice people who are reading this story AND going a bit further…So, I'll like to thank Cujo5150, Crystal Spear, bowser-jr-is-awsome and everyone else who reads this for allowing this story to reach 500 views! Thanks! (Now 1'256)

^Delfino Plaza^
Mario had tried his best to climb down the tower earlier, he failed but landed safely in the water and after returning to the Pianta's house he found FLUDD and guessed that he must have left it there. Skipping lunch Mario had decided to go back to Bianco Hills, but the portal was gone!

(Mario)
I tap on the stone statue's giant stand, it was solid again! "Not slacking off are we?" A rasped voice says and I turn around to see a Police Officer.
"No, I had a way to Bianco Hills through-ah portal like thing here but it's-ah missing," I tell the officer.
"Highly unlikely but if you need to go to Bianco Hills speak with Felix, he'll know a way you can get there especially since all the normal ways are ruined because of your mess!" The Officer says.
"Uh… who-ah Felix?" I ask.
"The Island's Leader, he lives in the big house with a Pineapple on top of it," The Officer says pointing at the house behind the statue.
"Thanks! I'll get all the messes cleaned up in-ah no time!" I say and run off to the large house.
I open the door and walk in, I walked over to a receptionist desk.
"Hello, why are you here?" The Pianta receptionist asked.
"To speak with Felix about getting to Bianco Hills," I answer.
"You'll have to wait a bit, he's in a important meeting," The Reception says.
"Alright! I'll just-ta sit here!" I say and sit on one of the many chairs.

^Bianco Hills^
Luigi was taking a risk, he had got Iggy to use the pump to remove the portal that the annoying girl had made so he could place some Red Coins that Mario would have to get if he wanted another Shine. But if Mario got into Bianco Hills a different way then he'll be caught, luckily you had to speak with the leader of the island to learn how, said leader was in a meeting with Bowser Junior in the form of the Head Police Officer who we had found and trapped somewhere. Luigi walked into the village, he had went through the portal himself before it was removed and saw Gonzalo waiting, Gonzalo had been tricking Mario into going to the Shines locations but each time he would succeed! If he gets all the Shines before Peach is kidnapped then he'll be in it for sure with Bowser!

(Luigi)
I hopped onto a log and crossed a small river, the large village was just ahead, unlike Mario I had a map! (Mario does have a map but Luigi's is in actual detail) I walk over to a Pianta.
"Howdy mate! You look familiar? You wouldn't happen to be related to that Mario guy who saved me a while back now would you?" The Pianta asked.
"Uh… I may be," I say.
"Don't be shy! I've seen a fake Mario cause some mess so I believe that Mario is innocent!" The Pianta says.
"Oh okay then, bye," I say and walk passed him and into the village. I had eight red coins with me, once combined they'll make a Shine, luckily I have a second pocket for one so they didn't all combine. I walk to a house and look at the door, it was just a normal wooden door with no difference to the rest. I pull out the magic brush (Bowser Junior gave it to Luigi to use) and draw a red M on it, I then press the coin inside of it and it sunk down and became trapped in the goopy void. I quickly move away from the door so no one noticed me making graffiti. I see a tightrope attaching a small wind turbine to a cliff so I run to the cliff and jump my way up, I walk across the tightrope using the brush to balance me, the wind blew a bit and the brush made a streak of goo drip off, it spazzed out and made a whirlwind type creature. I hurry across while it darted at me. It missed and I reached the platform. I place a coin down and start making a red M, it sunk in before I finished the last line and the whirlwind hit me, making the last I of the M go at an angle.
"It's not supposed to go at/on an angle!" I mutter annoyed at the messy graffiti and land down into the river. I climb out and noticed a red coin flow down stream, oh well, it'll be harder to get now. A bird flew passed so I flick the brush, a streak of red goop flew out and hit the bird, it fell to the ground withering it pain so I dip it in the water and then pull out the now clean bird. I stab it with the brush and it changed, I then place a small M on its beak and put the red coin it, I let go and the bird flew off, half left!

