Chapter two is now up! I hope you all like it. The begining of the story is the hardest to write. Deciding who the first to go home will be, who will have romances, etc. Anyway no hard feelings to the creators of the characters eliminated this chapter.
Chris: Last time on Total Drama Amusement Park, twenty four teens arrived at the location of our newest season. McLean World! I gave them a tour of the place. *Repaly of everyone walking in shows* Now it's time for their first challenge. Someone is going home. Find out who right now on Total... Drama... Amusement Park!
*Theme song starts*
*Food court*
Julie: *Takes a tray of food* This food looks, gross.
Chance: I can't tell whether this is cereal, or pancakes.
Julie: If we don't eat this, what else is there?
Bob: *Walks into the food court playing his hand held game system* Hey Ben.
Ben: Hey Bob. What are you playing?
Bob: Mario Bros of course. What else would I be playing?
Ben: I don't know. There lots of video games out there.
Bob: True, but I'm the biggest Mario fan ever. I especialy love Toad. My nick name is the Toad-Mister.
*Confessional*
Ben: First day here, and I already have an annoying friend. Bob is obsessed with video games, and I just had to wear this shirt that says "Guitar Hero World Tour" on it. Since then he's been talking to me non stop.
*End confession*
Ricky: This little hamster of yours is so fun to play with! I'm glad you brought it.
Jack: I know. I just couldn't leave him behind. I had to sneak him through lots of security, and talk Chris into letting him stay, but it was all worth it. Now he gets to stay here with me.
Ricky: This little guy is a fur ball of energy.
Chris: *Walks into the food court* I see you all enjoying your breakfast.
Kobi: I wouldn't call this enjoying it. I'd call this, forcing it down.
Chris: Anyway, it is almost time for your first challenge.
Kobi: So are put us in teams or something?
Chris: For youe first challenge you will be splitting yourself into four teams of six. You get to choose who is on your team. Also there is a twist for tonights elimination. The two teams will be going to the Roller Coaster Ceremony, and two people will be voted off.
Julie: Wait? So we get to make our own teams?
Chris: Yup.
Ricky: And theres four teams.
Chris: Exactly. Get into teams of six, and meet me at the main gate. *Leaves*
Julie: Chance you and me are for sure on the same team.
Chance: Right. *Whispers* Can you ask that guy I like to be on our team?
Julie: Of course I will. *Walks up to Evan* Muscely guy. Your on our team. We need a strong player like you.
Evan: Sure alright.
Jamie: Can I be on your team too?
Julie: Sure you can.
Mason: Hey, Lexie. That's your name right?
Lexie: Yes, that's my name.
Mason: Want to be on a team with me?
Lexie: Alright then.
Ricky: Jack, me and you definetly have to be on a team together.
Jack: Okay.
Lexie: How about you guys be on our team.
Ricky: Alrighty then. Now we have four people. Two more...
Kiley: I'll be on your guy's team.
Inola: Me too.
Ricky: Great we have our team.
Riley: Come on Jet. Lets find some people to be on our team.
Bob: Me, and Ben will be on your team!
Riley: Great, that's four people.
Haley: Make that five. I'm with your guys.
Donnie: Hey Fiona. Want to be on a team with me.
Fiona: Okay.
Kobi: Is it all right if I go with you guys.
Donnie: Sure you can.
Jim: I'll join you as well.
Brittany: Can I be on your team?
Gretchen: Me too.
Donnie: Okay, you can all be on our team. Now that's four, five, and six people. Great we have our team.
Sam: Hey, guys. Can I join your team?
Julie: Yes you can. Now we only need one more person.
Dakota: I'll join you guys.
Mara: Looks like I'm stuck with you guys.
Riley: Okay then. Lets go.
*Front gates*
Chris: I see you've formed your four teams. Team 1 consists of Chance, Julie, Evan, Jamie, Sam, and Dakota.
Evan: Yup that's us.
Chris: Next team will be team two. Teams two's members are Mason, Lexie, Ricky, Inola, Jack, and Kiley.
Rickey: We are going to win this here challenge, right guys?
Chris: Team three is Jet, Riley, Ben, Haley, Bob, and Mara.
