Hello my readers! Yes I hate chapters that are just author's notes as well, so I'm going to add the beginning of the next chapter. But the point is, recently I have been arguing with a group that has to stay anonymous in this case, but they are giving reviews to people saying they will report people for abuse for bad grammar and interactive stories (like TTT who follows us), here's an example of these reviews:

"This is against the ToS. You have been reported. You should get a beta reader the next time you write. "Nawt" is not a word, whether you follow Lisi and her not-so-fab series or not. If you are referring to the person, you use their actual name or their nickname. "Kuh-laire" is not Claire's nickname; it's a pronunciation. You need to start capitalizing the beginning of sentences and you spelled "Kristen" wrong at least twice, if not more. You should have put, "She's such an LBR now!" in a different place stating somewhere that Massie thought it, not just place it there like a random thought that you had. That wasn't a prologue; it seemed more like a summary. You can be assured that you have been reported for both an interactive story and disregard for proper grammar.

~Have a nice day!"

And:

Congratulations. Your fic has the honour of being my FIRST submit-your-own-character of this fandom. I would have been perfectly happy to go about my naive ways in thinking that writers in this fandom had more sense than that.

So. Your fic is interactive. I have reported it for that. Also. Titles are supposed to be G-rated. Reported.

And please don't use chtspk in a fic. And capitalize. Basically, get a beta. They help. A lot.

Thanks, much.

~Rachel

And these are on the same story.

Now I personally see this as a flame with like 0.5% of constructive criticism, but I want to see what you think. They have reviews like this all over the Clique section. Now give me your honest opinion, I'm arguing with them saying they need to stop, but they still believe its constructive criticism, so I need you guys opinion please. Because they are saying I'm blowing this out of proportion, and I might be, I just want to know. Now here is your preview of your chapter in return for your help, thanks!


Mo's POV-

I'm so sick of these STUPID producers! Scott has met with them five times in the three days we've been here and I'm so tired of going here. Right now Olivia and Wen are upstairs writing a song, and Olivia claimed they needed to be "alone" to get in the "writing process" so I'm stuck down here in the hotel lobby. Charlie and I are supposed to be going to hang out today, check out the sights, and get me away from the movie business.

"Hey Mo! Long time no see." A voice said. That can't be him.

"Don't tell me you don't remember me." I felt my feet tapping so fast. Just get up, and go. I wanted to go so fast, I wanted to make sure I got out of here. I felt a hand on my shoulder.

"Mo, come on."

"Of course I remember, sadly. Hi Ray."


ALRIGHT! That's all I can show you for right now, look deeper in that sneak peek, not only did I announce the return of Ray, I confirmed Wen/Olivia fluff, and Mo/Charlie fluff! ;) Alright guys, see ya! Answer that question please!