Due south Chapter 4

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The Mountie slowly opened the door reviling an empty front room and

Ray was no were to be seen.

"Ray. Where are you?," he stept through the door followed by his father.

"Mabey I should go, I mean it is between you and your friend and when

you find him what can I do?" after a second he walked of into a beam

of White light leaving his son alone.

"Ray were are you? RAY" he was becoming uncomfortable with the

silence, he was getting no reply from Ray.

He moved toward to kitchen

Fraiser had realised it was to late to ask his primission to take Ray

to the hospital. He wasted to much time that now is running out. Fast,

Fraiser made up his mind that there was no point in calling an

ambulance for 3 reasons, 1 it would take to long for them to get here

due to the Christmas traffic, 2 they would be having a Christmas party

3 he could not find the Phone in Rays apartment.

So Fraiser finally came to a concluion " Right ray looks like he can't

hang on much longer, vert well then Ray you will have to come with me."

Hoisting Ray up into a firemans carry he exited his apartment.

Avoiding all of the laughs and giggles coming from the crowd he mange

to get Ray to the hospital.

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Fraiser was getting so impatient just sitting there. He was trying to

convince himselfthat it is not a hard procedure in fact the do this

every day.

So why was he so scared, he finilly decided to go out and get some air

instead of sitting in a stuffy hospital waiting room nearly drowning

to death in fear for his friend.

3 hours went by and he decided to go inside, when a doctor fame

running it searching for him.

"are you fraiser?" the young doctor asked panting for breath.

"yes I am how may I help you?" the doctor was very young aroung the

age of 20 he had short blonde hair and had a very skinney frame kinda

like if you hugged him he would breake.

"you came in with that police man didn't you?"

"you are correct." fraiser replied hoping that the news he was about

to recive was good.

" your friend' Ray was it? Is alrite for the moment but we really

can't be sure so we are keeping him in over night." the doctor was

tryign to sound certin. He could not understand why he had a feeling

that somthing was wrong.

The doctor pointed thr Mountie in the direction of rays room and moved

on to other things he had to do.

Fraiser felt bad seeing his headstrong friend lying helplessly in a

hospital bed. Ray began to come out of his unconiouss state and into

the world of the living.

"Hey Ray are you feeling any better?" fraiser placed his hat onthe end

of Rays bed and sat down on the chair next to him.

"Well I feel like I have been hit by a train but apart from that, yep

I'm fine." he shifted in his bed to try and sit up when white hot pain

shot from his stomch

"Take It easy." Fraiser helped lower him back down on to the bed.

"So how long was I out for?" ray rubbed his head, after he collapsed

everything was fuzzy. At one point he was in his bathroom and the next

he was lying in a hospital bed, one thing he needed to fillnin the

blanks of what had happens durin the time he was out.

"Fraiser how long was I out for? And how did you get me here?" Fraiser

wanted to explain how he had found him on the floor and had carried

him all the way here but he could not bring himself to do it that is a

story that he would leave for another day but till then he would shrug

and avoid the questions.

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