This is getting cumbersome, but I have to tell you that I don't own Soul caliber, OR Legend of Zelda. BTW, WHY IS it called The Legend of Zelda? Why not the Legend of Link? Well, I guess Legend of Zelda IS more catchier… and the acronym LOZ works a lot better then LOL, because then that would get confusing to computer talkers and texters EVERYWHERE!

"Where am I ?" Echoed a voice.

"Where I want you to be, human."

Sweat started to pour down his face, as he held his weapon in defense.

"Who's there?" He yelled, only to be answered by a glow of purple and maniacal laughter.

"Your worst nightmare…."

Dante gasped for air as he shot straight up.

"Only a dream.." He assured himself.

"What the hell was that?" He thought to himself quietly. He slowly looked around the campsite and sighed. Everyone else was sound asleep in their own peaceful dreams. Talim and Raine slept with a smile, and Mina with a perky grin. Dante could only imagine what she could be thinking of. Maga lay curled up next to him, and Link lay by himself,

"I don't wanna get up right now… I'll wait for everyone else to wake up I guess…" He said with a sigh as he roll onto his side.

Morning greeted an achy Maga, much sooner then he had hoped.

"Oww…. That lady can really put the hurt on someone" He said quietly as he sat up and rubbed the sleep out of his eyes.

"I should get everyone up…. " He said with a smile.

" But who's going to be first?" he asked himself with a bit more alacrity.

His eye's searched the party of travelers, as if debating who'd be less offended of themselves being shaken awake.

"Not Dante… he'll definitely hurt me. And no way in hell am I going to wake up that lady in green….

Let's see…. Who's left.."

Raine and Talim shared a cot, and Maga didn't want to disturb the two, who were happily asleep.

His eyes turned to link.

"We'll it's your lucky day pal." He whispered as he crept over to the sleeping Hylian.

Maga was close to Placing his hands on Link's arms, when suddenly…

"Don't even think about it." Link said as he opened an eye, startling Maga.

"Ahh!" He jumped back and fell down on his rear and started laughing.

"What's so funny? You woke me up loud mouth." Dante grunted as he sat up slowly .

"Oh, sorry Brother.. Didn't mean to wake you up so early." Maga said

"What ever… It's best if we get a move on anyways.." He grunted as he stood up, stretching.

After everyone was awake and refreshed, they packed up their cots, Hopped onto their horses, and began their travels again, but with a larger party.

"Thank you for letting us accompany you. Even after what I did…" Mina said embarrassed.

"It's no problem, besides were heading in the same direction." Maga said as they all continued East.

"Why are you going to Athens anyways?" Asked Dante.

"Because The wind told me too." Said Talim.

"And how did it do that?" Maga asked sarcastically.

"It just did!" Talim shot. "I am a Priestess of the wind gods, I can communicate with the wind. And it told me to go to Athens!"

"Whoa, don't go nuts! I didn't mean to offend you.." Maga said

"Apology accepted" She added in a nicer tone

Mina Leaned closer to Maga and whispered to him.

"Don't worry, she'll get like that when someone sounds disrespectful to her religion."

"Thanks for the heads up.." He whispered back sarcastically.

"What are you two whispering about?" Raine asked.

"Nothing!" Mina piped as she resumed her normal posture.

Raine raised an eyebrow in suspicion. She leaned forward and closed her eyes, as she lay her head on Maga's back.

Maga didn't mind, all he cared about was how much his stomach still ached.

Mina whispered something inaudible to Link and he just smiled and nodded.

"How much further do you think we have to go?"Maga asked

"Not much longer, We should reach it today." Dante said.

As the day neared its end, a beautiful city could be seen in the distance, full of night life, and markets. Large buildings could be seen atop a hill, with large fires lit through it.

"That's the Temple to the god Hephaestus," Dante pointed out. Then his eyes lit up like the stars

"And That means there's and inn!" He yelled happily.

"Which means sweet , sweet, alcohol!" He added.

"Oh boy…" Maga said in a tedious tone.

"Oh boy is right! Let's go!" Mina giggled

They entered the awesome city, to be greeted by market sellers.

"Fresh fruit!"

"Beautiful dresses for beautiful women!"

"Don't travel unprotected! Buy your armor and weapons here!"

"This place is amazing!" Raine shouted

"Yeah!" Maga added.

"It's not all that special…" Dante said as he was keeping an eye out for somewhere to drink.

" What's that?" Said Talim as they all came to a halt in front of a large circle of people.