Haley: Our teams going to kick butt!
Bob: We're going to be Toad-tastic!
Chris: Sure you are... Now the final team, team four has Donnie, Fiona, Kobi, Gretchen, Jim, and Brittany.
Donnie: Lets go on and win this thing guys!
Chris: Now it's time to start your first challenge. Remember, two people will be going home tonight.
Haley: Two people? Why two?
Chris: Because I said two people are going home tonight. During this challenge two teams will win, and two will lose. The two who win will all be safe and get to stay together in the next round. The other two teams will have to vote someone off. Everyone on those teams will be split up, and sent to the other two teams next time. Now do you want to know what your challenge will be?
Riley: Just tell us already.
Chris: I bet your all eager to start riding the rides, aren't you?
Ricky: Course we are.
Chris: Well get ready for this. For your challenge you will have to find these golden tickets *Holds out a golden ticket* which are hidden all around the park, on different roller coasters, and rides. There are ten tickets hidden around the park. The two teams who find the most will win. Two teams who don't, sending someone home. Not go!
*Everyone starts running around the park*
*Ferris Wheel*
Ricky: I think there might be a golden ticket here.
Jack: Look, there it is! *Points to the ticket*
Inola: That's really high up guys. Lexie: We'd have to climb up to get that...
Ricky: *Starts climbing up the ferris wheel* Already on it.
Kiley: Be careful!
*Merry Go Round*
Jet: I see it! It's on the top of the Merry Go Round.
Haley: We need someone to go up there, and get it.
Ben: And that's going to be me.
*Confessional*
Ben: I am a daredevil, I admit it. I just love the thrill of stunts near death experiences! Climbing onto the top of a Merry Go Round? Amateur stuff.
*End confession*
Ben: *Starts climbing the Merry Go Round* I got this!
Bob: Hey do you need any help? *Pushs Ben's foot up*
Ben: Hey, don't do that! *Loses his balance and falls*
Gretchen: I can get that. *Climbs onto the Merry Go Round and grabs the golden ticket*
Ben: I could have had that!
Bob: Sorry I was just trying to help...
Gretchen: *Runs back to her team* Look guys, I got i!
Donnie: Way to go Gretch.
Kobi: Yeah we got one!
*Confessional*
Kobi: Not suprised we got one, but we got it while one of the other teams was just about to get it. We took it from right under there noses. Or abover their heads...
*End confession*
*Bungee jump*
Chance: *Looks down* Who wants to be the one to jump down?
Dakota: I'm not doing it.
*Confessional*
Dakota: I can not do that. Bungee jumping is crazy. I'm afraid of heights. Anything up high in the air, especially trapeze's. My grandpa died by falling off of one. I'm not doing this.
*End confession*
Evan: Well someone has to do it.
Julie: How else are we supposed to get the ticket.
Dakota: I think that kid should go, *Points to Chance*
Chance: Me? Why?
Dakota: Your the smallest one here...
Chance: So...
Dakota: So, your going. *Grabs Chance and puts him in the bungee jumping suit*
Julie: Let Chance go! *Tackles Dakota*
Chance: *Falls off the platform* Help me!!!!!!! *Nearly hits the ground and then flies back up*
Mason: *See's the golden ticket* Hey guys, I see one! *Climbs over the gate and grabs it from off the ground* I got another one!
*Confessional*
Chance: That girl pushed me off the bungee jumping platform... That was the scariest experience of my life.
*End confession*
Ben: I still can't believe we haven't found any golden tickets.
Bob: You almost had that one but then you fell.
Ben: That was because of you.
Jet: Stop agruing guys. We need to find these golden tickets so we can all stay here another day.
Haley: We need to win find these tickets. If we don't we'll have to send someone home, and we don't want to have to do that.
Mara: Hey guys! I think I see one. *Points two a golden ticket on the tracks of the train ride*
Bob: We have to get it, before the train runs it over!
Ben: I got it! *Jumps onto the train tracks* I got!
Jet: Get off the tracks!
Ben: *Jumps off the tracks right before the train hits him* I made it! *The wind blos the golden ticket out of his hand*
Riley: Get it!
