So this is my first story here! Um, this is my story that I might make into a manga; it's called the Howl of a Fox. So this is only the prologue, so it might not be as great. I guess you could say that it sucks :P
Genres I think would be: fantasy, shoujo, adventure? maybe.
I've told this story to some of my friends before, and they really liked the idea, so now I'm hoping that you, too, would like it. I'll keep writing once I think that people might like it. Because if people don't it's going to become pointless :P
My lustrous black hair covered my face as the wind blew against me. "Brother, let's hurry up and go home! It's past 6; Mother and Father must be worried sick!" I placed my right hand over my hair and kept it down.
"Kaguya, you have to be patient. Running will do no good. Especially with your frail health and all." My brother looked away, flustered. "And I can see your..." he quietly whispered, and took a peek at me. I looked down at my skirt; the wind was blowing it up! I quickly restored it to normal, and hoped it wouldn't happen again.
"Geez... I hate the wind!" I started running home. "I'll catch ya later!"
I was always happy with my life. My twin brother, Satoshi, was a honor student. My mom and dad had great jobs. I was content with everything! I thought that life wasn't as bad as people said. But I never guessed that something was bound to happen sooner or later that would change my life forever.
I opened the door slowly, hoping to find my parents in the couch, relaxing. I never really wanted to disturb their "rest time." Though, I had never realized that the door was left open.
Why was the door unlocked? I always wondered.
The T.V., which was usually on, was silent. Dad, who was such a cleaning maniac, left his newspapers at the table. The whole house was silent. The house... reeked of iron! Or so I thought. I went to check the kitchen out; maybe Mom is making something for dinner! I wonder if it's fish... But there were no signs of her. No signs of dinner, either. I heard Satoshi enter the house.
"Kaguya, close the door when you're already inside! A burglar might come in." Satoshi closed the door behind him, and locked it. He took off his shoes, and walked straight to the kitchen. "That's weird. Where's Mom? She should be getting dinner ready by now," he whispered as he looked around.
"Brother, don't you think it's weird? The whole house is quiet... Something must've happened to them!"
"Don't worry, they must be delayed from their workplace. It's nothing to be concerned about."
"That's easy for you to say..." I twiddled my thumbs. I could feel my heartbeat getting louder and faster. There was a bad feelings in my chest. "I'm going to check if they're in their rooms for a bit!" Frantically running up the stairs, the smell of iron was slowly getting stronger. What made me sure it was iron? This feeling inside my chest... Something definitely happened here! I'm sure of it! I stared blankly at the wooden door; Mom and Dad's room was beyond it. Slowly and quietly did I place my hand on the door knob; it felt cold! Twisting the knob, my chest began to feel hot. As I opened it, cold air blew out, and the smell of iron was enveloping the whole house. No – it wasn't iron – it was blood.
My feet lost its balance, and I fell on the floor. There were two bodies who lay motionless on the floor. I was almost sure it was... Mom and Dad! And... there was a beautiful creature next to them.
Was it a white wolf? No, maybe it was a fox. A pure, white fox. I daresay, it had nine tails! Enveloped in red paint. Or maybe... it was blood.
The last thing I remembered doing was screaming. Screaming? Why? Was I screaming for help? Was I hoping that help would come? Was I screaming to save my life? No...
I was screaming out of anger;
I was screaming for revenge.
Tell me what you think of it! This is when both Kaguya and Satoshi are 10-year-olds. They were very small, and went to school. Satoshi is the older one, btw. Though, they ARE twins. Identical twins :P
The next chapter may be more exciting. If you've heard of "Kokkuri-san" before, it's based off that; though... I changed it from knowledge to wishes. :)
I'm so sorry that the grammar and stuff are so not professional; I'm not as old as you think xD