" I don't know, it looks like there's a fight going on." Link added.

"Is there no one here who can test my abilities?" Yelled an unknown voice from within the circle.

The group neared the small area and saw a samurai in the center, standing victoriously over 5 people.

"Let's go until we get caught into any trouble.." Said Mina.

Everyone in the group agreed as they walked down the Market place in search of a place to stay.

"There!" Raine said as she pointed in front of her.

The group looked at the inn that Raine had pointed to, and decided to go and stay the night there.

"Well, it looks like that were going to have to pair up and share rooms…" Said Dante as he held three separate keys.

"Aww, I was hoping for my own room.." Mina said in a pouty voice.

"Well who's sleeping with who?" Asked Maga.

"Lets draw straws," Said Link.

"The two biggest straws get's the first room , and the next two get the second, and so on."He explained.

"Okay, sounds reasonable enough." Maga said.

The group drew straws and matched up to who were sleeping in the same rooms.

Dante and Mina got the two largest Straws, Raine and Maga got the second biggest straws, and Talim and Link had gotten the smallest.

"Okay then, we'll meet in the main room tomorrow, but first, I need a drink." Dante said as he walked off to the bar of the inn.

"I think I'll join him." Stated Mina as she ran to catch up to Dante.

"Are you going Maga?" Asked Talim

"No way, I wont drink when Dante does, He can get a tad aggressive at times… someone need's to be able to watch him. Besides, I only drink on special occasions"

"That would be a good reason I suppose." Talim said.

"well I think I'm going to go to bed.." Maga said with a yawn.

"Okay then" Said Raine, " Want to hang out for a while Talim?"

"Sure , I've been wanting to talk with someone other then Mina."

"I don't blame you, especially with that thick head of hers." Raine said

"What about you link?" Talim asked.

Link leaned back against a wall and shrugged

"Okay then!" Raine said as she ran down the hallway pulling Talim with her.

Maga entered his room and sighed. The room wasn't half bad. It had a window, with one shackled up piece of wood covering half of it. There was only one bed with a large straw sack mattress and thin sheets for a blanket. He took his boots off and laid his sword next to the door, making sure it didn't fall or get in Raine's way when she came in. He chose the far side of the bed, closest to the window, and laid down.

"This is so much more comfortable then the ground… " He said as he let out a relaxing sigh. This wasn't the first time Sharing a room with Raine for him. After his parents died, Dante went into a drunken binge, trying to drink away the pain. Dante had gotten angry with Maga for small things , and locked him out of the house. When this happened, Maga would always come to Raine's home and knock on her window and wake her up…

Night had fallen the village for some time now when suddenly….

"Get the hell out!" Yelled a 15 year old Dante as he slammed the front door in Maga's face, followed by a click from the lock.

"Jeez Dante! I didn't mean for you to trip on those boots!" Maga yelled as he banged his fist against the door.

After many minutes of painful slams against the door, Maga gave up on trying to get back in, and made his way down the road towards his Friend Raine's house.

" He's such an asshole…." Maga said with tears in his eyes, " He goes out, drinking the nasty stuff every night, and comes home as the meanest person in the world.."

He slowly reached Raine's house and snuck around to her window on the side of the house. He knocked on the window sill until he heard a faint whisper come from inside.

"Who's there?" Said a very tired Raine

"It's Maga…. Again….." He replied

"Locked out again?" she asked as she rub the sleep from her eyes.

"Kinda…"

"What for this time?"

"He tripped on my boots when came through the door." Maga said sadly

"Well, don't just stand out there… come on in." Raine said quietly

"Thanks.." Maga replied to his friend.

"No problem, I'd do anything for you" She said as Maga climbed through the window as quietly as he could. "Do you want to talk about it?" She asked

"I'd rather not…"

"You can't just bottle up your emotions like that Maga…."

"Yes I can…"

A few moments of an awkward silence had passed.

"It's easier to talk to a friend about it." She said.

Tears started to swell up in Maga's eyes, making them look real glassy.

"He thinks he's the only one who's sad about it.." He cried faintly " I loved my parents just as much as he did.. he thinks he is the only one who hurts.. but I hurt too…"

Raine slowly made her way to the emotionally hurt Maga and embraced him in a compassionate hug as he silently cry. After Maga had finished his tears of pain he wiped his face with his forearm.

"Why do you put up with it, with him acting like this too you?" she asked him remorsefully after he calmed down.

" I have too." He sniffed.

"Why do you have too?"

"He's my brother, he's the only family I have left…" Maga whispered.

