HEY! Time for another instalment of… A CINDERELLA REWRITE!
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Sorry it's late! (Well, to me it feels late) I've been having major writers block recently and FF wouldn't let me update for some reason.
Okay, you can read it now!
I don't own Cinderella or Teen Titans :(
"Stepmother!" Starfire called as she burst into a large room. In the centre of the room was a grand piano. There were also three magnificent chairs, one behind the piano and the other two next to each other to the right. Seated on the three chairs were three, pale faced women wearing huge, vibrant dresses.
"What?" Raven snapped as she stopped playing the piano. Jinx and Argent ceased their 'singing' and looked up at Starfire.
"I bring you a letter from the Duke concerning you!" she said as she handed Raven the letter she held in hand.
"Good, now get out!"
Starfire walked slowly towards the door but didn't go out. Raven opened the letter and read the contents. She made a small gasp noise.
"CUT! Raven? You call that a gasp?" Flare put her hands on her hips. "This is a gasp." She did a huge, dramatic gasp, putting a hand on her heart.
"I don't do over the top gasps." Raven crossed her arms.
"Well, can you at least do some sort of pleasantly surprised expression?"
"I'll see what I can do."
"Good! TAKE TWO!"
~Scene skip~
"Good, now get out!" Starfire turned and slowly made her way to the door, but didn't leave the room. Raven shook the letter open and pulled out a piece of paper. Her eyes widened as they whizzed over the words. She looked up at Argent and Jinx.
"Girls! This is brilliant news! The King is holding a ball at which the Prince shall choose his bride! All eligible maidens are to attend!" Raven said as happily as she could. Strange strangles cries sounded from Argent and Jinx's throats.
"CUT! Argent, Jinx, you're meant to squeal, not make weird strangle noises. TAKE THREE!"
~Scene skip~
"Girls! This is brilliant news! The King is holding a ball at which the Prince shall choose his bride! All eligible maidens are to attend!"
Argent and Jinx squealed half-heartedly.
"CUT! Those weren't squeals, they were half-squeals. TAKE FOUR!"
~Scene Skip~
"Girls! This is brilliant news! The King is holding a ball at which the Prince shall choose his bride! All eligible maidens are to attend!"
Argent and Jinx squealed loudly, almost deafening the other Titans.
"Cut! Too much squeal!" Flare said shakily. "Take five!"
~Scene Skip~
"Girls! This is brilliant news! The King is holding a ball at which the Prince shall choose his bride! All eligible maidens are to attend!"
Argent and Jinx squealed loudly, but not too loudly, in delight.
"Really! Come on mother! We simply must go shopping!" Argent exclaimed. Jinx nodded frantically.
"Yes! We must get new dresses for the ball!"
"All eligible maidens?" Starfire asked curiously. "That means I am also invited to go!"
"What?" Jinx shrieked. "She can't go mother!"
"You won't let her? Will you?" Argent asked.
"This has been issued by the king himself and it clearly states that 'all eligible maidens are to attend'. She is allowed to go." Raven received shocked looks from Argent and Jinx. "If she get's all of her chores done and finds a suitable dress," she added. Starfire nodded and skipped out of the room. As soon as she was out of earshot, she squealed and ran to do her chores.
The camera stopped filming.
"Good work! Okay, now we need to film the girls getting their dresses. POSITIONS PLEASE!"
Raven, Jinx and Argent walked onto a different set while the others stayed behind the camera. The three girls surrounded by rows of dresses.
"Just look through the dresses and try some up against you. Take one!"
Jinx and Argent sifted through the many garments, looking for anything that took their fancy. Jinx pulled out a dark purple one with a glittery black cloak trailing behind it. Argent nodded as Jinx held it up in front of her. The black haired girl went back to looking through the dresses, eventually picking out a black one with a red piece of fabric that made a belt. Raven just stood there, arms crossed.
"CUT! Raven, you need to be looking through the dresses as well! Jinx and Argent, I didn't hear any girlish screams! And, you're meant to pick the dresses you tried on earlier!" Flare shouted. The girls did not look happy.
"I don't wear dresses," Raven explained bluntly.
"Those dresses were ugly!" Argent protested, pointing at the offending articles of clothing.
"I wouldn't be seen dead in them!" Jinx complained.
"That's the point. Raven, you wear a leotard! I don't think a dress is going to be any worse. Take two!"
The three girls looked through the many dresses, picking some of them out. Jinx and Argent squealed slightly at random moments. Jinx then 'spotted' a large orange one at the front. She went over to it and picked it up with the tips of her fingers, holding it an arms length away. She then took a deep breath and awkwardly scrunched it up a bit, pulling it one centimetre closer to her.
"CUT! Jinx, you're meant to hug it! Not scrunch it up slightly. Take three!"
The girls did the same thing as before. Again, Jinx pretended to see the dress before walking up to it and hugged it very quickly. Argent picked up the pink one next to it and picked it up. As soon as she did this, she dropped it and backed away from it.
"I can't do it!" she clutched her head. The rest of the Titans laughed.
"CUT! Argent…it's a dress. It's not going to eat you. Take four!"
Argent managed to hug the dress this time, but drew away from it as quickly as she could. Raven's dress was a light shade of maroon. It wasn't as large or poofy as Jinx's and Argent's but was still fairly large. She picked it up and walked to the back of the set.
"Come on girls. Let's pay for the dresses and leave," Raven told the other two.
Flare turned the camera off.
"Good. Starfire, you're on!"
Starfire walked on the set wearing her costume. She carried a mop in one hand and a bucket in the other. As soon as the camera started she began to mop the floor. Jinx and Argent walked in. They opened their mouths to say something when Argent fell over, dragging Jinx with her. They landed in a colourful heap on the floor.
"CUT!"
"Ow…" Jinx moaned. "What was that for?"
"Sorry love, I slipped."
"Get up you two. Take two!"
The two of them got up and walked off again. Starfire began to mop the floor again. However, this time, before Argent and Jinx could take three steps, Starfire fell over. Robin ran forward to catch her and also slipped and fell on top of her.
"Ugh, not again. CUT!"
Robin got off Starfire and helped her up.
"This isn't working. Starfire, scrap the mop and bucket. Beast Boy, go get a broom."
Starfire put the mop and bucket next to a pile of props. Beast Boy ran off and returned with a broom. He handed it to Starfire to who took it and went back to her place on the set.
"Take three!"
Starfire began to sweep the floor when Jinx and Argent came in. Starfire, however, was sweeping so enthusiastically that she brushed a large cloud of dust in the two girl's faces. The coughed and try to sweep it away with their hands.
"CUT! Maybe not a broom. Beast Boy, go get a feather duster." Beast Boy ran off to get the duster while Starfire put the broom with the mop.
"Take four!"
Starfire started dusting the mantelpiece on the set. She brushed a bit too hard and knocked everything off.
"Oops…"
"CUT! Beast Boy, get a piece of cloth and some polish."
"Why me?" Beast Boy asked.
"Because I said so. Now GO!"
He left the room again. Starfire put the feather duster with broom and mop. Beast Boy soon returned. He handed the items to Starfire who looked at them in a confused manner. She squeezed handle on the bottle of polish. It didn't move. She looked down nozzle and squeeze harder. Suddenly, the bottle burst, spraying those near with polish.
"Beast Boy, get a towel."
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