I'm sooooooooo sorry! sorry fo the long delay! I've had writer's block for a long time now . Im so sorry. This chapter was a little tricky since it had so many kits. I hope they arent too OOC, this chapter was a request and none of the characters are mine. ^^ I hope you enjoy it :/ and sorry if the ending isnt too good, I kinda rushed it. Anyways enjoy and no flames!


Berrykit, Sorrelkit, Pinekit, Gingerkit, Robinkit and Redkit

A small cream she-kit stirred in her nest, waking up in a flash. She bounced right onto her paws and shook her sister awake. "Sorrelkit!" she mewed. "Wake up!"

The small dilute tortoiseshell looked up at her sister, her ears back softly. "W-what is it?" she mewled.

"Let's go on an adventure!" Berrykit mewed, bouncing around her sister excitedly.

"W-where w-would we go?" Sorrelkit replied, her voice soft and low.

Berrykit stopped for a moment to think. "Well….hmmm..." she mewed, her mind blank, until she noticed Pinekit and his siblings slipping away from the nursery.

"Hey Pinekit!" Berrykit called out to the russet kit. "Where are you going?"

Pinekit turned around, a slightly annoyed look in his dark green eyes. "None of your business." He mewed, an edge to his voice. "Why don't you go back to your nest with your mommy and leave us alone." The tall tom kit whipped around and stalked away after his sisters.

Berrykit frowned for a moment. "What got under his fur?" she mewled and shrugged. Turning to her sister, she added. "Sorrelkit come on! Let's go after them!"

"I-is it okay with them?" Sorrelkit mewed, unsure and padded over to Berrykit.

Berrykit shrugged. "I wanna know what they're up to." She replied and disappeared through the nursery. Sorrelkit followed her more slowly.

Berrykit glanced around after they had come out of the nursery. "Where could they be?" she wondered. A smile appeared in her face after a while. "I guess we'll have to find them…"

Pinekit found a secret way out of camp and quickly urged his sisters out. "Hurry up!" he mewed, glancing over his shoulder.

Gingerkit turned to her brother, her eyes slightly narrowed. "You do know where we're going, right?" she said, a challenge in her tone.

Pinekit snorted and growled slightly, "of course I know," and pushed her the rest of the way out. After he was also out, Pinekit took the lead instantly. "Follow me," he ordered.

"Hey Pinekit!" A voice alerted the russet kit. He bared his teeth in annoyance as he recognized the voice of Berrykit. "Wait up!" she called.

"What are you doing here?" Pinekit mewed, his tail twitching.

Berrykit stopped in front of him and glanced at him with broad, dark pink-red eyes, a smile on her face. "We want to go with you!" she mewed, the excitement evident in her voice.

"T-that's i-if it's ok with you." Sorrelkit added, coming up behind his sister.

"N-" Pinekit opened his mouth to reply but was interrupted by Redkit. "Of course you can come." She mewed. Pinekit shot her a questioning glance.

"It will be great to have you with us." Robinkit added. Pinekit gave a long sigh. "Fine, they can come." He mewed and took the lead once more.

"But you better not slow us down." He called over his shoulder, his gaze directed at Berrykit.

Pinekit led the kits through the pine woods, glancing around every few minutes. "I should take the lead, you look lost." Gingerkit mewed, coming up beside him.

Pinekit was about to protest but Gingerkit had already gone out ahead. "She-kits…" he growled underbreath and padded after her. After long moments of seeing only pines, Pinekit had had it.

He trotted ahead of his sister and turned to face her, his nose only inches from hers. "Look, I'll lead." He mewed firmly, "you look more lost than a cross-eyed fox."

Without giving her a chance to argue, he whipped around and stalked ahead.

Berrykit always hung in the back, along with her sister and Redkit, who wanted to keep them company. She spotted the small dilute tortoiseshell stop, her ears swiveled nervously around.

"We need to turn back," she whispered, her sightless amber eyes wide.

Sorrelkit looked at her, her ears back and her green eyes wide. "W-what i-is it?" she asked, her voice not more than a whisper.

Berrykit looked at them now, her ears twitching. "Something wrong?" she asked, her voice edged with curiosity.

"I-I can sense a dog…" Redkit mewed, her sightless amber eyes glowing eerily.

Both Sorrelkit and Berrykit gasped. "We need to tell the others!" Berrykit exclaimed, alerting Robinkit up ahead.

"What's going on?" Robinkit mewed, getting slightly anxious.

"Redkit can sense a dog..." Sorrelkit replied, her tail tucked between her legs as she flattened her body slightly against the ground.

A surprised yowl alerted the four she-kits. "Pinekit, Gingerkit!" Redkit exclaimed, rushing ahead towards the noise. The other kits followed quickly after her, reaching the other two as fast as they could.

Berrykit's eyes widened as she saw Gingerkit and Pinekit fighting with a medium-sized dog. Without hesitation, she jumped into the battle along with Redkit and Robinkit. Sorrelkit hesitated for a moment before leaping at the brown dog.

The kits wriggled around the dog, nipping at its heels and scratching at it with razor-sharp claws. The dog growled and tried to bite Redkit, but Pinekit rammed his small head against it and scratched it across the face with a paw.

With a growl, the dog reared up on his hind legs, knocking the kits off him and quickly lunging for Sorrelkit. The world seemed to freeze for a moment as Berrykit saw the dog gape its jaws to grasp her sister between his teeth. Suddenly, a large tom rammed against the panting dog. The swift cat snaked around the dog's legs to unbalance him and lashed at its throat.

The brown canine reared up in surprise, batting at the loner with clumsy paws. The brown tom smirked, ducking under the blow and scratching at its eyes fiercely. The dog snarled and turned tails, running back to where it came from.

The tom spun around, facing the young cats with a hard stare. "Come with me," he growled. "I will take you back."

The kits hesitated before following, their tails dragging in the dust and their heads hanging.

After some time, the tom halted, exactly at the entrance. "Go inside, I will not follow you," he mewed sharply. "Go now, and don't ever leave your home again unless you are old enough." He turned around and stalked away.

The kit's gulped as the ShadowClan leader now loomed over them. "Where were you?" she growled, her eyes narrowed into slits.

Berrykit faintly noticed her mother, Quietwish, listening intently by the nursery. Pinekit looked to the side for a moment, before replying. "We were exploring." He replied boldly.

Blazefoot walked over to them now, looking over at the kits.

Aspenstar sniffed. "I smell dog on all of you." She mewed, an edge to her voice. The shocked hisses and murmurs of the other cats rose, but she silenced them with a flick of her tail. "I will not listen to your excuses." She growled, her eyes narrowed in both concern and rage.

Gingerkit looked up, ready to talk back to her but held her tongue. "You will be taking prey to the elders and queens as well as taking care of the elder's pelts and the queens and elder's bedding for two moons." She mewed firmly, her voice icy. "Start now." She stalked away.

Blazefoot looked at the kits; his eyes narrowing in sympathy as he gave each kit a friendly nuzzle on the head. "It's ok," he whispered. "I'll convince her to ease up on the punishment…"

Quietwish herded her kits to her for a moment and gave them each a rough lick on the head. "I'm just glad both of you are safe…"she whispered as a familiar scent hit her nose. After the kits went to do their duties she whispered the name softly, her lips curling in a grateful smile…

"Small…Thank you for rescuing our kits…"


I'm still accepting requests for chapters with your kits, just post the description and personality on the reviews and I will start working on them as soon as i can ^^ thanks for reading my story, you guys rock :3