-.-U sorry 4 taking sooooo long in posting a new chapter. Yeah, I did erase the last chapter since it sucked that much that it created a new word for it… really. This chapter, is completely different to the other one, just in case. And if you find that my writing has began to suck… it's true.. really I don't have more ideas… Akiho Tonoshi, 10000 thanks for helping me, you've really been helpful as well as Romez. Now what I really need is inspiration… Sorry for wining so much about this long-lasting writers block, well then I'll just shut up and let you read. Please, if you really have ideas, or a request please tell me, that could maybe return the writing gift to me. -.- sighs well then … hope you enjoy.
Gaara: when will I appear?
HC: soon.. goofy grins
Gaara: really?
HC: keep bugging me and I'll ban you from the fic! now, shut up and work slave!
Gaara: growls HC, does NOT, by any means, own Naruto… if she did… she would've already made Hinata the main woman in the story.
Hinata: blushes & giggles
HC: YOU ARE SO CUTE HINATA-CHAN!!!!! Please let me use the plushie-no-jutsu™© with you and make you a plushie!!
Hinata: WTF?!
Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara and Neji: NO YOU WON'T SHE'S OURS!!!
Hinata: sweat drops
HC: party poopers… ¬¬(glares)
(A/N: just in case, I know I posted this chapter yesterday, I'm posting it again, but it has a lot of new stuff. It has the same main idea as the last one but it is more detailed and it has more things happening, also it explains more than the last one. Just to prevent any confusions, so if you want, just, read it again, I think you'll like it more than the last ones p yay!! I'm getting over the writer's block!!)
"Naruto, please" she whimpered while the tears ran her pink tainted cheeks.
"You could've told me, sweetie" he said in a fake sweet tone.
"Naruto, don't, please… it's not like that… I" she began hiccupping and the tears were blurring her vision.
"You, what, Forgot to tell me? Couldn't tell me? You know… I'm not that mad about it… we are enemies either way… but still" he growled and turned his face away. Hinata rose a bit from her position and rubbed her pale lavender eyes; she wiped her tears and stared at the boy.
"Still what? You need to kill me?" she asked, sadness not fading from her melodic voice.
"Don't push it Hinata" Naruto growled, still not looking at her.
"Don't push what? Tell me the truth Naruto" she pleaded.
"I'm telling you not to-" she cut him off.
"Please…" she pleaded again.
"Damnit! Just shut up woman! I'm telling you NOT TO PUSH IT!" he roared at her.
"Naruto" she began to hiccup again. She hid her face behind her hands, her small frame trembling from both fear and from the sobs.
"No… Hinata, I" he turned away again. This time she just sat up but she brought her knees beneath her chin and she hid her face in them.
"Please don't cry… I hate to see you cry…" he pleaded, his voice softening. He hated that of her… she made him weak and the kyuubi vessel knew it. He fell for her hard but now he couldn't accomplish his mission without hurting her… what was he supposed to do.
"But
if he makes you cry
Tears dripping out of your eyes
If he
makes you cry, come cry with me
'Cause I'll be crying too over
losing you." she sang the song lowly enough for only her to listen.
"I love you… you know that… Its just, gah" he jumped off the bed and jumped down the open window. He was too annoyed. While Hinata was still in the bed, half-naked and sobbing a certain guy saw her and entered her room to see what was going on.
"Hinata… why are you crying?" Kiba asked as concern was really evident in his eyes.
"I –hiccup- I'm fi-hiccup- fine" she said, her face still hidden within her legs and her trembling form was beginning to disappear.
"Hinata I've known you for years, what's going on, I can tell you are not fine" Kiba asked while he brushed away her indigo hair. He began to stroke her back in a soothing form until she hugged Kiba in a sudden motion. She clutched onto his shirt, staining it with salty tears. Kiba, not sure of what to do, he let her cry until she was ready to speak.
