Hello again! so far Ive gotten several people who put my story on their Favorites list and its given me the insperation to keep going. So here's just a few pointers to let you know whats up :)
Italics: means someone is thinking.
*: these stars appear when I have someone Quote someone else
Underline: My notes. They wont appear too much since I'm sure you'd rather read the story than read me rambling.
Well those are the pointers so on to the story! :)
P.S how do start a review thingy I don't know honestly but if you know please P.M me. Anyway please rate my story.
Three days had passed since Mae had passed out and Marco sat there holding her hand, wondering when she'd wake up. The doctor said her condition had improved in the time she had been recovering, but the only thing they had to worry about was if she would wake up.
"Come on Mae." Marco thought as he sat there. He was so wrapped up in waiting for her to awaken that he hadn't heard Vista walk in.
"Has she stirred at all?" He aked looking at Mae.
"No I can't get her to respond to anything. She won't answer in the least, she won't squeeze my hand when i squeeze hers, I just..." He laid his head down. "What do I do Vista if she doesn't wake up...I won't be able to take it." He said close to tears,and Vista placed his hand on Marco's shoulder.
"Mae is a strong girl she'll wake up soon just give her time, so far she's been healing faster than any person I've met save for you. In the mean time you should eat." He said as he motioned for the door.
"What if she wakes up and I'm not here?" Marco commented as he held her hand tighter.
"I'd be more worried if she woke up and found out that you haven't eaten, you know she won't be too happy." Vista chuckled.
"I guess your right. Its not like sitting here will make her wake up any quicker." He said and headded out the door with Vista.
Of course when they got to the kitchen they were bombarded with questions about how Mae was doing. Marco told them she was fine and sat down to eat. Izo sat next to Marco and decided to ask a question of his own.
"Do you love her?" He asked and he and Vista laughed when Marco nearly choked on his food.
"What the hell brought that on?" Marco asked as he stared at Izo with shock.
"Just curious. You didn't leave her side for the whole three days till now. Just made me wonder." Izo said with a sly smile.
"I just didn't want her to wake up in the medical room and find herself completely alone!" He somewhat and turned his head as a slight bit of red covered his cheeks. Unfortunatly for him Izo noticed and so did Vista.
"Ah so its true. You do love her." Vista poked Marco's shoulder, teasing him. Marco swatted Vista's hand away and tried to keep calm.
"It looks that way to me Vista. Maybe we should help them plan for little ones, Hmm?" Izo said joining in on the fun.
"Have you lost your mind!" Marco yelled as he stood from seat. Izo and Vista were shocked at his outburst and quickly shut their mouths. By now every one in the kitchen was looking at Marco wondering what was going on, and he qiuckly headed for the door.
As soon as he opened the door though his mood improved as Mae stood there looking alot better than she had.
Sorry to cut it off like that but I'm still thinking of how to continue. I'm one of those people who don't think ahead for my stories I write them as they come to me. This story is perfect proof, it was supposed to be a oneshot but I found myself writing more chapters. Anyway I promise I'll think of another chapter soon so please Rate and Review. Thanks :)
