So what happens when an old enemy comes back to haunt you? That's what kevin's about to find out as he must explain the appearence of a strange girl named Maylii who seems to hold a sort of grudge against him. And what's this about a deal?
So yeah this is my ben 10 fanfic. I swear to god this has been written and rewritten a thousand times. first it was a ben 10 fic, then it was Alien force fic, then another version of alien force idea and now it's Ben 10: Ultimate Alien and I hoping i actually finish this one.
so...no spoilers...ben 10 isn't really the type of show you can spoil anyways, but as long as you've seen alien force you're good...not that i'll spoil anything anyways.
Disclaimer: yeah i don't own ben 10 or any of it's sequals...if i did there'd be a lot different...
-"I found your note. Why do you have to be weird like this? I mean you couldn't just bring me here yourself?" Kevin says. He'd followed a note left by Maylii to somewhere near the town's border.
-"Since I wrote the note, I technically am the one who led you here, right Kev?" Maylii says. She stands up from wherever she was sitting to face her opponent.
-"So how are we going to do this?" Kevin asks.
-"Oh, so eager to die are we? Come on Kevin. Have just a little fun." Maylii teases.
-"rr, come on Maylii let's just get it over with!" Kevin yells.
-Maylii notices something about him just then. "You're friends, they know where we are don't they? You're just afraid that they'll come to your rescue and I'll hurt them before you." She erupts into laughter at the thought.
-"You are such a hero! I can't believe the same Kevin Levin, Kevin 11, I met in the Null Void has become this. And with you own worst enemy. That's so rich!" She continues laughing.
-Kevin, fed up with her laughter, lunges toward Maylii ready to start and end the fight.
-As before, Maylii is too quick and the attack misses by miles. She takes a turn landing a punch on his face.
-"Oh Kev, I remember these fights being more entertaining!" She says after a minute or two. She laughs at every attack her opponent tries to land.
-However another attack from her sends Kevin to the ground on the opposite side of the building. Maylii walks forward towards him, clapping.
-"It doesn't have to be this way Kev. We don't have to fight." She says.
-As Kevin gets up he couldn't appear more annoyed. "Then why did you say we had to?" He wonders.
-Maylii gets really close to Kevin's face. "If you make a deal with me, Kev, then I'll forgive your little moment of stupidity and you wont have to die." She smiles.
-"What is it?" Kevin wonders. He's curious about the idea, but a little apprehensive since he doesn't know what else she could want.
-"It's really simple." She begins. "I just want you. That it. I want the real Kevin Levin. So, what I'm saying is, I want to you ditch you friends and never look back. Become the old you. If you could do that I wouldn't have to beat you to a pulp, eh Kev? So does it tempt you?" She asks.
-"Look I told you it's different now. I'm not leaving Ben and Gwen. I said I'd fight you alone just because of that. Now let's just get this over with already." Kevin responds.
-Maylii sighs. "Oh, Kev. How the mighty have fallen. I just remember those days in and out of the Null Void. You. Me." She pauses for a moment.
-"You didn't want to work with Ben Tennyson. And you defiantly didn't want to kiss his cousin. You were like me: you just wanted revenge. And trust me, revenge as sweet as ours, doesn't just go away because you want to play hero. Kev, I know you're there. Now I just need you to get it." Maylii says.
-Whether he because of denial or just plain annoyance, Kevin ignores Maylii and continues on with the fight. However it appears as though Maylii cannot be touched. And finally Kevin falls.
-Maylii stands in front of him as he lays face down on the ground. She shakes her head. "Disappointed. S'all I can say." She kneels down and lifts up Kevin's head so he's looking at her.
-"So, choice made? I hope you had time to say good-bye." She says.
here's another chapter (duh). So...has anyone actually read this thing yet?
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