-meanwhile… as we follow Naruto-
"Shit! Fuck! Damnit! Hell! AAAGHHH!" Naruto yelled at himself while he was walking the forest. He had run out the window, trying not to see the damage he did to his beloved, yet he knew, he did not deserve her. He was breaking her piece by piece and he couldn't forgive himself for being that stupid as to actually take that mission. He kicked a rock and hit a tree. A grumble was heard. 'What the…'
"Oi, moron, watch were you kick rocks" Sasuke appeared, holding onto a rock and a bruised arm. He glared at his blond friend; a scowl appeared as his eyes turned from annoyed to blank.
"Ahh, Gomen, how did you know it was me?" he asked, not really paying attention.
"Two reasons why: 1. you are the only loud enough guy as to actually be heard cursing all over the damned forest and 2. You always have a tendency to kick and punch wherever but never watching where" he said while holding onto his bruised arm. A big, red spot was on his arm, soon-to-be turned to a greenish blue when it developed.
"Sorry, I guess…" he said drifting off his gaze and attention elsewhere. He woke up until he felt a smack, behind his head. His neck felt soar and it was aching.
"Itaaaa, what the fuck was that for?" Naruto growled.
"I was scolding you when you drifted off to dreamland, useratonkachi" Sasuke said supposedly joking as a cruel smirk played on his lips. Naruto just glared at him.
"Okay, bakka. What the fuck is wrong?" Sasuke asked, trying to decipher his friend.
"What are you speaking about?" Naruto said while drifting his gaze away from Sasuke's eyes. Sasuke just rolled his eyes and looked back at his friend.
"Don't play dumb, you are dumb enough as to actually pass yourself as someone even dumber" he snickered earning a hateful glare from the blond.
"Shut up teme, I'm leaving" Naruto turned on his heels and began walking until Sasuke turned him around pulling him back forcedly. Once Naruto had turned around, Sasuke delivered a hard blow on Naruto's face. Naruto stumbled back and held his nose, trying to keep the blood from falling. Sasuke went berserk at the scent of blood and began walking closer and closer towards Naruto.
Naruto gave him a confused look and he spot his friend's look as well as his fangs. He was beginning to feel light-headed and warmer, as if he was having fever. He held onto his head, small ruby-red drops fell, splashing in the ground. Sasuke smirked while his eyes lost its blank façade being replaced by a look of pure anger.
"Hah, you thought I didn't recognize you, a fucking Lycan?!" Sasuke spat cruelly while showing his fangs. Naruto avoided Sasuke's look while he just blinked, trying to focus his eyesight. Sasuke grabbed Naruto by the collar lifting him high up until the blond opened his eyes and glared at him, as demon-like pupils replaced cerulean blue. Sasuke smirked again while he saw his friend wasn't resisting just when he was about to punch him Naruto retorted.
The blond simply gave him a high kick on his ribs and sent him back, against a tree that was 10 metres away. Red chakra began to form and his eyes re-showed a yellowish colour with his pupil slit. His fingernails grew, forming actual claws and he roared. His blood lust was strong and he just kept advancing towards Sasuke.
Sasuke got up, and shook around while growing his fingernails and his eyes turning a poppy red. His hair grew a little as well as turning purplish-grey and he began to advance as well. Naruto already had a red tail and he was acting more animal like with every second that passed by.
-back with Hinata-chan -
"K-Kiba I was s-so scared" she said between sobs. Kiba just let her cry, stroking her back soothingly. He felt a blush creep up his cheeks but for now he didn't mind. Right now, he just cared about his small friend.
"What did he do?" he asked softly while running his thumb over the falling tear that glistened under the moonlight that showered the room, by entering it, giving to it an almost fairy story-like atmosphere.
"N-nothing… but, my blood… and my in-instincts… everything I don't know… i-it was weird, I d-don't even u-understand it m-myself… I just felt like I-I… needed to k-k-k-kill him… a-as if it was my d-destiny" she mumbled, stuttering every once in a while, breaking down into more sobs. Kiba seemed worried, but comforted her, nonetheless a sad smile on his features. 'Hinata if you knew how much I want to help you… but I myself, am not really used to this vampire stuff' he thought while stroking his best-friend's hair. She looked up suddenly, her eyes reflecting the moon itself but showing something else that allured Kiba.
-back to our two male friends -
"One of my brother's experiments, how disgusting are you? You repulse me, how could sweet little Hinata fall for a disgusting Lycan… a piece of shit, such like you" Sasuke said, while adding venom to every single word.
