(I changed the point of view and how I showed the story, I hope it works out better than the first two chapters)
All To Seven Moons!
Amaya waited till the unit was out of sight and she was in a park on a bench a block away before she examined her injuries. She winced as she poked at a piece of skin hanging on to her, threads away from being ripped off. The pain was so bad, it felt like her legs were just gone and replaced with just the hot and gaping lacerations. Almost like a zebra with black instead of white stripes, or white instead of black, whatever the case was. She bent her head forward, trying to put more blood to her head to stop the throbbing, thumping pulse from carrying the pain from her legs to her head. "I look like I have a hangover and got dropped into an oversized apple peeler", she mumbled to her self in English, peppered with a few pained curse words. She gritted her teeth and noticed for the first time someone was there, a sacrifice. This sacrifice was strong, and was alone, his heart string broken, meaning his fighter is deceased. She painfully yelled "I know you're there! It's too late to be in a park, unless you're a wolf…" her voice cracked with pain and the upheaval in her throat that showed her body wanted to cry out with tears of pain. She resisted this. She heard the rustling figure shift in front of her an arms length away. She saw his feet before his face, figuring out his gender by looking at the brown leather loafers he wore. She sat up and looked at the strange figure who returned the stare. She spoke in perfect Japanese "So you also have a bone to pick with me?" The man certainly looked proud for not having a fighter.
Ritsu looked at the girl in her disheveled state and mentally smile, he expected her not to be to beat up if Soubi did his job right like the good pupil he was. "I simply want to take care of those injuries over at seven moons and hear how the fight went with my pupil. But if you want to fight, go ahead, I have no fighter though…"
Amaya looked up "Is this a trick, I would rather fend for my self in this state then tire over a trap."
Ritsu admired the girls over examination of things, she was pretty smart for her age. Only a year older than Ritsuka and hoping to go to college. He decided he had to do a background check on her later, but for now, he needed to know of what circumstances he needed to pay his pupil. "Did the one who did this to you have the name Beloved and did he fight with a boy?"
Amaya said "He had a boy WITH him, but had him step aside so we could fight one on one, I could tell they weren't BOTH beloved, BUT their strings did sub-connect with each other."
Ritsu was shocked "I've never heard of sub-connected strings, maybe I am the student and you need to teach me some things, America may have some different techniques…Would you mind I call the one you fought here? Or do you now hold a grudge against him for your loss?"
Amaya saw now, he was the overly proud teacher who built this fine pupil and this was a test for his BELOVED student… "Maybe for the wounds, but I won the fight…"…
Soubi sullenly walked to his apartment and got a third call, knowing it was Ritsu sensei, he let it go to voice mail and wish he hung up on him instead.
Leave a message after the tone….beeeep…
YOU LOST! SOU-CHAN! YOU COULDN'T HAVE LOST! YOU ALWAYS WIN! HOW COULD MY BEST PUPIL LOSE!….it's not your fault, IT IS MINE, I AM A BAD TEACHER! I AM SOOOO SORRY SOU-CHAN! PLEASE CALL ME BACK SO YOU MAY HAVE A RE-MATCH WITH THIS…..CHEAT! I HA-…
End of new messages-
Soubi hung up the phone and sulked in the dark, till he found the light switch.
Youji and Natsuo shouted "It wasn't us we…" Youji finished "Are you bleeding?" they both widened there eyes and stared at the sulking, and dripping red soubi. "Your hair is as red as Natsuo's! What happened?"
Soubi just dropped on the coach and layed on his back with his forearm over his eyes. "Just go to sleep…I thought you liked to do that…"
Natsuo was worried "was it a fight? That doesn't look like blood though, was it a painting accident in a college class?" Youji burst with laughter "clean up in the art department, the red paint is running red!" He laughed until he realized he was the only one laughing "What's wrong with you guys, COMEON!" He sat up and saw his partner's worried face. Natsuo got up and walked to Soubi and poked him in the fore arm and said "You know, it's like, an hour or two till morning, you were gone awhile and we thought you were abandoning us, so, we panicked until you walked in the door…" He wanted to help Soubi "Want a bath?"…
…"Why do WE have to run HIM a bath!" Youji grabbed an oversized beach towel and handed it to Natsuo.
Natsuo glared at Youji and said "Cas he looks like his house was bombed from world war 2! He doesn't need our peskiness right now. Besides! The more we help him" He came closer to Youji's ear "The bigger chance we have of NOT getting kicked out…" Youji huffed and turned off the really steamy water "fine…"
They heard a door open and close outside and chased after Soubi. They both poked their heads out and screamed "We just ran you a bath too, maybe we shouldn't have been nice!" They slammed the door and sulked while sitting in the now warm bathroom. Youji shrugged "It is a waste of water…we could take the bath…" He looked at his Partner mischievously. Natsuo just looked at the tile floor and scratched at some grout "nah…" Youji was now bored and wanted to play, but his partner was depressed. "Wonder what happened to Soubi, you think Nagisa sensei has something to do with his misery?" Natsuo perked up and nodded "They do always lash out at each other, maybe we should ask her what happened…" Youji now had something to do "Let's go then…" They both went and "confiscated" money from Soubi's secrete stash and ordered a taxi to seven moons…
Soubi felt his phone buzz, he put it on vibrate since he was tired of the ringing, and he picked up this time out of pitty for sensei "what sensei?"
"You did a good job, but I need details on the fight." He was devastated and didn't hide the sadness in his voice.
Soubi just rolled his eyes "it's almost morning and I would like to sleep."
Ritsu was tired to "Just please, come over and you can sleep on the way here, AND sleep here when you are done, I just NEED the details…I promise I won't bug you after that Sou-chan"
Soubi pondered this for a second then said "fine, I will be there soon, BUT I WILL go right to sleep, NO QUESTIONS ASKED after the details are revealed."
Ritsu brightened up and said "I'll make sure a room is ready in the west wing so you can sleep, I won't ask than needed for tonight, but when you wake up, I'd like to know more…"…
…Ritsuka woke up after a bad dream, he dreamed Soubi would hate him and that he himself would become a monster, one that would kill all the other units and suffer. He looked at the clock and realized school would be in a few hours, but he really didn't want to go…he decided he would go see Natsuo and Youji, knowing them they probably went back to there "Nagisa sensei" to hide. He also decided to leave his parents a note saying he went to the library before school to study or something, maybe he'd just leave. Ritsuka got ready to leave in a new pair of jeans and a clean shirt with a warm jacket. But while he got dressed, he thought of what Soubi said, of knowing more about fighting before Soubi fought in front of him again, and he decided, he was going to do just that, learn more about fighting…at seven moons…
End of chapter 3
(They all have the same place in mind, I wonder if this large a coincidence counts as a small miracle! Anything is possible in a secrete world of spells and destiny intertwined partners…find out there surprising reactions in the next chapter! Send Me a message or comment stating how you feel about the way I set up the story or if you prefer first person or third person perspectives)
Perspectives
First person - Where The person telling the story is the person in the story, ex. -I saw a huge chimera burst in front of me!
Third person - Where the person telling the story is someone who is NOT in the story, ex. - Henry saw a huge chimera burst in front of him!