Edited and Rewritten

WARNING: This Chapter is why I've rated this story M

I don't own Bleach

Two days passed with Renji training her. Each day she got a little bit better. After their third session, Renji carried her on his back, like he did everyday. "Renji, I think I'm getting better at this. I don't have to concentrate as hard anymore on keeping the voices out. Plus I can move from one mind to another without too much difficultly." Her arms tightened around his neck as she moved higher on his back. "But I still don't know how you plan on training me when you're not there."

"Well, I've been thinking about that, and I'm going to ask a friend to help." he said walking into the squad 6 barracks.

They passed by an angry looking Byakuya, who Renji gave a nod to, while Renee glared at. Here, he was the boss and she nothing more then a broke piece of dirt on the bottom of his sandal. How did she know that? Well he'd voiced it more then once. God she really hated that man.

Once they were back in Renji's room, she hopped down off his back. "Who are you planning on asking? Rukia?" she asked walking to the couch and laid down.

Renji shook his head and walked over to the couch. Lifting her head, he sat down and placed her head in his lap. "No, I'm going to ask the 3rd seat of squad 11. He helped train me, and I think he can help you." He said stroking her hair out of her face.

"How so?" she'd only meet the man- Ikkaku Madarame- once and that was enough. His mind had been nothing but chaos. Thoughts of fighting and killing just weren't her cup of tea. "Isn't he all about fighting?"

"Yeah, but that's part of my plan." He said with a shrug.

"Getting me beat up is part of your plan. How is that going to help me control my power? I'll be over run with thoughts and he'll whop my ass." She glared up at him, angry. "Shit, I wouldn't have a chance even if you were there. I can't fight worth a damn, and he's a trained killer."

"Claim down Renee," Renji laughed, "I've got that covered too." She gave him a suspicious look that only made him laugh harder.

"What are you planning, Abarai?"

"I'm going to train you to fight. Well I'm not, but Ikkaku is."

"You're not serious are you?" When he didn't say anything she paled, "Oh god, you are." She got up and walked away from him. Digging through the bag of her things, she pulled out a black wife beater, a pair of ripped blue jeans and headed for the shower. Before entering the bathroom she looked back at Renji, a grin still on his face. Shaking her head she said, "I don't know why you want me to learn to fight, but you must have your reasons. So I'll give."

He nodded, "That's because you can't tell me no."

"Ha," Closing the door, Renee effectively blocked out his laughing face.

Renji watched as Renee disappear behind the bathroom door. Over the last couple days, his feelings towards the human, had changed drastically. First it was just curiosity, that changed to a friendly like, which morphed into something more. The way she carried herself, put her all into everything, touched something in him. He heard the shower turn on and he couldn't help but imagine her naked body under the hot water. Her hands covering her in soap as she washed. He wished that it was his hands instead.

A groan escaped him, and he had to stand. He needed to get away from there before he made those thoughts turn into reality. Leaving the room as quickly as possible, he tried to erase the thought of Renee showering. Stepping out, Renji closed the boor behind him started to make his way down the hallway.

Knocking on Captain Kuchiki's door, he waited for a response before entering. Byakuya looked up at him, his face as stoic as ever. "Good evening, Captain. I was just wondering if you had any paperwork that needed doing?"

The Captain raised one elegant eyebrow before saying, "And where is your charge? I thought you were suppose to be training her."

"I am, sir, but we're through with today's training, so I thought I'd come and see if you needed me to fill out any paperwork."

The noble shook his head. "I do not have anything for you, Lieutenant." When Renji didn't leave, Byakuya said. "You can leave now."

Sighing, Renji left the Captain's office and headed back towards his room. Hoping she was done with her shower. Stopping at his door, he touched his forehead to it. He could hear her music coming from the other side. It wasn't as loud and pounding as what she normally listened to. Her soft voice could be heard singing along. Slowly opening the door he stop short at what he saw.

Renee stood with her back to him, her blue/black hair down and damp, making her black top slightly wet. Her blue jeans were tight on her legs, emphasizing her back side. She swayed her hips to the beat, as she sang.

"Come feed the rain…
'cause I'm thirsty for you love dancing underneath the skies of lust
Yeah, feed the rain
'cause without your love my life ain't nothing but this carnival of rust
Yeah feed the rain
'cause I'm thirsty for you love dancing underneath the skies of lust
Yeah feed the rain'cause without your love my life ain't nothing but the carnival of rust"

She turned around with her eyes closed, allowing him to watch her more as she sang her song. Her voice was beautiful, like nothing he'd ever heard before. Deciding it was time to let her know he was there, Renji moved towards her as quietly as he could. As she spun around again, he wrapped his arms tightly around her waist. A small gasp escaped her, as she was pulled back against his chest. "You sing beautifully." He whispered in her ear. Without letting go, he turned her around to face him. She wrapped her arms around his neck and together they swayed to the music. "Why didn't you tell me you could sing?"

She shrugged, and smiled up at him. "You never asked."

He returned her smile with one of his own. They stayed like that, him holding her against him, while her head rested on his chest, listening to his heart beating. When the song ended, she went to step away from him, only to have him tighten his hold. "Where do you think you're going."

"I was going to turn the ipod off," She said glancing toward the ipod on his desk, a faint blush on her face.

"Leave it, I've got you right where I want you." He said as the song changed to something more upbeat.

Renee looked back at the man, his eyes were darkened with desire. Putting hands on his chest, she tried pushing away him. "Renji, we shouldn't."

"Why the hell not. We're both adults." He said with a frown, his arms loosening a bit.

"That may be, but what's going to happen when this is over. I'm human," She stopped trying to push away from him. "We're from two totally different worlds. I might be accepted here easier then back home, but I couldn't live here."