"Yea… I know… "Raine said quietly.

"Come on.." She beckoned to him " Let's get some sleep. I want to go fishing tomorrow, and

I order you to come with me." She said , trying to light up the mood.

Maga laughed a little at the new game he and Raine began playing not to long ago.

"As you wish your highness.." He said as he gave a clumsy bow with a smile.

"Hey Raine? Thanks for listening…"

"No problem.."She replied.

"See? Talking helps…" Raine's voice echoed….

"What'll you be having tonight sir?" the bartender asked a new paying customer.

He was wearing red samurai armor, his hair was black and tied back, and he looked like he has seen many battles in his time.

"Got saki?" He asked.

"Just received a shipment of it today." The bartender said as he motioned a waitress for a glass.

" I'll have a bottle of it then." Said the man.

"A whole bottle? Well what ever you say.." The bartender said as he went to the back room to retrieve the saki.

Just then, two new people entered the room.

A young woman wearing a revealing green dress, and a young man wearing a brown leather vest.

They were talking as they took a seat at a table behind the man.

A barmaid came to them to ask their orders.

" What's the strongest you've got?" Said the man

"We just received a shipment of saki this evening." She replied.

"I'll have that." He said.

"And you?" She asked the woman in green.

"I hear the grape wine here is amazing. I'd like some of that." She said politely.

"Okay then, I'll be right back."

The bartender came back from the liquor room with the Samurai's bottle of saki and placed it in front of him.

"That'd be seven silver pieces."

"That's a bit expensive" Said the samurai.

"Well, we're not in Japan, it takes a bit of money to ship this here." Said the bartender in an agitated tone.

"Hmph, fine then." The samurai said as he dug into his sleeve pocket and slammed seven pieces of silver on the table and took the bottle.

"I hope they have something strong here." Dante said to Mina as the two headed down to the bar of the inn, "I need to catch up on those lost days"

"I believe ya, I think I'm going to try out the grape wine. It's supposed to be real good here in Athens."

"Wine is horribly disgusting.." Dante said.

"Says you." She replied quickly

The two entered the bar and found a table to sit it.

"That guy looks crazy.." Mina said as she pointed to a stranger in red armor.

"He's definitely got an odd vibe to him." Dante said as a waitress came to the table.

"May I take your orders?" She asked politely.

" What's the strongest you've got?" asked Dante

"We just received a shipment of saki this evening." She replied.

"I'll have that."

"And you?" She asked Mina.

"I hear the grape wine here is amazing. I'd like some of that." She said politely.

"Okay then, I'll be right back."

The Man in red slammed onto the table, making both Mina and Dante alert to his aggressiveness, and took the bottle of liquor and drank it in large gulps at a time.

The waitress came back to the two with glasses and bottles of alcohol.

"Thank you" Mina said kindly as the maid handed her a glass and began to pour her wine into it.

After the waitress finished with Mina, she began to give Dante his glass when he just shook his head at her.

"Just leave me the bottle, I don't plan on using the glass." He said.

The maid looked at him with seriousness in her eyes.

Dante just looked back and took the bottle of saki from her. After uncorking it, he took a quick swig of it.

"Ahem.." The waitress cleared her throat, " That'll be 12 pieces of silver please."

"That's a bit much isn't it?" Mina asked. A slight chuckle came from the man in red.

"It's okay Mina, I got us covered." Dante said as he reached into his pockets in search of some money.

After a moment of searching, he finally found some silver.

"Okay… ten.. eleven…. And twelve." He said as he slowly counted the pieces of silver and handed them to the waitress.

"Thank you sir." The waitress said as she took the money from Dante.

Dante took another drink from his saki and slightly shivered at it's burning sensation crept down his body, slightly providing his innards with an odd feeling of warmth.

"So Dante, " Mina said from across the table, "When did you start drinking?"

Dante looked down at the table for a moment and slowly looked up at Mina

"I started at an early age…" He said.

"Why did you start so early?" Mina asked curiously.

"I uh… Well…" He said as he tried to choose his words wisely " Something happened and one thing led to another…" He said with a hint of pain in his voice.

"What happened?" Mina asked, even more curious then before.

" Some people should just mind their own business." Dante snapped at her.

Mina was taken aback by this and slowly sipped on her wine.

"I'm sorry for poking…." She whispered.

Dante sighed and relaxed a bit.

"No.. I'm sorry… I shouldn't react like that…" Dante said with a frown.

"I started drinking when my family were involved in a massacre that happened about four years ago…" He began.