^Delfino Plaza | Mayor's House^
Mario waited, he was bored, so bored he had taken out all the pins holding up documents and rearranged them into a large M, luckily all were red top pins.
"Do you mind!" The reception says and walked over, the Pianta picked up all the documents and resorted everything, Mario snuck passed her and into the door marked 'Presidential Meeting room'. Mario closed the door quietly and turned around, two Piantas were looking at him, one wore a suit and the other a police uniform.
"We are in a meeting!" The Mayor says.
"Mario! Why do you trouble us? And shouldn't you be off cleaning up the island!" The Policeman says standing up.
"I can't, I came to ask for a way to get to Bianco Hi-" Mario starts.
"LEAVE! We are very busy!" The Policeman says.
"Wait! What is it that effects your duties in cleaning up?" The Mayor asked.
"I can't go to Bianco Hills," Mario says.
"Is that all? Mr. Mayor, send him to a policeman to deal with this! Do not waste your time!" The Policeman says.
"It is alright, now Mario, what is your last name so this can be formal," Felix says.
"Mario," Mario says.
"Ahh… okay, uh.. Hmm… Mr. Mario…" Felix starts causing a slightly awkward silence.
"Yes?" Mario asked after the silence.
"You wish to go to Bianco Hills for what reason?" Felix asked.
"So I can clean up the shine scattering mess that I have been accused of making," Mario says.
"When did this happen?" Felix asked.
"A few days ago, I arrived, went to court…" Mario says.
"Oh okay, well then… since it is a requirement that you clean up the island I guess you can take the PDP for Bianco Hills," Felix says and stood up.
"But sir…" The Policeman says.
"It is alright, I have trust in someone who's name is the same as their last name!" Felix says and walked through a second door.
After it closed the Policeman looked at Mario. "You scum! You just can't help yourself can you! But just you wait! Peach will be saved!" The Pianta says.
"Huh? What now? I wasn't listening," Mario says.
"I've had enough of this!" The Pianta says, it jumped up back-flipping and landed down as Mario, but to Mario it looked like a darker shade.
"It's you!" Mario gasped pointing. Shadow Mario then jumped out a window and ran off with glass penetrating its shadowy body.
"Here it is!" Felix says coming back in, "Why is the Head of Police gone?" Felix asked.
"He jumped out the window," Emile says.
"Who said that?!" Felix asked while he looked left and right.
"Oh that's just FLUDD, my jerky pump," Mario says while the Mayor handed over a small sphere with a twistable top half.
"You twist it and it activates a Proton Devirtualising Proximity field that warps you to the location it was first activated in," Felix says.
"Awesome! I'll try it!" Mario says about to twist.
"WAIT!" Felix shouts as Mario twisted it, it made a bubble like thing around Mario and FLUDD and then it vanished, but when it vanished it burst out a flash of light followed by extreme pressure waves, shattering the remaining window and all pressure damageable things in the meeting room.

^Corona Mountain | Bowser's Base^
Iggy walked into a room in the Corona Mountain base, he was glancing at things amazed at what was hidden down here. "Iggy! Get over here now!" Bowser yelled.
"Coming my eminence!" Iggy says rushing towards where he heard his father's voice, He rushed into a room and saw his father.
"Iggy, it is time you met your brother!" Bowser says pointing at a younger looking version of himself.
"Hi there…" Iggy says while he slowly but awkwardly waved.
"Hello Iggy, my name is Bowser Junior," Bowser Junior says.
"Good, now you two must save your mother Peach from Mario!" Bowser says and Bowser Junior walked off to do his fathers bidding.
"Ah Mother Peach?" Iggy asked.
"Just play along," Bowser whispered.

^Bianco Hills^
Luigi was just about to leave when his Comm. Link went off, taking it from his pocket Luigi activated the receiving process.
"Gonzalo here, Mario just appeared!" Gonzalo says and shut off the communication Link.
Luigi panicked, Mario would see him! Quickly he drew a large circle into the ground and hopped through the temporary portal, it then sucked itself to death shortly after. Now inside the goop zone Luigi hurried off to the exit that led to the Pinna Park base, it was risky to use this way and even more risky to have a path to the base but it worked and meant avoiding a lot of time wasting procedures.

