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March 4, 2011

Bath Time

For: Tomboy Amy *For Being Kind and helping me out so I can make the story better*

I woke up in the hotel bed.

I yawned and lifted my head, Alice scared me, she was glaring at me.

"What?" I asked her innocently, instantly seeing the future, She was going to make me take a BATH! NOOOO!

"You haven't taken a shower since we have known you Bella Swan, get in the tub this instant."

"I don't wanna." I said, poking my bottom lip out and making my eyes water.

"Bella." She sighed frowning,

And that's how we all ended up in our hotel room's Pool replaced with soapy water and us all in our swimsuits.

I was on a ducky floaty just floating around. Could bath time get any better?

Esme's POV.

I wached adored at Bella floating around on a cute little piece of plastic.

And Alice and I giggled as she floated by, humming a Beethoven song. "Don, don, don, don, don. Ding DIng, DING DING, Don, don, don, don ,don, DING DING DING DING DING DING DONG.'

Rosalie has been even more distant. I was a bit worried. I think she was actually scared of Isabella. scared that she was becoming more important than her, But Rosalie is just silly. Doesn't she know that they are all my equal Children?

Bella went underwater and blew bubbles with a snorkel. Making the colors come out different colors.

This was a remarkable little girl, and she seems happy, well MORE happy than useual. I wonder what's gotten into her?

Well whatever the case I'm just glad that she is Happy. Much different than the young girl that I found sobbing her cute little eyes out.

Bella deserved everything a child could wan't, need and beyond. And I planned to provide that for her. No matter the cost.

EEEP!
I'm depressed guys.

I got my first mean comment by this old 60 year old cat lady who has nothing elce to do than pick on 14 year olds: Holy shitake. Can you spell ANYTHING right? Is this supposed to be a GOOD story? Oh Jesus. What kind of three year old dances, retains the name of a song and has like freaking mega-powers? None. This is ridiculous. Please learn to use the English language appropriately.

This story makes me weep for the future of humanity.

Yeah, I know, why couldn't she have said something nice like Tomboy Amy : it's Volturi ;) and it's Carlisle and Emmett :)aegean is again :)hese is he'sgentaly is gently :)disbelief is one word, not dis-belief :)it's replied :) not replayed it's aren't, not arnt :)it's members :) not mimbers :)you're an amazing writer :) you just have to be a little careful with your spelling :)

See, was that so bad!

And I um yea I'm sorry that you guys had to suffer with this small amount of writeing. I feel bad I couldn't deliver. THOUGH IT WAS LONG BEFORE HAND! BUT FAN FIC JUST HAD TO GO AND GLITCH AND DELITE HALF OF MY STOREY! The volturi* Thanks for telling me how to speel that by the way) Point of view was hear but it delited so Ill just add it in the next chapter. AND uhh lets see.. I had wrote a veary long thing for all my reiverers, I mean writeing a thanks to all of you gys seperitely but it got delited also. :( But Ill probably make that in its own chapter, yeah!

Love, Piece and Rock -N- Roal

PS. I have a competition! It ends on... lets see I got to look on my calender wait! Lets just say it ends on the 16th? and it is: Give me an Event to happen in the storey. The winner will have their event put into the story, get a extra chapter before anyone elce sees it will get a special Jacob POV of him makeing Baby J out of and his fav bear and! *Drum Roal Please* you will get an awesome, and I mean awesome Character made after you. You get to pick rather she should be witch human or Vamp or even wolf! And you get to choose what time period that she should be around Bella (Todler, Kid, Teenager) and you can also choose to be one of her best friends, family or blah blah blah. Ill give you all the info in the next chapter which will only be thank you's and info and stuff like that! I love you guys bye!

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