Mina sat quietly, paying close attention to the saddened Dante.

"A group of people came into our village one day and demanded that everyone give up everything with value to them.. After being denied their demands, their leader, a young blonde headed man with a sword as large as mine and Maga's, stepped forward and began making threats…. My friend Turlon, his father stepped forward and told the group to leave." Dante said and took in a deep sigh, as though he were reliving everything that happened that day.

"Their leader became agitated and killed his father on the spot…"

Mina let out a gasp

"The men of our village retaliated, started a very gruesome battle in the center of the village… It lasted for a very long time. The leader had slaughtered more people then everyone.. "

"I'm so sorry…." Mina said with a small amount of tears in her eyes.

"He made his way to me and Maga, but our parents stood in his way…. " He said.

"He killed them…. He took our valuables, and he left with his group of bandits….." He let out a guttering heave , " I just stood there and watched….. My parents were killed…. And I just watched!" He said as he felt an unending pain well up inside.

" Dante…. " Mina said with tears in her eyes, " I'm so sorry…" She couldn't think of anything else to say.

"Now you know…." Dante said as he drank more of his strong alcohol.

"I shouldn't have asked…."Mina said.

"Why did I have to ask!" Mina shouted in her mind, " Leave it to me to make a grown man almost break down because I HAD to know something about him!"

The man in red stood up and walked to Dante. He gazed down at him and Dante looked back up at him.

"What do you want?" Dante asked hatefully.

The man handed Dante his half empty bottle of Saki and spoke only a few words to him.

"You sound like you need this more then me." Was all he said

"I don't need your pity." Dante hissed at him.

The man in red just smirked and left.

Mina finished her wine and stood up.

" Come on, let's go…" She said solemnly. " We don't want to stay too late, we have a lot of information to gather tomorrow."

Dante Drank more of his saki and nodded.

He stood up and corked both of the bottles of alcohol.

"Your going to keep the other bottle?" Mina asked with disgust.

" Why let a bottle of saki go to waste?" Dante said with a grin.

"I'll never truly understand men…" Mina sighed.

The two companions left down the hallway and made their way into their room.

"Well," Mina said as she hurriedly fell down onto the bed " You get the floor!"

"What?" Dante exclaimed " Why should you get the whole bed and I get the floor? There's more then enough room for two. Hell, there's enough room for three or four people!"

"Because I am NOT sharing a bed with anyone tonight" She said with glee.

"Fine! Whatever! I'll sleep on the floor then!" He huffed, "But the least you could do is give me a few blankets and a few pillows."

" I guess…." Mina said.

She Balled up a blanket with a few pillows inside of it and threw it at Dante, knocking him off balance.

"Be careful!" He snapped.

Mina's only reaction was to start laughing and giggling at Dante.

"Stop your annoying banter and just go to sleep." Dante said while he made his cot on the floor.

"oh alright…" Mina said.

After a few moments of getting situated, Dante blew out all but one lantern, allowing a little light to see at night in case of intruders.

"Well, goodnight.." Mina said with a yawn.

"Whatever.." Dante said as he laid down on his uncomfortable cot.

Dante closed his eyes and tried to sleep, but Mina kept rustling around and making noises in the bed.

Dante let out a quiet sigh…. It was going to be a long night.

"Why can't I go to sleep?" Mina asked herself. "Is it because of the wine? It's got to be, it probably has me all excited and stuff… Or maybe it was that samurai in the bar? He looked real familiar.. but where did I see him before? Was it the center of the market? Yea that's it! He was that guy who was fighting… no…. That can't be it.." She tossed and turned until she finally decided to just lye on her back and sprawl out," Or maybe it's Dante…. There's something about him…. I'm not sure what.."

With that, she slowly drifted to sleep, pondering about why she has been so restless recently…

"So Talim, You're a priestess?" Raine asked Talim. They were in a nice restaurant next to the inn waiting on their orders of vegetable soups. It's wasn't too big, and had a beautiful environment about it. People smiled to each other, laughed and talked about what their day had brought them, and even couples were having romantic dinners. Talim Nodded to Raine as her answer to the question.

"But you look so young! Aren't priestesses supposed to be old and such?" She asked curiously

"Not necessarily, I was born into being a priestess."

"How old are you anyways? You look like your thirteen years old." Raine asked.

"I'm not thirteen!" Talim said looking flustered, " I happen to be fifteen years old!"

"I'm sorry, you don't need to act all crazy about it."Raine said

"I'm sorry… It's just that Mina always treats me like I'm a little baby, I just get sick of it all…." Talim said.

