WARNING: sadness, possibly high chance of crying, comatose, sleeping on Eli, long rambling about promos at the end XD


Chapter Twenty-Eight: Coma (Eli's POV)

Sure. Many things can tick me off. Fitz. KC. And hospital waiting rooms. I had my head in my hands and my eyes closed. Did that just happened? Was Clare just set up? Is she currently in surgery as we speak? Yes. Yes. Yes. I could've prevented this. I thought I was. Adam was right when Fitz and KC were snickering and left abruptly, they had saw me. They had 4:00pm as their original time, but knowing that I'd be there, they told Clare 3:00pm. I got their a half an hour late. A half an hour that I'll never be able to take back. "Eli?" I turned my head to see Adam and Alli rushing through the automatic doors and rushing towards me. "Where is she?" Alli panted. "Surgery. They're trying to reconstruct her skull. KC broke it pretty badly." I murmured. Alli sighed and wiped tears away. "Did you find out what time she'll be out?" Adam questioned. I shrugged. "Yeah, but they said there is no real time. So it can be at any minute or possibly five hours from now. I'll wait as long as I will." I said determined. "We'll wait here with you." Adam said. Adam and Alli sat on either side of me. Immediately getting their phones out to call loved ones. I sat where I was. I planned to sit as I was until they call Clare's name.

"No, Fi. You have to listen. KC did all of this. Not Clare." Adam murmured into his phone. I glanced at him. He was calling Fiona, possibly seeing if she could make it back home to see Clare. "So you can be here?" Adam said enthusiastically. "That'll be great. I love you FiFi." Adam murmured softly into his phone. I lifted one side of my mouth. My best friend was in love. "Bye." Adam hung the phone up and smiled. "Fiona might be here by tomorrow or Sunday. It depends on her flight. But my girlfriend's coming home." Adam sung quietly. "Adam.. Take my advice. You suck at singing." I whispered. Adam chuckled. "I've been told many times." I returned my glance at the floor, quickly checking the clock. 8:36pm. Alli had fallen asleep against me. I looked down at her, she snuggled against my body before shifting and getting closer. I didn't care. As long as nothing else happened, I'm cool with Alli sleeping on me. The only others in this room was Clare's mom and dad. It was such a nice way to meet them, drenched in their daughter's blood. But one more girl sat next to them. She had said her name's Darcy. She had Clare's reddish brown hair that was pulled into a messy ponytail and Clare's blue eyes. No doubt that this was her sister who had moved to Kenya. Clare's told me it all. How Darcy had a internet stalker that eventually found out where she lived. How Darcy had been date rapped and her attacker was never found out. How Darcy had tried to kill herself by slashing her vein at her wrist. I glanced at her bare wrist, there was a long gash. A scar. It was true. She seemed nervous glancing around, she constantly had her phone out. Although after a couple of minutes, Peter barged through the hospital doors. Darcy leapt up and rushed to him. She threw her arms around his neck and started sobbing. Clare wasn't kidding when she said they were in love with each other, even if Peter dated Mia. "Shush. It'll be okay Darce." Peter murmured in Darcy's hair. "No.. It won't.. Why would someone hurt.. My baby sister?" Darcy wept. I looked away. I shouldn't be eavesdropping, but I felt bad. Darcy had been through enough and to find out that her sister was brutally attacked by her boyfriend and his friend. It was enough to make Darcy fall into Peter's arms. It was true love. I could see it from here. "Family of Clare Edwards?" A young woman doctor called out. We all turned our heads in her direction. I shook Alli awake and nodded at the doctor. We all swarmed around her. "Is my daughter okay?" Clare's mom choked out. "Well. We managed to reconstruct her skull and her cuts and bruises have been tended too." Many sighs of relief were heard from us all. I smiled slightly. She was okay. "But." My head snapped back at her direction. "But what?" I asked. "She is okay?… Right?" I asked. My nerves started to get the best of me. She wasn't okay. "Her brain had be jolted in her skull too much. She's in a coma. We don't know for how long. It can be for as long as a couple of days or as long as a couple of months." The doctor explained. "She's in room 587 if you wish to visit her. One person at a time. I'm sorry for the complications." The doctor apologized before walking off briskly. The air was silent. That was until Clare's mother started down the hallway where Clare's room would be, towing her husband along despite that only one is allowed. I saw that Peter was holding on tight to Darcy, who was shaking uncontrollably. Peter himself was crying. I glanced at Alli who was weeping on Adam's shoulder. Adam stared at me still shocked. "Eli.. You okay man?" Adam asked. I didn't answer him as I sat back down and stared ahead. "She'll be fine. She's a fighter." Alli insisted. I shook my head. "No.. It won't. She'll be in that coma for a long time." I whispered. The thought of Clare never awaking, the thought of never seeing her blue oceans. To never see her beautiful face light up. To never see her whisper my name. Then it hit me. I grabbed the nearest person to me, Adam and started weeping in his arms. I felt Alli hold me also, giving me support.


OHOHOH! So Clare's in a coma and if no one knows what a coma is, it's a state when the mind gets knocked around so much that your asleep (unconscious) for as long as the mind wants. It could be years until a person awakes. && HAS ANYONE SEEN THE NEW DEGRASSI PROMO!

I did! It was amazing! It had some Sav/Holly J drama, Alli getting in trouble by her parents, Declan all over Holly J, she looks uncomfortable, Eli starts freaking out in the hallway and sifting through a garbage can for papers, Clare tries to soothe him, but he lashes out by shouting, "I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS!" Another part was gothic Clare yelling at her parents who were arguing to "STOP IT!" I swear it was intense! Especially Eli freaking out, made him look hot XD. &&& in other news, This was a very short POV of Eli's. He'll be having POV's since Clare is in a coma and can't really have a POV at the moment. && The reason Darcy has returned was to surprise Clare that she's coming home for good, but wound up being surprised that Clare had been attacked. Did anyone love that Peter/Darcy love? I missed those two! I absolutely hated Peter/Mia, In fact I never liked Mia, I liked Isabella though XD. Cute baby. So I figured that Darcy needs some love, like Peter Stone :D. Any other couples you'd guys like to see? Maybe we could dabble into Declan and Holly J since Fiona is attached to them. Possibly Sav and Anya? I have a small question for you guys, actually TWO!. 1: have you seen the new promo? If so what was your favorite part? 2: How long should my story go on for? && sorry for long rambling, but don't forget too!

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