So here I am. Well the poll I put up for their date has a winner. And it is… NOT TELLING! You'll just have to read and find out. This chapter might be the longest I've written for this story. I'm warning you guys this chapter is going to be VERY intense!! Anyways one with the story!!!!! Don't forget to review. They make me happy and force me update faster. Anyways one with the story!!!!! ENJOY!!!!!

Disclaimer: I wish I wrote twilight. But since I didn't I'm here writing this story!

We got to the cub and my almost popped out of their sockets once I took one look at the line. It was probably longer than The Great Wall of China.

"Edward, it will be morning by the time we get in. I think this is a sign that we shouldn't go dancing." I said with a hopefully voice. He just chuckled and got out to open my door. He offered me his hand and I took it eagerly. Once our skin touched it was like the whole world was singing. I was shocked by the electricity that ran through my entire body. I got out of the car in a daze and since he was still holding my hand he dragged me straight to the bouncer. The overly muscled bouncer took one look at me, smiling hugely, and let us in. once in I looked around. The club was packed with sweaty and wasted bodies dancing to the beat. Edward fought his way through the crowd with me in tow to the bar.

"Bella, how old are you?" He asked with his gorgeous crooked smile.

"19 why?"

"Oh, just wondering. I'm 21 so I can buy you a drink. Would you like anything?"

"I've never been the one to drink much. I've only ever had wine or a beer. But sure get me something." I answered with a sweet smile.

"Any favors?"

"Surprise me." I winked at him causing a smile to grace his delicious lips. I hope I get to kiss them tonight. I heard Edward talk to the bartender and order our drinks.

"Here you go" He gave me a flirty smile which I gladly returned. Edward paid for our drink and led me to an empty booth. I sat down next to him but kept quiet.

"So try your drink" I took a sip and purposely kept my face blank. "so, what do you think? Any good?" I couldn't help it I shit eating grin broke out on my face.

"Wow, It's actually pretty good."

"What you doubt my ability to pick out drinks? Ouch that hurt Miss Swan." He said with a smirk.

"Kiss my ass"

"Gladly" He said with that smirk. Smug bastard. I finished my drink and looked up at him. His eyes were so electric and green that I couldn't find the willpower to look away. He slowly leaned down and pressed his lips to mine. It seemed as the world stopped spinning for a second and then restarted again. He wrapped his around my waist as I wrapped mine around his neck and started playing with his soft hair at the nape of his neck. We were pressed against each, chest to chest. His tongue grazed my bottom lip lightly and I granted him entrance as he brought me onto his lap. Our tongues fought for dominance as the club around our started to get hotter. His tongue explored every part of me mouth sending shivers down my spine and making me moan into his mouth. I started getting lightheaded from the lack of air so I broke away gasping. But, his lips never left my skin, they just moved to my neck and started to suck gently. He had me gasping and moaning in a matter of minutes.

"God Bella, you taste so good." He whispered against the hollow of my neck.

"Huh?" I was way gone from coherency. I couldn't even remember my name. he chuckled and pulled away causing me to whimper.

"Dance with me?" I could only nod my head in my fuzzy state. He started leading me through the closely packed mass f bodies to the dance floor. He put his hands on my hips while I put mine around his neck and started to move to the beat. We danced like that for a couple of songs when I decided to make things a little more hotter and interesting . I pulled out of his strong grip.

"What are… " He looked at me confused. I put my finger on his luscious lips to quiet and said.

"Shh, I'll be right back" I turned and stalked toward the DJ. I went up to him and whispered in his ear. Then I turned and went back to Edward.

"Hey babe wanna dance?" I heard a slimy voice from behind me. I turned around and came face to face with a blond. He had blue eyes and a baby like face. I could tell he was one of those guys that thought they were the shit but in truth he wasn't that good looking at all. Plus the smell of alcohol was a turn off.

"No thanks" I said trying to walk away from him but, he grabbed my arm and pulled me to him.

"Let go off me." I tried unsuccessfully to shake him off. But, that only made his grip tighten.

"Come baby, you know you wanna dance with me. And if your good you may even get more." Gah, his breath was s gross. I started to hit anything I could make contact with but that only seemed to turn him on more.

"Oh feisty, I like" The fucking bastard purred in my ear. I scanned the dance floor and locked eyes with very angry looking pair of green eyes. I mouthed a "help me" at him and he started moving toward me.

"What the fuck are you doing? That's my girl." Edward practically growled at the bastard.

"Fuck off man, she wants me. Right bitch?" He slurred and forced his mouth on mine. He was just about to shove his disgusting tongue into my mouth when he was ripped off of me. The bastards arms were replaced by someone else's. I looked up and saw that Edwards jaw was tight and his green eyes were so dark that they looked almost black. He tightened his arms around me and I buried my face in his chest, inhaling him sweet smell. I don't think I've ever smelled something as divine as Edward. He smelled a clean, soapy smell and something else that could only be described as the Edward smell. It was so sweat that I wanted to bottle it up so I could never forget the sweat scent. I looked up at Edward as he started moving us away from the bastard. I peeked over Edwards shoulder to find the bastard on the floor unconscious with a bloody nose.

"Bella are you alright?" Edward whispered with concern lacing his velvety voice. I looked up into his eyes and saw that they were turning slowly back to the electric green that I adored so much, I nodded my head and buried my face in the croon in the croon of his neck. His arms tightened even more as he buried his face in my hair and took a deep breath. I tilted my head so my mouth was right next to his ear and whispered.