"It's okay, Even the kindest people need to take their anger out on something." Raine said kindly.

"But I'm not supposed to be angry at anything! I'm a priestess."

"So? Your human aren't you?"

"Well.. yes…."

"Then it's okay!" Raine piped.

"But.." Talim tried to interject

"No 'buts'." Raine said.

"Well, okay…"

"If you ever want to talk about anything about what's making you angry or sad or whatever, I'll listen." Raine said kindly, "Talking always helps."

"Yes, I know. Thank you" Talim said.

Just then, Raine's stomach growled, leaving her with an embarrassed look on her face.

"How long does it take for a waiter to get here?" Raine asked.

"I'm not sure, maybe we should go back to the inn and get something from our bags? Besides , It's getting late out. I don't want to be anywhere out when it's dark. Especially here." Talim suggested.

"I suppose your right.." Raine said with disappointment, "Let's go, we can comeback in the morning, what do ya say?"

"That sounds great! We can all come back here tomorrow morning!" Talim said.

They both stood up and briskly walked out the door, knowing it was getting pretty dark out.

Link watched as the group went their own way, and just stood in his spot and nodded off.

"I miss home…." He thought to himself.

He didn't like this world as much as he liked his. Albeit, he has met some kind friends along the way.

"I have been traveling for so long…. And there's no way for me to tell everyone I'm fine….everyone must be worried sick for me… Saria and Lilly most of all…. Goddesses.. Lilly was so small when I had to leave, It's been almost a year.… I wonder how much she's grown… I wonder if They're both alright? Yes, they must be fine, I did leave them with Cheryl and Xavier while I'm gone…"
He let out a sigh and walked to The room he and Talim were to stay in that night . As he took in his surroundings, he closed the door, leaving it unlocked for Talim, and undid his sword buckle and took his shield off his back and set them down in a corner.

He sat down next to his weapons and pulled out the blue box holding the fragments of the evil sword.

"How can this be so evil? It's nothing but pieces.." He pondered quietly.

"It's broken, so why isn't it destroyed?" He wondered out loud.

He heard the door of the room next to him open and close.

"There's Dante and Mina, back from their time alone…"

He could hear Dante and Mina talking when he heard Dante ask Mina something, making her laugh and giggle..

"I'll just tune them out.." He said and focused more on the objects of mystery he held in his hand.

"I don't want anything to do with these things anymore… I just want to go home to my family.." He said as he nodded off to sleep.

"Well, goodnight Talim." Raine said to her new friend as she entered her room.

Maga was fast asleep on the large bed when Raine came in. She looked around and started to quietly take her boots off and the small sword from her side. She also took off the pack and searched through it for clothing to change into. After searching for a few moments, she finally decided on some white slops and a comfortably loose brown cloth shirt she got from Maga and Dante as a birthday present last year.

She smiled as her memories flooded back to that day.

But her memories were cut short when she heard Maga start to shift awake from his sleep.

Maga was facing her hen he opened his eyes slowly.

"Hey…" He said quietly as he sat up " Have fun with Talim?" he added with a yawn and a stretch

"Yes, I did." She quietly replied.

"Well that's good" He said. " I wonder where my shirt is.."

Maga was now very awake from his snooze and brought his legs around to hang off the side of the bed.

Raine gawked quietly at his slight bruises left from Mina's overreaction two days ago. While Raine was having her secretive thoughts of Maga, he had found his shirt and slipped it on, then he looked at Raine, who was just spaced out and staring at him. He turned his head around, trying to see what she was looking at.

Not finding anything of interest, he reverted his attention back to Raine, who was still staring.

"What?" He asked.

Raine snapped back into reality, " Huh?"

"What did you see?"

"Oh, nothing, I was just thinking about something." She replied, with a slight blush in her face.

"oh, okay. Well, I guess your going to sleep on the bed tonight. I'll go ahead and sleep on the floor." He said.

No, you don't have to do that." She said quickly. "There's more then enough room for the both of us, heck, there's enough room for three people to sleep there comfortably. Besides," She added, " It wouldn't be fair to you, you've been sleeping on the ground as much as I have, if not more than me.

"Well, if you insist.." Maga said as he began to lay back down in his spot.

"I'm going to go change first.." Raine said, then her eyebrow coked up as she looked around the room again. " Where's the bathroom?" She asked.

"I'm not sure, I never really got around to looking for one."