A growl and rising anger was his only reply, as an unbelievably strong punch came down on his face, throwing him against a tree. Sasuke before even hitting the tree, flipped back and ran towards Naruto giving him a series of punches that made him cough blood, but not strong enough to make the transformation stop. Sasuke was laughing, maniac-like while he enjoyed hitting his race's enemy. Sasuke brought another punch towards Naruto's chest, but Naruto stopped it before it hit him, twisting the arm of Sasuke. Sasuke turned around and got his fist out of the grip of his best-friend and hid in a tree, waiting to make the fight, a little bit more fun.
A growl and howl brought him back to reality, considering Naruto was already in berserk mode. A smirk was permanent in his features until he felt a strong force going down on him. He turned to the new figure, who was none other than his beloved, Hinata. She came, with puffy eyes, thanks to her crying, and a blood red and black, kimono. She was glaring at Naruto and her arm seemed to be directed to Sasuke while she was just controlling it.
"Naruto, snap out of it" she said, with a cold tone, something that Sasuke had never heard of. Sweet little Hinata seemed way too different. Naruto simply grinned and changed to a seductive look, simple growls, being emitted by him. He walked towards Hinata and stopped a meter before her.
"My vampire queen, you have finally woken up, haven't you?" Naruto spoke, with a faked sweet tone. She made a disgusted look as her boyfriend's look leaked with lust.
"Shut up, who did this?" she asked, directing her once sweet tone to his beloved and checking his new features 'Just like a Lycan…' she thought while showing a hint of sadness in her eyes.
"No one you should know of, even though I consider this a gift. It just increased my own strength, and kyuubi and I are really happy with the results" he said while clenching his fist and unclenching it while winking at his girl.
"Sasuke, why did you fight him?" she asked, now the question directed to her friend.
"He went berserk; it was necessary for me to fight him." he lied, while kneeling in one knee trying to stand the pressure on him.
"wrong answer" she placed even more pressure on the force on him. He whimpered, but for the time being, she didn't care. A new Byakugan was watching both of them. A simple, floral pattern grazed the left side of her face, starting mostly beside her left eye. It was an extremely complicate and alluring design.
"Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!" he yelled, pain coursing through his veins. He kneeled on both of his knees, his two hands helping him to stay up and not collapsing.
"Next time, tell me the truth" she said while turning around, somehow Naruto followed her. She kept walking without acknowledging her boyfriend's presence.
-In the exact same place but without Sasuke -.-U-
"Hinata-jo-oo-sama, kah?" Naruto said while coming towards her, placing his hand on her waist. She slapped it away and turned to her boyfriend. She had a scowl on her face while she glared at the boy.
"I'm not Hinata, now stay away you fucking… ahhh" Hinata fell limply on Naruto's arms. He laughed and a smirk played on his lips. He kneeled on one knee and picked his beloved, bridal style, he got up, still holding onto the knocked out girl. He saw piercing red.
"Come out" he commanded, showing he knew about someone's presence there. The person chuckled and moved out of a tree, coming before the light.
-On our dear ninja's mansion-
"Where is Hinata, Kiba?" Neji asked clearly annoyed that Kiba was pacing back and forth before the front door, as if he was waiting for someone. he was rubbing his chin and his eyes showed deep thought.
"I Don't know… she just ran towards the forest saying she felt something or something like that…" he said clearly worried and annoyed. he ran a hand through his hair and covered his face in his hands sighing loudly.
"…Where is she, bakka?" Neji asked, venom dripping off his tone. He didn't like Kiba pacing back and forth given that he was getting him worried, and a worried Neji isn't a happy Neji.
"Oyy, oyy, calm down, I told you, forest" Kiba said while walking towards the door, peeking outside by the small glass semi-circle on the door. He sighed and began pacing again. Neji got up and glared at the dog boy.
"Forest isn't good enough, now, fucking tell me" Neji said, trying to calm down. He ran his hands through his brown locks of hair and clenched and unclenched his fists trying to control himself. '10… 9… 8… 7… 6… 5… 4…' he thought.