Ben: *Jumps for the ticket*
Ricky: Look guys. Theres another one! *Catches the ticket blowing in the wind* That make four tickets.
Ben: Hey, that was ours.
Ricky: Sorry but we have it and you don't, which makes it ours.
Chris: *Over the intercom* All the tickets have been found. Come to the entrance to find out which teams are going to vote someone off.
*Front entrance*
Ben: We lost.
Chris: Lets count the tickets. Julies team, how many did you guys find.
Julie: We only found one. *Hands him the ticket*
Chris: That's pathetic. Ricky's team. How many did you guys find.
Ricky: We have four tickets right here. *Hands them to Chris*
Chris: That puts you in the lead. Jets team How many did you get?
Jet We didn't find any...
Chris: None at all?
Ben: We almost had one but then Ricky's team stole it from us.
Ricky: We did not steal it, you just dropped it.
Chris: Last team, Kobi's team. How many did you find?
Kobi: We found the rest of them, five golden tickets!
Chris: Wow. That puts you guys in first place! Second place goesto Ricky's team. Julie's team, Jet's team. You all have to vote someone off of your teams. I'll see you at the roller coaster ceremony.
*Food court*
Julie: That girl has to go.
Chance: She pushed me off the bungee jump platform!
Jamie: So we're all voting for Dakota right?
Julie: Right.
*Other table*
Ben: We have to get rid of our weakest player.
Riley: And who's that?
Ben: It's Bob.
Jet: You want us to vote him off?
Ben: Why shouldn't we? I had that first ticket until he tried to 'help' me.
Riley: I don't think he's our weakest player.
Ben: I don't know what you guys are going to do, but I'm voting him out. *Leaves*
Riley: He's being really negative. I don't think we should keep him around.
*Roller Coaster Ceremony*
Chris: First team up at tonights elimination ceremony will be Jet's team.
*All of them sit down*
Chris: Now it's time to vote someone off. Under your seats you will find voting devices. Just press the button of the person you want voted off. After you vote, I will give a bag of Popcorn to those of you who are safe. The person who does not recive a bag of popcorn will take a ride on the Roller Coast of Losers. Time to vote!
*Everyone votes*
Bob: These voting devices are so cool.
Chris: The votes are in. Pop corn goes to, Jet, Riley, Haley, and Mara. *Throws them all popcorn*
Bob: One of us has to go home?
Chris: Final bag of popcorn goes to..... Bob.
Bob: *Takes the bag og popcorn* Sorry Ben. So you know I didn't vote for you.
Chris: Time for you to go Ben.
Ben: It was fun. *Walks to the Roller Coaster of Losers and sits down*
Chris: Now you guys can go, and lets bring in the next team.
*Jet and his team leave*
Ben: When is this ride going to start?
Chris: Right after the next team votes someone off.
Ben: I have to wait for that?
Chris: Yup.
*Julies team walks in*
Chris: Welcome to your first elimination. Right now someone will be going home tonight. You will vote for the person you want to go home with the voting devices under your seat.
*Everyone votes*
Chris: Popcorn goes to, Julie, Jamie, Evan, and Sam. *Throws them all popcorn*
Sam: Yes I made!
Chris: Final bag of popcorn goes to.... Chance!
Dakota: You guys voted for me?
Julie: That's what you get for forcing Chance to bungee jump when he didn't want to.
Chance: Bye Dakota. *Waves bye to her*
Dakota: *Gets on the Rollar Coaster of Losers* Why'd your team vote you off?
Ben: Losing out on getting golden tickets. I had them if it wasn't for Bob.
Chris: Time to start the ride! *Presses the button*
*Roller Coaster starts going up*
Dakota: This isn't as embarresing as getting voted off first, and being the only going.
Ben: Yeah.
*They go down into the Tunnel of Shame*
Chris: And our first two contestants are gone. Only 22 left. Who will be the next to go?
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Chris: The two teams who won last challenge get to stay together as a team. You guys get to pick between all the members of the losing teams to join yours.
Hey everyone. I hope you liked the first chapter. Those of you who's characters were eliminated, don't be mad. It wasn't an easy choice to decide who was eliminated first. I hope you two keep on reading and reviewing. Thanks.