"I don't think there is one…. Maybe that's why the rooms were so cheap…." She said. Then she looked at Maga. Maga just looked back at her. She made a face that said something like 'Well?'. Maga didn't get the message.

Ugh.. Sometimes he can be so clueless..Raine thought

"Well?" She said

"Well what?

"Aren't you going to turn around so I can change?"

"Huh? Your changing in here?"

"Well, there's no where else to change, so yes, I am changing my cloths in here." She said bluntly.

Maga kind of felt a panic go through him.

What do I do? What do I do? What do I do? What do I do? He thought very quickly in his mind.

Oh! That's right! I'll just turn around!

So he plopped down on the bed and turned his whole body away from Raine. He heard Raine sigh and begin with her cloths. Then his eyes widened. Somehow, he saw Raine in front of him, half naked. He could see her chest, more then he wanted to see of her.

Raine pulled off the green colored cloth shirt she had worn and the now very dirty breaches she had worn for the past few days.

Man, it's going to feel great to get out of these cloths… I just hope Maga isn't looking… It'll be embarrassing for me to be seen half naked. She thought to herself as she quickly put her clean cloths on.

"Okay, you can turn back around." She said.

"Alright." Maga said.

"So Maga, " Raine said as she slowly got into the bed, " What were you and Mina whispering about earlier today?"

"Nothing, she was just telling me about how Talim can get a little flustered about her religion or something like that."

"Oh, that's good…" She said, "You're probably going to laugh at this, but I thought you two were talking about me…."

"What do you mean? Like in a hurtful way?" He asked concerned, now laying on his side, facing Raine.

Raine had also turned on her side to face Maga.

"Well…. Kind of…" She said embarrassingly.

"Raine." Maga said in a serious voice. "First of all, I wouldn't laugh at you, just with you. Secondly, I would NEVER talk about you like that. What kind of friend would I be if I did that?"

"I guess your right.."

"Guess?"

"I mean, yes, your right."

"That's better." Maga said with a smile.

"But if someone were to talk about me like that, you'd tell me right?"

"I would set them straight, and then I'll tell you." Maga replied.

"That's good…" Raine said with a shiver.

"It's cold in here isn't it?" She said whilst shaking a bit.

"Yea, it sure did, didn't it…." Maga said, feeling the cold creep it's way all up and down his spine.

"I don't think I can sleep in this cold…" Raine said after a few moments.

Raine scooted closer to Maga and crawled under his thin blanket and threw hers on top of it.

"What are you doing?" Maga asked, his face turning a bit red from the awkwardness of it all.

"Not freezing." She stated sternly.

"I don't get it."

"Our body warmth combined can keep us warm."

"Oh." Was all he could say. He'd never really experienced the cold before, so naturally he wouldn't have a clue about what to do.

"You know Maga, sometimes, I wonder how you can be so clueless sometimes." She said, still facing Maga.

"Well, I guess where there's strength, there's stupidity." He said wisely.

Raine laughed for a little while at Maga's little wisecrack.

"You know Maga, I'm happy you're my friend.." She said quietly.

"I am too…." He said as they both fell into a peaceful sleep…

Well, there it is! ALL 10 PAGES!

The idea to this chapter was actually given to me by my writing teacher. I went to him to see if there were any improvements needed. "Well" He says, " It's very ,very good. The grammar is good, sure there's a few punctuation problems here and there, and a few unnecessary caps. (He mean capitalized words) but other then that, its pretty good."

Then he said " My only question is this. Who are Maga and Dante? Who's Raine? You told about all the other characters, but not about your main protagonists! You say Dante has a drinking Problem, but why? How far back does everyone's relationships with each other go? ( He means Dante, Maga, Raine, Turlon and such.)"

So here I am with a ten page chapter explaining all sorts of things. Characters opening up, others talking to themselves, and even the best personality of all, cluelessness of said characters.

anyways, if you didn't understand what Link was talking about, then that means you STILL HAVEN"T CHECKED OUT 'The Curse of Immortality' and 'The Blessing of Life' by XT-421 YET!

Well, I hope you enjoyed this chapter! And review it too! Your comments really help inspire me to keep writing!

BTW, Yes, Maga and Raine had one of those awkward best friend things between a guy and a girl that makes them want their relationship to progress into something of a couple. You know, cliché things that happen in these types of stories. And for once, I'm kinda happy not having to be completely original! Even if sometimes it isn't as original

Here's another thing. From now on, I'm going to write my chapters 3 stories ahead so it'll be awhile before my next update! Maybe about 4 or 5 days.