"That doesn't matter right now. At this point we're together so let make the best of it." He said.

"I don't want my heartbroken, Renji. I've had it done before, and it wasn't the best time in my life. I don't think I could go through it again." She looked into his eyes. "With you, it would be too easy for you to do just that. I like you a lot, Renji, and not just because I can't read you."

He smiled, "Good, because I like you a lot too, and if that was the only reason, I think my ego would be hurt a bit."

She smiled, "You're such a dork."

Bending down he touched foreheads with her. "Yeah, but that's what you like most about me."

Renee sighed when their lips touched, it was absolute bliss. His rough against her soft. When they finally came up for air, she noticed that he'd never closed the door. Anyone who walked by could see what they were doing. "Hold on Renji, you never closed the door." With just a thought, the open door closed and locked. Smiling she looked back into his brown eyes. "There that's better."

"You're amazing, you know that."

She shrugged, "I try."

Laughing Renji, took her mouth again. This time deepening the kiss, his tongue swept across her lower lip, seeking permission. She sighed and opened up for him. They explored, learning each other. He felt her lift up on her tip-toes, pulling away he looked into her eye's, darkened with passion. She smiled and reached for the band holding his hair up. Pulling it out, he felt the crimson strands fell down around them.

"I like your hair down. It's beautiful." she whispered, running her fingers through the strands.

He smiled and brushed her hair back, before taking her lips again. After a moment, he felt her hands underneath the top part of his kimono, moving her hands up, she slid it off, exposing his chest. She then moved her hands from his chest to his back. This time it was he who pulled away. "Are you sure about this, Renee?"

"I'm not sure about anything when it comes to you, Renji. But I'm not a child, and I know what I'm doing." She whispered, pulling him back down for another scorching kiss.

Renee felt Renji hesitate for just a second, before he moved his own hands to the hem of her wife beater. Slowly, he slipped his callused hands beneath her shirt. They moved from her lower back, to her flat stomach, where his fingers played with the belly ring. He finally got tired of moving around the fabric, and pulled it over her head, exposing the black bra underneath.

"God Renee," He said, looking down at her body. Her face flushed pink as she brought her arms up to cover her body. Renji stopped her actions. "Don't," he whispered. Reaching around behind her, he quickly unsnapped the latches and let the bra fall to the floor. She was exposed to him from the waist up. "You're absolutly beautiful." Carefully he took the right breast into his hand and gently fondled it. He smiled when she gave a slight groan in pleasure.

Looking up into his face, she saw the raw desire evident. Before she could react, Renji picked her up off her feet. His hands clenching at her ass. Gasping, she grabbed at his shoulders, wrapping her legs around his waist, and came into contact with the evidence of said desire. Another gasp escaped her. Her back hit something soft. Instead of being in front of her, Renji was now on top of her. It didn't take him long to unbutton her jeans and strip them off her, so that she was completely naked before him. His eye's raked her body, making her skin flush pink, from both desire and embarrassment.

Moving back up her body, Renji looked down into her cobalt eye's, before taking her lips, kissing her with all the passion he had inside him. Running his hand slowly down her body, he gently touched the center of her, where he could feel her desire. Carefully, he pushed his fingers inside her. When she gave a gasp of pleasure, he smiled. Until he came up against a thin barrier. Stiffening he frowned, and gave her a shocked look. "You're a virgin."

She squirmed under his accusing gaze. "Well yeah. It's kinda hard to be with someone sexually when you can hear their every thought. Is it going be a problem?"

"I thought you said you knew what you were doing?" he accused.

"Yeah, with my life. Not any of this." Her arms moved off his shoulders to cover her breasts. "If it's a problem, we can stop."

Renji shook his head, wondering over the gift she was giving him, being her first. "No, it's ok. I just don't want to hurt you."

Snaking her arms around his neck, she pulled him back down. "Don't worry Renji, I'm a big girl."

He kissed her, and only left her long enough to remove the rest of his uniform. Renee couldn't help but to stare. She had been right the first time when she called him a god. He was absolutely beautiful. His musles moved so fluidly, as he stripped off the bottom half of his uniform, so that he now stood completely naked before her. She started to have second thoughts when she noticed how big he was. 'How the hell is he going to fit?'

When he came back and took her lips again, all thought left her mind. This man could make her mind go totally blank with just a touch of his lips. She felt him gently probe her a bit more, making sure she was ready, before moving his body between her legs. "Are you sure about this, Renee. Cause once it's done there's no going back."

"I know, and I'm sure." She whispered.

Nodding, Renji bent down and took her mouth at the same time he entered her. She gasped against his lips, and dug her nails into his back at the slight pain, that was quickly overrode by pleasure.

When he was sure she was alright, Renji began to move. Picking a slow rhythm to start with, letting her adjust to his size. As she became more comfortable, he picked up speed. He could feel she was getting closer to climax, and after a few moments he was too. With a couple more thrusts, he felt her tighten around him as she cried his name. Seconds later, Renji found his own release. Collapsing beside her, he pulled her on top of his chest. Her warm breath caressed his heated skin, giving him chill bumps.

"Thank you, Renji." She whispered, sleep in her voice.

Smiling, Renji kissed the top of her head and closed his eye's. "No Renee, thank you." She'd given him an unexpeccted gift tonight, her virginity. They fell asleep like that, with her lying across his tattooed chest, his arms wrapped tightly around her. Like he was afraid she would disappear and it would have all been a dream. Renji didn't think his heart could take that.

Wow, I liked it the first time I wrote it, but I'm glad i've come back and rewritten that scene, I think it's totally better. Hope you enjoyd it ^^

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