Here's the re-done second chapter. :)
BPOV:
I looked up to see it was him. Oh my gawd, his eyes. There so green and deep. I feel like I can see what he's feeling.
"H-hey," I stuttered. Damn, I feel like an idiot.
He chuckled. "I'm Edward. And what's your name, gorgeous?"
I blushed again. What's up with me blushing! "I'm Isabella. But call me Bella."
"A beautiful name, for a beautiful lady." He grabbed my hand and kissed it. Again I blushed.
My hand felt like it was on fire, but without the pain. I loved it.
"You want to dance with me?"
I smiled. "Sure."
I got up and moved to the dance for as a new song came on.
I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'
I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'
He grabbed my hips so I can move closer to him. I wrapped my arms around his neck and swayed my hips.
Typical and hardly
The type I fall for
I like it when the physical
Don't leave me askin' for more
I'm a sexy mama
Who knows just how to get what I wanna
What I wanna do is bring this on ya
Back up all the things that I told ya
He moved his head to my neck and nuzzled it a little bit. Damn it felt good.
You've been sayin'
All the right things all night long
But I can't seem to get you over here
To help take this off
Baby can't you see
How these clothes are fittin' on me
And the heat comin' from this beat?
I'm about to blow, I don't think you know
I turned around and I pussed my ass to his hips. I could feel his erection and boy did it feel good.
"Fuck," He growled into my neck. I may have got a little wet.
I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'
I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'
You say you're a big boy
But I can't agree
'Cuz the love you said you had
Ain't been put on me
I moved my way down and back up. My hands where above my head, feeling his abs. Holy mother fucker. He felt ripped. My panties were ruined a little bit more.
I wonder if I'm just too much for you
Wonder if my kiss don't make you just
Wonder what I got next for you, what you wanna do?
Take a chance to recognize
That this could be yours
I can see just like most guys
That your game don't please
Baby can't you see
How these clothes are fittin' on me
And the heat comin' from this beat?
I'm about to blow, I don't think you know
"Stop. If you don't, I don't think I can stop myself." His eyes where dark with lust. I decided to tease.
"Stop yourself from what?" I turned back around and smirked.
"From taking you to my car and fucking you hard and fast," he breathed into my ear.
Oh god.