"Thank you" His only response was to tighten his hold even more. I felt like I would explode with how tight he was holding me but somehow the pleasure overshadowed the pain. I wish I could have stayed forever in his arms but, the DJ's voice brought me out of my trance.

"All right, this one goes out to da ladies. Lets see you move." Everyone- including me -squealed as Closer by Nine Inch Nails poured out of the speakers. I bit my lip and looked up at Edward through my lashes, he visibly gulped and his eyes darkened. I took his hand and started leading him toward the middle of the dance floor. Once we got there I spun around so me back was flush against his toned chest. I grabbed his soft hand and placed them on my hips and started moving them to the beat. Since this was the only song I could attempt to dance to and look sort of sexy. I felt Edward start to move with me and then close the space between us, we were pressed so tightly together that even the thinnest paper wouldn't fit. I smiled at the closeness of out bodies and started to grind. I felt him harden and my smile turned to a shit eating grin. Just as the lyrics started I dropped to the floor and came up slowly, making sure that my ass was sticking out. I felt Edward harden even more, which I had no idea was even possible considering how hard he seemed before. I reached behind me an put my hands on his next. I started grinding even harder and heard him growl in my ear. I pushed my ass harder into his cock and felt just how hard he was and just how wet my panties were. I brought his head down with my hand and angled my head so I could kiss him. Our lips met and I could feel just how tense he was. He granted me entrance and I started to explore his mouths his hands went to the helm of my shirt. I felt his fingertips graze my stomach and couldn't help the moan that escaped me. He smiled against my lips and started to move upward toward my lacy bra.

"Um, Bella can we go into that room." He asked while tracing the underside of my bra, I just kissed him harder and apparently he understood my answer because he started leading me away from the dance floor. I never planned on having sex again since what happened the last time but, at this rate I didn't give a shit, I needed him. I just knew that if I didn't get a release soon the I would internally combust.

He broke the kiss long enough for me to see that we were heading toward one of the VIP rooms. I felt him open the door and push me inside, which caused me to stagger back a little and started to fall when his arms wrapped around me, pushing me against the wall. His hand went to my ass, grabbing it and lifting me up so I could wrap my legs around his waist. He mouth went to my neck, kissing , licking and sucking on it, I moaned arching my back and enjoying the feel of his velvet lips on my neck. He pushed me harder against the wall so he didn't have to hold me up and moved his hand to the helm of my shirt. His fingers lightly grazed my skin, sending shivers up my spine and moving his lips back to mine. When I felt his hand graze the edge of my bra I gasped and he used the opportunity to push his tongue into my mouth. I moaned and ground my hips into him. God, this feels so good, so much better than when I was with Jake the bastard.

The name snapped me out of my lustful daze. A small part of my mid was screaming at me to stop him before it was to late, but the majority of my brain was thinking how he would feel inside of me.

STOP IT! Do you want to get you heart broken again? Do you want to go through that again? Do you want to stay in forks for the rest of your life and be an empty shell.

No.

Then stop him right now.

But it feels so good.

Bella think about what you are saying. He' s probably going to drop you as soon as he gets what he want from you. You even said yourself that someone like him would never be with someone like you.

Fine I'll stop him.

I really hate when I'm right. How am I supposed to know if he isn't just using me for sex. Was brought out of my thought when I felt him bury his head in my breasts and his hand on the clasp of my bra. I knew I had to act fast or it would be to late. I gathered all the weak will power left in me and pushed against his chest.

"Edward, stop." I said calmly as he was kissing the swell of me breast. But, as soon as my words registered in his mind his head snapped up and looked me in the eye.

"What? What's wrong?" He asked confused and worried. God how I wanted to erase that look from his gorgeous face.

"No nothings wrong, its just that we just met. I really don't know anything about you and it seems too fast." I looked down to prevent him from seeing that I wasn't telling the whole truth. He put his finger under my chin and lifted my gaze to his scorching one.

"Bella, what's wrong? You can tell me." His gaze was so intense, that if I could melt, I would be a puddle right now.

"I don't know if I can. He hurt me so bad. I cant throw away all that time. If what he did ever happened to me again I wont be able to live through it. It hurt too much." I whimpered out. Edward put me down and led me toward the couch. He sat down and brought me down onto his lap and pressed my face into the croon of his neck. I breathed in his heavenly, musky scent greedily as he stroked my hair.

"Bella, tell me what happened so I can help you. I want to ease the pain away." He said so concerned that I wanted to tell him so very badly but I couldn't. I just buried my face into his neck harder and felt the tears coming down my cheeks. I heard Edward sigh so I moves from my hiding place and looked up into his eyes. He leaned down and pressed his soft lips to my forehead making me close my eyes at the sensation that was running through my veins. It amazed me just how electrifying that simple gesture was and just how at ease he could make me feel when I just met him a few hours ago.

That cause me to make up my mind. If anyone I had known for only four hours could make me feel this way then the deserved to know the truth.

"Edwa…"I started but was cut off as the door opened and a couple entered. The women had strawberry blonde hair that cascaded down her back in waves. She was tall and her body reveled one of a supermodel. Then I looked at the guy and my breath caught in my throat.

Ohhhhh clifffaaayy!!!! Hahahahaha! Srry I had to get that out of my system. So how'd you like ittt? Please say you like it :]!! So you do you guys think is the male that made Bellas breath 'caught in her throat' muahaha you'll never guess but you could tell me in you review who you think it is and then you'll find out in the next chapter who the real breath caughter(is that even a word?) is! So R&R!!! Thanx!!!!

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