This is my first true foray into Supernaturalstories. This will not be about the Winchesters, and will probably only feature Bobby and a few demons from the show as side characters. I always value constructive criticism, as I'm always trying to better myself. So if you think something should be changed, please tell me. I will take all suggestions into consideration.
Nicolas Cole stood at the foot of his bed, staring challenging into his father's eyes. After eighteen years of taking orders and silent obedience, Nicolas had had enough.
"I am done with your shit. The blind faith you have imposed on me from birth." Nicolas saw red as his hands clinched into tight fists.
His father raised his hand threateningly, "As long as you live under this house, you will obey my rules." His open hand flew towards Nicolas, aiming for his cheek.
Nicolas stepped in, prepared for his father's abuse, and blocked the swing with his arm. "Speaking of which, father," Nicolas started, spitting the last word and only inches from the older man's face. "I'm leaving tomorrow." Nicolas brought up his knee quickly into his father's stomach before kicking the man out of the room. He closed the door in the other man's face and locked it.
"Open this door, now," his father sputtered, banging on the door. Then more focibly, "Open this door right now or I'll tear you a new one!"
"Shut up, Frank," Nicolas said calmly before turning up his music.
I know this is horribly short, it was important to me to show the rift between Nicolas and his father, but I didn't feel like it helped the story as a whole so I didn't add it into the first chapter.