(Mario)
I appear in Bianco Hills. "Was that okay Emile?" I ask and looked at the orb, a gaseous gunk then bellowed out.
"I am fine, but you should be worried that my stink detectors are reading highly toxic smells," Emile says.
"You have stink detectors?" I ask while the foul looking gas seeped into my nose and my large eyes instantly watered, whatever the smell was it stank! It smelled like… "Pew! That stinks like dead pie!" I mutter.
"Not denying, since I can't smell, but how can a pie smell dead?" FLUDD asked, I ignored the pump and walk over to the helpful Pianta.
"Hi there!" I say smiling, I hid the orb in a pocket.
"Hello Mario!" The sunglasses wearing Pianta says.
"Any news about Shines?"
"Yes, I learnt that the fake version of you was going to sell a stack of eight red coins. These red coins when combined form a Shine Sprite, luckily for you the hotel owner of Hotel Delfino had confronted that fake you and somehow saw through the disguise so, by using a large Mech he owned he fought against the impostor! He easily had won with his super awesome kickass moves and really cool skills and ninja like reflexes..." The Pianta was says.
"I though he used a robot?" Mario interrupts.
"But anyway, after he defeated them they lost the coins but the coins were scattered about Bianco Hills' Village! You must quickly get them before the faker sends in something to get them!" The Pianta says.
"I understand! Thank you… uh… I believe you haven't told me your name?" I explain. Emile made a sound like a sigh.
"Well uh… call me Mr. Shades!" Mr. Shades says.
"Okay, thanks Mr. Shades!" I say and run off towards the village.
"How good is your memory?" Emile asked.
"Good, why?" I ask and slip on the slippery wet part of the path, I slide down and slam into the floating log…

^Corona Mountain | Bowser's Base^
"Bastian!" A shrill voice yelled from deep within the mountain. A mutant Goomba that resembled the G06 mutant stains rushed into the room that the voice came from, A Koopa wearing Saxe coloured clothes was sitting on a throne-like pedestal. Bastian, a mutant Goomba, was taller then the Koopa even when the Koopa sat atop the throne. "I need you to make sure Bowser's sons and newly accented comrade's plan doesn't fail, you are to get the eight red coins and deliver them to me, I see no point in teasing Mario, doing so will allow him to gain the Shines!" The Koopa ordered.
"Yes my lord!" Bastian says bowing, he had long skinny arms and legs but his strength was far greater then even Bowser's, he had a normal Goomba head but he also had long legs, long arms sticking from the sides and two pointy cat ears, he had fangs like most Goombas but his were sharper and longer, his eyes were smaller then normal Goombas but were more focused, allowing further sight. Although being absent of a nose he could smell through his eyes (uh what?).
"Make sure you do not fail! You are my best creation Bastian! I expect nothing less then victory, now go!" The Koopa yelled.
"It will be done my lord!" Bastian says and ran off.
"Have faith he said (referring to something Bowser said), why should I? He's using a baby and his rival's brother!" The Koopa snarled to himself.

^Bianco Hills^
Mario climbed out of the river and saw a dancing Pianta.
"Hello there!" He says, he was the goop covered one from before.
"Hi!" Mario says and walked passed him. The Pianta felt sad at this, people were avoiding him… did he smell? The Pianta then jumped into the river Mario had came from. Ignoring the random splashing sound Mario walked to a house.
"HEY YOU! DO YOU THINK IT'S FUNNY TO PAINT MY HOUSE WITH YOUR HORRID GOOP!?" A Pianta yelled, obviously mad at Mario. She ran to Mario and he backed off a bit, not because of her anger but because she held a metal ruler.
"What-ta you talking about?" Mario asked and she pointed at her door, a bright red M was on it.
"That wasn't me! I would-ah never do that-ta!" Mario says panicked. He then spayed the M but it didn't come off like the normal goop. "Uh… give me a moment and it'll be gone…" Mario says worriedly while he looked at the sharp, metal ruler in the angry woman's hands.
"It better!" She rasped and stormed off.
"Maybe try concentrating a stream of water?" Emile says, Mario nods and starts to spray the large, red M that was on the wooden door. After about five minutes it started to fade…

Bastian stood atop a hill at Bianco Hills, a small crystal orb in his hand.
"My minion, it is time to strike. Gather the eight red coins for me and fulfil your duties, if you do I'll let you stay out of the sphere form!" Bastian says to the pink, crystal sphere.
'yes master' A faint voice wisps. Bastian then held the orb up high and it flashed pink, a polygonal creature then landed down next to him, it was his height but more humanoid, besides from the fact that it had large orbs attached to the elbows, shoulders, knees and the palms, it also was made of pink coloured crystals. (If you can't picture that then: Basically Samus Aran's varia suit but with aforementioned orbs and colouration)
'I will not fail you master, I'll make you proud,' The creature wisps, its voice sounding quiet and ghostlike, also sounding slightly like a female. Bastian smiled at this as the creature jumped off the hill and fell down towards the village below…
"That saves me some time, now to head off and sunbake for a few hours…" Bastian mumbled and ran off.

