Here is Part 2 of the story, which is the next three pages. I do not own any Avatar or DeathNote characters, but Kai Jun, Hao Yuni, and Nutkicker are made up by myself.
By the way, if you are a fan of L and wanted him to be in the story, I apologize. The scene he was in on the previous part of the story was his only role in the Gruesome Fate of Long Feng. So sorry, but he didn't have much to do with this story's events :)
Light Yagami had been walking back towards his house, with Ryuk flying by his side. Ryuk figured he should tell Light what he saw and heard. He saw Long Feng and his companions eavesdropping on everything that was going on before.
"Hey, Light," said Ryuk, "you know we were being spied on, right?" "Yes, Ryuk," replied Light, "no doubt that L had some kind of microphone on him for the police to listen to our conversation." "Not L! Someone else! The ones sitting by the park bench! I'm surprised you didn't catch that!" It was a first for Light, given that the men in question were a bit…odd to Japan. "Well, right now, we need to make sure Misa doesn't talk while she's confined."
Long Feng, along with Kai Jun, Hao Yuni, and Nutkicker, followed Light, trying not to be noticed, all the way to his home. They couldn't see Ryuk, so they assumed he was just as crazy as they were. Especially when in his room, he had been looking in two directions from time to time. What they didn't know, however, was that another Shinigami, Rem, was in the room too, and told Light about Misa giving up her Death Note in order to protect Light.
Eventually, the four of them followed Light to a misty forest just outside the city. He took out the Death Note, and it appeared to be floating away by itself! What the?!!! That can't be possible, thought Long Feng, how can it do that? NOW how will I get my hands on it?
But then he heard Light mutter something about another one being buried under where he was standing. As soon as Light left, Long Feng used earthbending to get the Death Note out from the ground. As soon as he touched it, his eyes saw a hideous sight. A dark, winged monster with glowing red eyes. Long Feng screamed out in terror.
"Looks like you're the NEW owner of this one! That doesn't go well with Light's plan," said the monster, "but hey, I'm just here to enjoy the show, so if you can show me a good time with that book, I guess you can keep it for yourself." Kai Jun and Hao Yuni were confused why Long Feng screamed…until they touched the Death Note as well, and saw the hideous monster. Soon, Nutkicker stomped on it, causing him to see the Shinigami also. His eyes grew as big as dinner plates at the sight.
"Relax, the name's Ryuk. That Death Note is now yours." "That's it?" asked Long Feng, "Just like that? I don't have to fight you or anything? I just take it and go my own way?" "Well…" started Ryuk, "since that's MY Death Note, that means I am now attached to you wherever you go until you either die or relinquish ownership of that Death Note." "Hey Feng," said Kai, "we're gonna go check up on that other Death Note to see what we can do with it." "Alright," said Long Feng.
Kai Jun and Hao Yuni both split up after they reached the central square of Tokyo. Kai Jun was planning to find the other Death Note and use it to kill off everyone who had made his life miserable. But Hao Yuni had other plans. Whenever he'd get the chance to hunt down Misa…boy, he thought, will I have me some fun.
Long Feng and Nutkicker had led Ryuk out of the misty forest and hid out for a few days so that Long Feng can figure out how to get back to his world. I finally have the Death Note, now all I need is to get back to my world, and I can take Ba Sing Se for myself. But he still didn't know how it worked, so he asked Ryuk. "It's very simple," he said, "you write down the name of the victim and they die. If you don't right a reasonable, or any, cause, then they just die of a heart attack. And you must see their face first before you kill them." Easy enough, I know who my targets are. But some of the Dai Li agents he didn't know by name. He brought that problem to Ryuk's attention.
"Then I can offer you…Shinigami eyes."
"What are those?"
"It's simple. You give me half of your remaining life span, and I give you the eyes to see a person's name and remaining life span. For example, if you had 12 days to live, it would be 6 days if you had the eyes."
Long Feng consider this for a moment, and then after some thought, he said, "Deal. Give me the eyes."
Kai Jun had managed to end up in the alley right between a parking lot and the Yotsuba Company Building. He saw the Death Note fly into a house a few nights before, and then he saw it in the hands of a scary looking man, whose name was apparently Kyosuke Higuchi, and brought it with him into this building everyday. Now Kai was scouting out the place to see how he can steal the Death Note.
It was currently night time, and he followed Higuchi, and his coworkers, to an apartment building not far from there. He arrived just in time to see a police officer with long hair "accidentally" fall to his death. Everyone started splitting up, and Kai hid inside the trunk of Higuchi's red sports car and he hid in it the whole ride.
What Kai didn't know was that Hao Yuni had been on the scene as well. But he had no intention of stealing the Death Note. He had his eyes on Misa Amane. She had been wearing a nice outfit that night. Good news for Hao, but bad news for Misa.
Misa was walking down the street, on her way to see Light. She was humming a song that was apparently one of her songs. "I can't wait to see Light!" exclaimed Misa. "You won't be seeing anybody tonight," said Hao, out of the dark. Misa turned around to see where the voice came from, only to have a rag put on her face (you really expected people like Hao and Kai to NOT have rags with chloroform on them?) that had chloroform on it. Misa struggled hard to resist, but it wasn't enough. Within seconds, she was unconscious, in the greedy arms of Hao Yuni.
Long Feng looked to the night sky with an evil glare and his new Shinigami eyes, with Nutkicker looking at him in shock and fear, and Ryuk having a big grin on his face, seeing another sucker writing out his own misfortunate fate by not only trading half his life span for the eyes, but also taking the Death Note in the first place. "Now that I can see the names of everyone, I am…invincible! I might have failed to take Ba Sing Se the first time, but not this time! No one can stop me from having complete control of the Earth Kingdom!" Ryuk had no idea what Ba Sing Se or the Earth Kingdom was, but simply thought to himself, This one's gonna be fun!
This is just about where I started setting up the stage for the last part of the story. I hope you are all enjoying it! The next part is where everything wraps up. :)