"I bet she's fine…" Kiba muttered under his breath, pouting at Neji's over protectiveness. Neji just closed his eyes and his thoughts were becoming rougher.
'3… 2…' he said while his hands twitched, aching to strangle a certain dog boy.
"And if she isn't?" Neji asked. '1… 0' he thought while he stopped controlling. He walked up to the boy and grabbed him by the colour, Byakugan activated.
"She will be!" 'He's got a fucking dog's hearing…' Kiba thought while akamaru came in barking carrying someone. Kiba struggled to get out of his grip and finally ran towards his pet and took a look at the person lying on his dog's back.
- in another place-
"Tsunade… we'll need to speak to them…" Kakashi said while his eyes were twitching. He didn't like being a vampire. A small frown was placed on his handsome face and he rubbed his temples in annoyance.
"Kakashi shut it… I'm getting annoyed" Tsunade spoke, slamming her drunken fist on the desk, breaking it in half. She sighed and took out another bottle of sake… she would need blood soon instead of the hot, alcoholic drink.
-In Suna, away from the mansion, on the Kazekage tower-
"Shikamaru?" Temari asked while she was being caged against a wall, between her beloved's two stretched arms. She was beginning to be scared of her boyfriend. Her eyes were wide open and her breaths were coming out in deep ones. She calmed her rapid beating heart as she saw her boyfriend's face descending upon her's. She gasped as she felt his lip upon her's along with a longing need, and a fiery passion. She melted under his touch and he snaked his arm around her waist, holding her up to him, his knee resting between her thighs.
He descended, resting his face on the crook of her neck, breathing in her scent. He closed his eyes and hugged her. He came beside her ear and whispered.
"I need you… please" he asked with a husky voice. Temari froze. Had he just asked that? Her moss green eyes welled up. She fervently nodded her head, as two stray tears fell down her tanned complexion and splashed against Shika's shirt. He raised his head and inhaled deeply before opening his mouth, letting his fangs appear he bit her neck. A shallow gasp came out of her pink lips. She moaned softly but when Shikamaru, stopped she widened her eyes in shock. He began sucking, drawing crimson liquid from her. She began to feel light-headed and she looked up at him with hurt in her eyes. He had his eyes closed as he seemed totally peaceful, drinking her blood. Her eyes began to close and the resistance she was putting, pushing him backwards, faded.
She lay limply on his arms as he stopped sucking and removed his mouth from her neck and drew back. He stared at the unconscious girl before him and he just picked her up and laid her on her bed, arranging her thigh length thin, lilac, nightgown. He placed the sheets on her and he sighed.
He felt a small stream of blood leaking from his mouth. He wiped the crimson liquid with the back of his forearm and he gulped the last amount of blood remaining on his mouth. It tasted slightly sweet and tangy, coppery as well. He never liked the sweet and tangy things, nor the thick liquids, yet this one was different.
A smirk played upon his lips as one of his eyebrows twitched upwards. He chuckled lightly. 'I think I found my new tasty treat… who would've thought something such as this tasted so good' he thought while trying to re-taste a small amount of blood that could be in his mouth. A gust of wind came and Gaara came with it. Shikamaru quickly reacted and jumped down, using a teletransporting jutsu, while he fell. He chuckled. God, sweet could be good.
bah.. another sucky chapter … slams head against her hand I sometimes think I've lost my gift of writing.. Really… this chapter sucks and I took way too long to write this short. I'm like so sorry. I know the last 5th chapter was sucking even more, at least that's what I thought. I suppose this sucks but is less crappier.
Itachi: Please convince HC of continuing the story, or she won't and we don't want that, do we?
HC: sighs I do…
all the cast: WE DON'T!!, NOW SHUT UP AND WRITE!
HC: I feel as a slave…
Gaara: welcome to the club sighs
HC: review if you see fit… I'll try to regain my inspiration minna-san
Hinata: Ja ne!! review please… or at least try to convince her of continuing puppy face
HC: that won't work, well, I'm off. (SORRY 4 THE EXTREMELY SHORT CHAPTER… I REALLY AM TRYING TO WRITE, PLEASE FORGIVE ME)