^Later^
It had been twenty minutes since Mario had started cleaning the door but it was finally gone! "I-ah did it!" Mario yelled.
"Quiet!" The Pianta yelled and slammed the metal ruler down onto his head, she then stormed off into her house.
"That could have gone better," FLUDD says.
"At least she didn't hit my face!" Mario says and a red coin flew out of the door (it was inside the goop) and slammed into Mario's face, the impact knocking Mario over… landing on FLUDD. "Yay! I-ah got one!" Mario shouts.

The crystal creature stalked towards a Blob, inside of its somewhat transparent skin was a Red Coin. After getting near the Blob it just… slowly tried to move away but the coin was weighing it down. The crystal thing made a light pink spear (made of crystals) form in its hand, it threw the spear and it stabbed through the Blob killing it and leaving the Red Coin. 'master will be pleased,' The creature hissed silently as it stalked over to the Coin, its sharply tipped legs making no noise as it crossed the grassy ground towards the coin. After getting that coin the creature spotted two other Blobs that were desperately trying to escape.

Mario was looking around the village for Red Coins when a gust of wind blew his hat off.
"MY HAT!" Mario screamed and tried to chase it, it flew up higher so Mario jumped on top of a Pianta to get on top of a house, he climbed up the pointed roof and grabbed for the hat but Something sharp then stabs into his hand, Mario shrieked and fell backwards. He then began tumbling down the roof as the Bird and Whirlwind made 'laughing' sounds.
(Mario)
I land with a thud next to a Pianta and stood up.
"If I could feel pain that would have hurt, but my seismic sensors show that most of the impact was absorbed by your nose when it crashed into the gravel ground," Emile says.
"What don't you have?" I ask.
"Nukes, fusion bombs, fission bombs, lava, acid, you do know I can go on listing the most ridiculous things that I know, which is a lot seeing as I am a supercomputer," Emile says.
"You're not a supercomputer!" I yell and saw the freaked out Pianta run off scared at me and a pump fighting. My hat then flies passed me. I jump up and miss, landing down near a house I quickly climb up and once on top of the house I spotted a tightrope leading to a wooden platform with my hat on it. I pull myself up and slowly start to walk across the tightrope.
"Incoming," FLUDD says as a bird swooped towards me, I quickly spray it making it explode and making a Red Coin fly off, the coin was then caught by a whirlwind with a twisted face.
"ECH ZA!" The whirlwind roared and sparks flew from the coin that resided in its centre.
"HELP ME FLUDD!" I scream and start to run across the tightrope, arcs of lightning firing at me. One of the aforementioned arcs hit the tightrope and made a glowing red spark that had a devilish face, the thing then moved quickly after me. I spray it and it grew larger.
"Not a good idea," Emile says. I reach the end and grab my hat, a red M was under it. I start to spray but the whirlwind flew at me, the water hit it and it exploded into a gust of water and wind, the M vanished into a coin and so did the whirlwind, all three coins then fall with me down into the river.
I climb out and put the coins with the other one. One coin was in the river! It was stuck in-between the wooden planks that filtered the water from larger objects. I walk to it smiling. Upon reaching it something slammed down into the river, splashing me and FLUDD with water.
"HEY!" I yell and saw that it was a pink clump of crystals, the crystals stood up and grabbed the coin. It hopped out of the water and looked at me.
'scanning…' it wisps, a red light projecting from a orb shaped thing at the stomach, which was sadly my height. 'you are Mario… give me your Red Coins…' it snarled and held out a smooth but sharp hand, the tips of each finger were pointed and the hand had an orb atop it. (Not on the palm but the other side)
"NO!" I yell and see the things circular holes (in the head for eyes) slant, giving the crystal beast a angry look.
"THEN DIE!" It roared and pushed me away, its voice no longer quiet.
(Not Mario's Perspective)
Mario slammed against a house, dinting the hard wood. Looking up he saw the crystal creature still near the river some fifty metres away.
"ACTIVATING PROTOCAL ALPHA!" The creature roared and glowed pink, the orbs however glowed brightly orange. Light so bright it hurt Mario's eyes. Once it dispersed the thing had changed shape, it was now the shape of Petey but made of pink crystals and the occasional glowing orb. Each orb was glowing a very bright Saxe blue colour and had a tiny orange dot in the centre.
"How do you-ah do that?" Mario asked aiming his FLUDD at the approaching doppelganger of Petey.
"Give me the red coins!" Petey roared sounding like a mix between static, petey's voice and the crystal creatures voice. Mario just whimpered as he waited for the beast to get closer. "Last chance Mario! Hand them over!" Petey roared holding out a crystallised leaf-shaped arm.
"NO!" Mario yelled and sprayed into Petey's mouth, the orbs all flashed and a large spike made of crystal flew out of Petey's mouth and at Mario. Mario jumped aside as the large spike smashed into a wooden house, causing the roof and walls to cave in. "I need those Red Coins!" Mario says and ducked under another spike. Petey then made a crystal spear appear in his leaf-shaped hand, he (although the creature in Petey's form is female) threw the spear and it flew into Mario, plunging him backwards and into the river. The clear water then began to change to a red tinted colour as Mario swam up while feeling large amounts of pain from his chest. However after impacting with a hard rock at the bottom of the river the spear had dislodged itself from his chest, now a quick stream of blood dripped out from the wound was. "That hurt!" Mario yells and made a fireball in one hand, a trick he got from being dared to eat a fire flower by Luigi some time ago.
"Mario, what will fire do to crystal?" Emile asked, Mario ignored it in favour of dodging a barrage of small crystals that Petey had spewed. Many of the sharp shards had however got Mario's leg, tripping him.
"Give it up Mario!" The creature roared sounding very static-y.
"I need those coins to get the shines to restore my hero status!" Mario yelled and saw Petey open his mouth to spew out tiny crystal shards. Aiming with his left hand Mario pushed his right palm forward throwing a fireball, it missed the mouth and hit one of the orbs, the orb flashed orange and exploded, flinging Petey into a cliff and after the blast Petey's form dissolved into a pink liquid that flashed pink before forming a small pink orb, five Red Coins then burst from the orb… Mario walked over to the coins, quickly grabbing them.
"Hey Emile, how do I combine them?" Mario asked his pump.
"Squish 'em together," Emile says and Mario slammed two coins together, causing them to merge. He then repeated this tactic until only two coins were left.
"Alright! We did it!" Mario says and overly dramatically slammed the last two together, the two merged and exploded with enough force to fling Mario into a Tree. Where the coin once was now floated a Shine Sprite. "I did it!" Mario yells slightly dazed as he ran towards it... kind of...

