When Warriors Goes Wrong

by Griffinblitz

When Warriors Goes Wrong is a hilarious parody of warriors. People can review and make a character that I will use. Reviewers and people who like the story can vote on somethings, help with ideas, and make characters. This will include derps, randomness, total awesome syndrome, laughing hard, and more.

3. Chapter 3: A camping trip

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Hollyleaf Rockz: Okay. Nightmare/ Nightmareclaw is in.

Silenthunder: Shimmereyes, Owlmind, and Sparkkit/paw/gleam is in too.

Randomstar of Awesomeclan: I'm going to do a vote for the new clan's name.

Bookworm45669: Who needs angermanagement and belches Justin Beiber when she's mad, Firestorm or Shadowblaze?

(In Thunderclan.)

Bramblestar: I need a group of cats! Lionblaze, Griffinblitz, Icecloud, Foxleap, and Cloudtail.

Starkit: How about me?

Bramblestar: No

Starkit: Makes an adorable face.

Bramblestar: Okay.

Griffinblitz: (Texting.) So, what is it?

Bramblestar: We're going camping!

Lionblaze: Don't we do that every day?

Bramblestar: We're leaving normal to go to The Halawala Forests!

Cloudtail: Halawala? (Rolls eyes.)

Bramblestar: Also, no video games or electronics! (Takes Griffinblitz's phone and throws it away.

Griffinblitz: NOOOOOOOOO!

Bramblestar: Done yet?

Griffinblitz: Nope. NOOOOOOOO!

Bramblestar: Oh yeah. Brackenfur is in charge.

All of the cats leaving: (Run out the side.)

Bramblestar: (Blushing.) Oops. Wrong way. That was the Dirtplace.

All: (Run out the entrance.)

(At the forest entrance.)

Bramblestar: Which way do I go? (Looks at signs.) Halawala way, or Night and dusk path? Definitely not Halawala way.

All of the camping cats: (Walk into the dark forest.)

Starkit: Are we there yet?

Cloudtail: That is the 16 1/2 time you asked that!

Lionblaze: (Looks at Griffinblitz.) I don't even understand the "and a half part."

Griffinblitz: Hah. Yeah.

Starkit: (Uses time machine.) We're here!

Bramblestar: I'll set up the tent. (He is crushed by it.)

Icecloud: Done! (Finishes the tent.)

Foxleap: Cool.

?: I know right.

All: AAAAAAAAHHHH!

?: I'm Shimmereyes!

Cloudtail: Uh. Hey.

Shimmereyes: (Just sits and stares.)

Cloudtail: (Whispers.) Please make her leave.

Icecloud: Pillow fight!

Foxleap: (Runs at his sister only to be hit back hard.)

Icecloud: I've taken almost everyone out.

Lionblaze: One more.

(Lionblaze and Icecloud fall into battle, swinging the pillows at each other.)

Lionblaze: It's time to end this!

Icecloud: I couldn't agree more. (Lights her pillow up magically.)

Lionblaze: (Does the same, but nothing happens.) How do you do it.

Icecloud: (Wiggles fingers.) Batteries!

Lionblaze: Oh. (Tries.) It didn't work!

Icecloud: Do it with your mind powers.

Lionblaze: (Thinks and then it lights up.)

Icecloud: That was supposed to be a joke!

Lionblaze: The joke is on you! (Hits her with the pillow.)

Both: (Use the pillows like lightsabers.)

Icecloud: Fine! You win!

Starkit: You forgot about me!

Lionblaze: I can win to a kit!

Starkit: Please let me win.

Lionblaze: Okay! (Flies out the side of the tent.)

(The whole tent toppled over and set on fire. Then it started to pour.)

Shimmereyes: Now what?

Foxleap: I know! Lionblaze hunts, Griffinblitz gathers water, Icecloud and Igather branches and leaves for shelter, Starkit sits here and looks cute, Cloudtail finds herbs, and Bramblestar protects the area!

Shimmereyes: What about me?

Foxleap: Go sit in that tree!

Shimmereyes: Yay!

(Deeper in the forest.)

Lionblaze: Almost there.

Bear: (Growls.)

Lionblaze: That is one huge mouse! (Runs and then trips.)

Bear: (Towers over Lionblaze.)

Lionblaze: I wish that something else would save me.

Cloudtail: Never fear! Cloudtail is here! (Flies into the distance.)

Lionblaze: I wish something else would save me.

Bear: (Pulls out salt and sprinkles it on Lionblaze.)

Lionblaze: Oh, that's original. (Rubs his paw on his fur and then licks it.) That's too much anyways! According to Leafpool, that could give you a hard attack!

Griffinblitz: Hiya! (Kicks the bear.)

Bear: (Runs away.)

Lionblaze: (Hugs her.)

Cinderheart: What is going on here?

Lionblaze: It's not what it looks like!

All: (Return to the camp.)

Bear: (Returns.)

All: To the camp! (Run home.)

(Later.)

Lionblaze: You wer amazing back there. (Goes to kiss her.)

Griffinblitz: (Pepper sprays Lionblaze.)

Lionblaze: I thought we had something!

Dragonblaze: So he likes you huh?

Griffinblitz: He's okay, but I wouldn't take it that far. I'm just glad I have my phone back.

Info:

Im gonna have a vote for the new clan. So far the options are Rainbowclan (My idea.) and Awesomeclan (Randomstar of Awesomeclan's idea.) Nobody can vote yet. 3 more people can post ideas for clan names.

About ocs and ideas. People can definitely post ideas and ocs. The more the better. If you posted an oc that wasn't in this chapter, I didn't ignore it. I will use it in the story as fast as possible.