A/N I have decided to rewrite this story since looking back on it I realized just how pitiful it is. I hope this time its better. Please review and let me know thank you
A young demoness looked on in anger as her father ran through a burning mansion searching for his mate and child while also looking for their murderer. The girl knew not to interfere especially since her father was involved with humans, the lowest of the low and the least important creatures. She stayed where she was at looking down at the chaos and thought to herself that her father deserved this for loving a human. When she saw the castle collapse around everything she went down to see the damage and saw her fathers body. Even though he was newly dead she grabbed his sword So'unga and shivered at the power quickly overcoming it much like her father. As soon as she got the sword she created her cloud and flew to where her trusty little toady Jaken was at.
As soon as he felt his mistress's presence he ran up shouting about how happy he was that she was there and that she was safe even though she was challenging her father and he did not realize all that was going on what with the birth of his mistress's half brother. When she landed before him he rushed up to her asking what happened and why she carried her father's sword. She smiled down at him making the little toad imp flinch "my father is dead Jaken, I did not kill him but his precious So'unga is now mine. Everyone except for his mate and brat are dead" the imp squawked at that "milady why didn't you kill the half-demon?" he would have continued except she gave him a look that promised death if he went on "I will not stoop so low as to kill a baby. Let him grow up and learn how to fight. "Jaken looked at her a little worried but decided against saying anything knowing he would die if he said something, anything really.
The young woman ignored her scared servant and looked up at the moon 'just you wait, Inutrasha you will regret this day, you took my father away and disgrace the world already by being born' with those thoughts she turned and made her white cloud and flew to the castle of the once great demon lord Inutaisho, Now only her home the new lady of the west and sole ruler of this large space of land.
A/N so what do you think? Better? Worse? Confused? Please let me know.