Bastian stood atop a hill, he had watched the whole fight and was disgusted! His minion was weak! So weak it was pathetic! Bastian held out his hand and the pink orb well over one hundred metres away flew towards him, it didn't just fly fast it flew so fast the pink orb was just a blur. It stopped in his hand and Bastian looked down frowning at the orb.
"You failed me Crystal Spear!" Bastian growled.
'sorry master,' The orb wisps.
"I should punish you! Make you suffer! Make you realise that now I get punished for your failure!" Bastian sneered, his eyes glaring at the orb.
'sorry master, please give me another chance, I underestimated him,' The orb pleaded.
"You don't deserve another chance! But because I am kind I'll allow you another go! But this time…" Bastian says and a blue slime flew across the ground and stopped next to Bastian, "…you work with B-JIA! (Pronounced: Be Jye-ah)!" Bastian finished and the slime revealed two dark purple eyes and a sneering smirk.
"Consider Mario dead Sir Bastian!" B-JIA says.

Old A/N: Crystal Spear is a shout-out to Crystal Spear, a user who has supported this story. B-JIA is a shout-out to bowser-jr-is-awsome, who has also supported this , if anyone has ANY ideas for secret ones just make a review or use the forums, or email me at keithbellicatgmaildotcom Thanks! But one condition with suggestions; unless I use it after the 'real' places I will not accept ones that ARE IN the real places, so be creative, I'll always give credit even if you don't have an account, just make the review either asking who you wish to be addressed as or put that as the anonymous name. (The bit you can change above the actual review)Thanks again for reading and I hope to update again soon! Bye! Also, I'm changing the Hellcourses, so they won't be that horrible fail of a chapter like the previous chapter was.

New A/N: Not really anything to say because the old one mainly covers everything, hopefully this story is better now that it's fixed up. Not sure if the next chapter is mucked up but knowing me and how lucky I am it probably is... I probably won't enough time before school though...